Episode Three- The Ruins- Chapter Nine

Chapter Nine

The team and Kenmore beam into a new transporting area once again and immediately spread out to the sides of the opening.  They stalk forward down the new shortened hallway.  From what they can tell, there are still no guards, which had gone from vaguely disheartening to downright mind-messingly irritating as Hell.  Ronon and Sheppard peer around their corners.  Nothing.  The walkway is clear just like the other two they had been on before.  Dead ahead Sheppard sees, just like before, an open door.  This time though it’s room is more brightly lit than the cell room he and Kenmore had been kept in or the Asgard filing cabinet room.  It didn’t help though.  Sheppard can make out a machine at the end of the room but any further details other than it was a machine would be a big fat ‘No.’  However the wall on the other side of the machine had something new, rust.  John couldn’t imagine the Asgard leaving something in regular use to rust, lose its aesthetic appeal maybe like the awkwardly industrialized service shaft/air vent hole but not rust.  Apparently no one had been down here for years.  And that was actually a really comforting thought.

He and Ronon start around the perimeter, leading the others slowly, just in case.  Still nothing.  No one.  Not even red flashing lights like in the cell room.  Sheppard stops just before the door frame.  He looks over at Ronon, a couple of steps behind him, and nods.  The Satedan nods back, edges up to Sheppard’s side, then rushes across past the open door and takes up position on the other side.  There’s a heartbeat of setup then both men jump in front of the opening, weapons up and faces determined to fire.  Then Sheppard’s determination falls away, replaced by shock, really bad shock, and their weapons drop.  Although John’s drop is considerably slower than his best friend’s.

“Holy crap.”

Not good.

The team and Kenmore step into the room and Sheppard’s initial shock quickly passes to Teyla, Kenmore, and McKay.  Sheppard had been right.  It was a machine that filled the square niche in the wall directly opposite the open door and what a horrific sucker it is.  The contraption is rigged all the way up to the ceiling with a gleaming frame.  It had some sort of strange deep bowl attached to an arm that extended from underneath a solid metal slab, the base of the frame bowled out from underneath the slab, and what John had thought was rust was definitely not rust.  The whole machine and that metal wall behind it are splattered in old, dried blood.  In fact, the wall looked practically painted in it.  John didn’t lean forward, he really didn’t want to know what the bowled out base’s paint job looks like.  He looks off to the right wall.  In rows and columns from the ceiling to the floor, there’s a sort of widely spaced, maybe two feet max, grid of more of those cabinets again.  God, how much information did you need to store?  How many people did they take?  The vision of that army he had hoped for but never got comes back to mind.  Sheppard looks away, again.  On their immediate left, the wall is covered from half the wall down in Asgard databases.  All brightly lit themselves, clearly not at a loss for power, the only thing they were missing were operation stones but Rodney could make quick work without them anyway.  They take it all in.

“What is this place,” McKay asks, utterly enthralled by the contraption ahead of him.

Kenmore gestures at the bank of computer databases, “Maybe one of those could tell you.”

“Huh,” Rodney looks over at her, she nods towards the databases, and he follows her view.

“Oh,” Rodney shakes his head, snapping out of it, whatever ‘it’ was.

He walks over to the databases.  Kenmore hadn’t needed to point them out to him, John knew Rodney had noticed them the moment he walked in but it was just taking in everything else that sort of gave him pause first.  Rodney plugs his computer tablet in and Teyla walks over to be at her scientist friend’s side.  John returns to looking at the cabinets again.  Their locking mechanisms bore little green lights just like the other ones had except for one in the middle of it all with a single bright red one.  He made a mental note to keep Kenmore away from that one.  It was sort of like the dangling carrot and he didn’t need this rabbit biting and getting her lucky foot blown off.  There’s a strange sound and suddenly the entire upper half of the database wall lights up with displays not unlike the jumpers’ HUD popping up from the top of the databases now undoubtedly controlled by the one Rodney was plugged into and Rodney announces unnecessarily…

“I’m in.”

“Then where the hell are we?”

“It’s not a database like that.”

Sheppard turns to him, “Then what sort of database is it like?”

McKay looks over the display immediately in front of him.  The screen shows lines in three columns; the first takes up half of the screen width and the rest is split between three definitely smaller columns, the first of the three about a ¼-inch larger than the following equal sized two.

“They’re records.  See here,” Rodney points to one of the lines, “That’s a name followed by two dates.”

“What is this place,” John walks up behind him, eyeing the display like John could understand it.

“I don’t know yet.  There aren’t any defining markers like I’m used to.”

“Since when has that stopped you?  Figure something out.”

“No, really?  Because I was thinking that’s exactly what I mean.  As far as I can tell, this is it.  They’re just names and more names and, oh would you look at that, more names.”

Suddenly the sound of a well-oiled cabinet sliding smoothly open comes from behind Sheppard.  He turns quickly as his team’s attention is drawn to exactly what he figured it would be drawn to but had hoped it didn’t have to be, Kenmore’s standing next to one of the green-lighted cabinets now open.  She looks in it, doesn’t look particularly shocked or anything else, just pretty normal for her, then she reaches up, pushes the light of the locking mechanism, and the cabinet easily closes.  She bends over and opens another one, same reaction, she closes it then turns around and does the same thing again.  McKay and Teyla go back to the Asgard computer database.  Sheppard looks over at Ronon and the Satedan’s eyes meet his.  John casually gestures his head back towards Kenmore, Ronon nods and goes back to keeping an eye on the Lieutenant like he was already doing just a little bit more blatantly than before, and Sheppard goes back to Rodney and the database.  Sheppard points…

“What do those dates mean?”

“Those aren’t dates, they’re times,” he points at the screen heading, “That’s the date.  I think I might be able to access more of them.”

As McKay starts working and Sheppard and Teyla wait and watch the door, Kenmore, reopening and leaving open one of the bottom cabinets, stands on the tiny rims of its sides and starts opening and closing the cabinets that had previously been out of her reach.  Balancing herself carefully, and it is tricky in a pair of combat boots, Ronon watches Kenmore out of the corner of his eye stretch to unlock the cabinet above the red-lit one.  He watches her hand pass in front of the red mechanism and suddenly the red-lit mechanism goes green and its cabinet opens.  With a yelp of surprise, Kenmore jumps off her twin tiny balance beams and runs away from the newly opened cabinet in her freak out like a poltergeist opened the thing just to spook her.  The others look back at her.  Sheppard turns a disapproving glare on Ronon for a moment, I thought I told you to watch for that, before looking at Kenmore.  What the—she actually looks kinda scared as she stares from a distance at the cabinet.

“I didn’t touch it,” she says.

Like that’s believable.

“You’re hand passed in front of it,” Ronon says.

Kenmore looks at him.

“But I wasn’t that close.”

She raises her hand to gesture with her next words then starts again as the cabinet suddenly slides closed and the locking mechanism goes red again.  She stares at it then at her hand then back at it.  Then she moves over to stand at Sheppard’s side, positions herself, and waves her hand again.  Again the locking mechanism goes green and the cabinet slides open.  She straightens.

“Wow, I really underestimated the range on that thing.”

No kidding.  Those things usually required you to be swiping up close and personal in Atlantis not across the room.  Kenmore walks back over to the cabinet and looks inside.

“Oh my God,” That wasn’t good, John keeps his eyes on her, “Well, I think I found out what this room is,” she looks up at Teyla, Rodney, and Sheppard, “It’s a morgue.”

McKay turns back to her with a sour expression.

“How would you know that?”

“Oh gee, I don’t know.  I think the body in the drawer was a huge indicator.”

Kenmore looks back down at the cabinet’s contents.  Sheppard, Teyla, and Ronon walk over to her, Rodney keeping as big a distance from some most likely diseased corpse as he possibly could.  Sheppard steps up beside Kenmore while Teyla and Ronon take up the other side.  Yep, she was right, there is a body in the cabinet.  Not that John thought she was lying, but still…

“The only problem I’m having—,” Rodney began.

John looks at him, “The only problem?”

Ignoring John’s interruption, Rodney goes on, “Is I don’t know what these symbols mean.  I’ve encountered a lot of Asgard symbols but I’ve never met these before.”

“Are they something new that only these Asgard have come up with like a sort of regional dialect thing?”

Kenmore looks up and suddenly points at the symbol designating the last column with the same enthusiasm as the smart kid in class bounces in their seat with a very raised hand when they know they know the answer.

“I know that one.  It’s the same symbol Hermiod and Thor used over their suicide countdown.”

Then suddenly she seemed melancholy at her words.  John looks over at her; wow, that was new.  McKay was not granting sympathy however.

“How would you know that?”

“Excuse me were you the next to last person Hermiod ever hugged before he beamed off the Daedalus?  No so Ha.”

Then she looks funny at the display screen for a moment then up at the ceiling…

“What is this?  Sarcasm?  Why, why am I right?”

Kenmore looks back at McKay’s back as he continues working.  Teyla gives the Lieutenant the oddest look she’s ever given anyone and that was saying a lot considering how long she’s been around Rodney.

“Who are you talking to,” she asks.

“God,” Kenmore replies, “Any deity with a sadistic sense of humor who’ll listen.”

“Uh-oh,” McKay suddenly pipes up.

“What,” Sheppard asks, suddenly alarmed.

“Teyla…”

There was a pause, a really uncomfortable pause.  Oh this is not going to be good.

“What?”

“I found your father.”

There’s a moment of horror.  Teyla’s look is clear distress, the skin between her eyebrows pinches, her eyes look pained, and the rest of her face becomes drawn and taut.  Sheppard hasn’t seen her this bad since her and Keller had returned from her new home planet after discovering that her people had been taken and she worried that her partner, Kannaan, was dead.  Slowly, Teyla walks to Rodney’s side.  He points out a particular line on the new list of names he’d brought up.

“I used Athosia as a baseline and this is what came up.  Emmagan, Torren.  Athosia.  The time he was taken and the date and time, according to how Lieutenant Kenmore is understanding things, he was…killed.  He lasted four days here.”

Teyla’s silent.

“There is a note here beside his name though,” Rodney adds, although he looks like he thought he should be thinking better of telling her it.  Teyla looks at him, waiting, “It says his last words were ‘Teyla’.”

Teyla can’t breathe for a moment.  After so long…this was it.  She had found something of her past.  Something she could reach out and touch, even if it is only a computer screen.  Something she could hear if even the words are coming from someone reading them from a computer screen.  She had secretly always dreamed that one day she and her friends would stumble upon a world in which she would discover family, a brother or sister she had lost either before she was born or so long ago that she did not remember them ever being there.  She had imagined the bad with it and the good.  Them blaming her for their being left behind, for her surviving and growing and flourishing among their people while they languished in the cell of a hiveship and escaped somehow.  She had imagined a warm welcoming embrace…Tears.  John can see the tears welling up in her eyes from here.  What that must have meant to her…to know her father’s last thoughts were of her then…

“Are there, are there any others…that I might know,” she recovers enough of herself to manage to ask.

Rodney goes back to work and brings up another list, looking much more comfortable in this element than the other.

“This is the culling that you and Sheppard witnessed at the end of our first year here.  Your friend Orin’s village.”

“The Wraith took everyone,” she informs him.

“Not quite.  I think Lieutenant Kenmore was right.”

“What do you mean?”

“How long into the culling were the two of you when you saw that beam weapon go off in the middle of the village?”

“Two hours perhaps, it would not have been much longer than that.”

Rodney nods, “That’s when the Asgard’s culling stopped,” he goes on, “And how many were taken?”

“Two hundred.”

“According to this, the Asgard took fifty-three percent of Orin’s village.  The mass beaming must have alerted the Wraith to the fact that the Asgard were using them as cover and they deployed a massive EM beam that could counteract the Asgard beaming technology without disturbing the darts.  Looks like the Wraith didn’t like anyone infringing on their food supply.”

Teyla stares in horror at the screen.  Never, never had she imagined a reunion like this.  As the others wait for their cue to come to Teyla’s aid, Kenmore turns her attention to the body then looks up at Ronon.

“Does he look familiar?”

Ronon glares at her and Sheppard stares.  Who’d have thought she’d do something like that at a time like this?

“Are there any defining marks on him?  Anything that might betray any cultural significance the way your tattoos do or Miss Emmagan’s Glenda the Good Witch of Atlantis routine does?”

Ronon’s glare at her deepens in silence and Sheppard was right there with him for the remark about Teyla especially with the way she was feeling now then the Satedan brings up his weapon and points it at her forehead.

Kenmore holds his look then sighs, “Okay, no help.”

She looks down at the body.

“Sorry dude, the big, strong, silent type’s a little bit slow.”

Kenmore starts to look the body over, stops then smiles, and looks back at the guy’s face.

“Well your wife was a very happy woman.”

Sheppard rolls his eyes, Oh my God, and he quietly pushes his friend’s weapon down, he’d really rather Ronon waste the ammo on Asgard soldiers right now rather than the Lieutenant as long as she was activating things like this drawer still, as Kenmore starts looking back down the body again then stops and pulls the drawer all the way out.  She lifts up on her tippy-toes, stretches, and reaches out for the body’s left big toe and, shocker of shocks, the small metal medallion embedded in the nail.  It’s slightly smaller than the tracking device Teyla’s father had made into a necklace for her when she was a child and she’d been forced to give up when they discovered it was leading the wraith to their presence everywhere they went but other than the slight size difference the two objects looked exactly the same.  Kenmore’s fingertip touches the medal’s center indent and a blue projection shoots out of it:  lines of Ancient writing not Asgard, that much John could tell.  Her fingertip reaches again and the writing vanishes.  Kenmore stands back on her heels, biting her lower lip with a weird expression on her face, then she looks up at Ronon again.

“Would you mind activating that again for me?”

Ronon glares at her for a moment.  Yes I mind.  No I’m not doing it.  He seriously considers saying it out loud but that might lead to the Lieutenant responding back to him and Ronon is always game for never hearing her voice again.  But then his second favorite thought came to mind.  He looks towards Sheppard.  Can I shoot her now?  Sheppard makes a nodding gesture towards the body.  Ronon stares at him.  Are you serious?  Sheppard makes the nodding gesture towards the body again.  Ronon stares his friend and commander down for another moment then begrudgingly obliges him.  John untenses, that was close.  He isn’t sure how long his friend’s consideration for his judgment is going to last.  John has a feeling he’s been pushing it since Athosia.  And he knows Ronon’s tolerance only stretches so thin before it snaps, especially since Michael.  Nothing happens at the Satedan’s touch.  That can’t be right, John reaches over and the toe activates for him.  Kenmore looks at Sheppard.

“What’s the only thing we have in common?”

“The Ancient Gene naturally.”

Suddenly Kenmore dives over and deactivates the toe then looks over at McKay.

“Doctor McKay,” Kenmore says sweetly with a smile, dripping with sugar syrup, “would you come here please.  I think we found something, something Ancient,” she butters him up exaggeratedly.

McKay doesn’t look back.

“Then activate it yourself.”

Kenmore lets out a dramatic sigh.

“Fine.  I guess I’ll have to and then I can be the one to save the day…again.”

Rodney immediately drops everything and walks over.  Sheppard stares at her, Oh you’re good.  McKay cringes but reaches down anyways, Oh you’re really good, and presses the medallion then yanks his hand back as quickly as possible.  But again nothing happens.

“That settles it,” Kenmore says.

“What,” Rodney asks her.

Kenmore reaches forward and activates the toe again.

“Can you look up names on that thing?”

McKay doesn’t respond.  He leans in and angles his head, reads the writing, then rushes back to the computer and the mad scientist is off.  He easily brings up a new screen.

“So what is it,” Sheppard asks him.

“A toe tag.”

That wasn’t what John meant but anyway…

“His name was Dhrian Lawl.  He was taken…ten thousand one hundred thirty-eight years ago.”

They all look back at the body.  Damn.

“What if he was put in here because he knew something,” Kenmore says.

“What,” Rodney asks.

“It makes sense, doesn’t it?  The only way you could find out who he is is with the Ancient Gene naturally.  What if the only way you can get into the drawer is with the Ancient Gene?  That would explain why all the other drawers are empty.  The Asgard couldn’t get in to this one.  No matter how hard they might have tried, and they would have tried.”

“And according to the timeline, this guy was taken when the Ancients were still around.  If you’re right, and I stress the ‘if’ part, that means an Ancient was overseeing this place and the Asgard’s experiments at one point in time,” Rodney adds on.

“What if he saw something that that Ancient didn’t want the Asgard to know about?”

An Ancient like Janus, McKay starts snapping his fingers.  The wheels are working, “We know that the Asgard can reanimate bodies.  The Ancient would have installed precautions, made sure the Asgard had no way of getting to the victim.  So he entombed him in here.”

John sees something click in McKay’s brain.  Without hesitation, Rodney reaches in and starts lifting the body out.

“Help me get him out of here.”

No one wonders why, no one asks why, they all just pitch in and pretty soon they’ve got the body out.

“Get him on the slab,” Rodney orders, gritting his teeth from having a helping hand in supporting the weight of a semi-frozen corpse, “At the very least he might know a way out of this place.”

It’s a struggle but they get the man’s body onto the metal slab.

“Okay, now we have to look for anything, any chemicals, any implements, that might be able to reanimate him.”

They stand back and look at the machine.

“There’s a lot of blood in that bowl,” Sheppard points out, “Looks like it dripped off this slab here.  Are you sure this thing was made to reanimate people?”

“It has to be,” Rodney keeps searching around it, “Why else would it be here?”

“Execution,” Ronon says.

McKay’s face sours momentarily, he does have a point, oh eww, as he examines the bottom part of the frame for clues, a hidden computer panel, something.

“No.  The guy was locked in here because it’s probably one of the only places that can store him and the Asgard have kept this room fully powered ever since the Ancients left the Pegasus Galaxy, that much I was able to find out.  So, taking into account that and the fact of what this room is, this machine has to be for reanimation.  We just need to find the control panel.  You know what indications to look for.”

Ronon, on the right, helps McKay, on the left, dig his fingernails into any seam they can see or feel on the bottom part of the frame.  Sheppard checks the right side of the frame going up to the ceiling, and his hands off cautious inspection makes it clear he isn’t sure he’s buying that this thing was meant to reanimate people, while Teyla carefully checks the wall immediately to the left of the frame for any computer panel seams.  Kenmore leans against the lever so rusted by time and, if anyone bothered to look hard enough at its joints and its own seams, blood that it can support her weight and looks up at the part of the frame on the ceiling.

“Good God, the blood even got up there.”

Ronon straightens up and both he and Sheppard look up at the ceiling then back at Kenmore with mutual frowns.  If she wasn’t going to help…Shut up, Ronon feels his throat vibrate with the deep, barely audible, guttural growl then he goes over to help Sheppard struggling hard with a seam he’s found.  The Colonel’s managed to get more than just the tips of his fingernails in between, he might have stumbled onto something here.  Kenmore’s eyes narrow and she leans forward slightly then she stops leaning on the lever, she takes a step back from it, and looks at it.  She mutters a quick prayer in Latin, Sheppard hears it behind him, that was unusual these days perhaps her education was as Ivy League as his was, as she makes the sign of the cross over herself then lunges at the lever, throwing her entire weight and gravity down on it.  Suddenly an ocean blue sheet of laser light drops down from the ceilinged part of the frame.  Teyla turns and tries to get clear of the machine just in case but only manages to brace herself in a panic against the wall beside it.  The light passes through the body’s neck.  The severed head hits the bowl, the bowl’s rusty arm dips stiffly which causes the head to bounce out of it rather than staying in it.  Kenmore dives and catches the head like a football player cradles the perfect catch and looks back to see a piece of the metal wall behind the machine slide down.  The slab suddenly flips up and flings the body inside the opening then the slab goes back to being a slab and the opening in the metal closes back up as seamlessly as before.

Sheppard and his team go from gapping at the machine to gapping at Kenmore.  Drop jawed, she honestly looks shocked.  She looks down at the head, the dead face looking up at her with foggy eyes.

“Sorry,” she tries at the severed head.

 

 

There’s complete silence in the transporting area.  From inside the semi-circular interior, Ronon takes up guarding the left side of the hallway with Sheppard at his elbow while Teyla guards the right side. McKay is plugged back into the panel of buttons working on getting them able to beam to another level.  And Lieutenant Kenmore stands in the center of the circle by herself, quietly and trying to be abnormally resilient in light of the fact that she’s holding a severed head upside down, face out in front of her, between her hands.  Rodney makes another one of his occasional glances at her.  She keeps staring straight ahead with a strained, almost hysterically perky smile on her face.  Wow, she really is trying.  John had stopped looking back, it was too creepy.  Finally, Rodney can’t take it anymore…

“Will you stop smilinglike that?  It’s creepy.  And why are you holding it that way?”

Kenmore’s smile becomes just a bit more hysteric.

“I’m afraid.”

McKay looks at her, even Teyla, Sheppard, and Ronon do.  They hadn’t expected her to admit to something like that, especially to any of them.

“Why,” the scientist asks.

“I’m afraid if I turn him over and hold him by his hair,” her voice breaks in a squeak on that final word.  Oh God, Sheppard feels himself brace against Ronon.  She takes a moment to collect herself, “that…,” the smile breaks a little and her brows furrow almost in a panic, “that stuff might fall out.”

McKay suddenly recoils like he’s trying to be the wall.  Sheppard grimaces.

“Rodney get back to work,” he orders.  If Kenmore can feel that thing thawing in her hands, then Sheppard didn’t want her turning that thing over either.  And the sooner they could get rid of it, the better.  It might be a key but it was a God-awful one.

McKay begrudgingly goes back to his work but he keeps as far away from Kenmore and the head as possible.  Any closer for an extended length of time and the fibers of his jacket would fuse with the wall.

“I’m going to beam us to the first normal level.”

Kenmore nods, “I’m good with that.”

McKay rolls his eyes.

“Good, I’m so glad I could accommodate your wishes.  I wasn’t asking you.  There.  Here we go.”

In a flash, they were gone.

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Episode Three- The Ruins- Chapter Eight

Chapter Eight

Kenmore straightens up as Sheppard stares at the barrel and extended arm of his best friend and behind Ronon is Teyla, equally with gun ready but thankfully with the control to refrain from shooting first and asking questions later, and almost crouching behind her is Rodney clutching his computer tablet with fingertips poised to type in any help he can get them.  And then Sheppard notices it, the hall is a whole ten feet long, just some short stubby little thing, and it ends in a rounded out alcove.  On one side of the alcove’s rounded wall is a large long panel full of the same sort of buttons Kenmore and he had just dealt with in their cell room.  John stares at it, Well, I’ll be damned, it is like an elevator.

“What the hell is wrong with you people,” Rodney exclaims.

Oh that reminds me…John grabs Kenmore’s arm and yanks her over to him so he could get right in her face as the others lower their weapons or stop cringing over their computer.

“What the hell were you thinking,” he shouts in her face.

“I had the element of surprise.”

“No, you had the element of he almost blew your head off.”

“I ducked.”

“Barely,” Sheppard glares at her and that little voice comes back.  She has a point, almost doesn’t count…“Shut up!”  Kenmore stares at him, she hadn’t said anything but luckily she had looked like she planned to.  He hadn’t wanted to say that out loud, to reveal that about himself even if no one knew what was going on inside his head.  Sheppard’s expression sours at her and he sort of tosses her back to where she had been.  He looks at his team as Kenmore moves off to play lookout.

“How’d you guys get here?”  His temper cools to a growl.

“Rodney saw the Asgard beams take you and believed that the main cave had to be some sort of transporting pad.  It took him some time using the life signs detector to find the energy readings for a control panel but Ronon and I made quick work of the wall and Rodney likewise made quick work of the control panel’s computer,” Teyla answers him quickly.

“’Some time’,” the hostility disappears, “How long have we’ve been gone?”

“Seven hours,” Ronon says.

Sheppard and Kenmore glance at each other.

“We just woke up a few minutes ago,” he informs the others.

“Yeah, we know.  We figured it was you messing with the power systems,” Rodney snorts.

“Did that help any,” Sheppard asks.

“Helped you, for us—and by ‘us’ I mean me—it was a living hell,” John gives McKay his ‘Get a move on with it Rodney’ look and Rodney takes the hint, “but otherwise no.  Their power grid is still very much large and very much in charge.”

Kenmore’s still playing lookout, to what Sheppard didn’t know, but she asks, “How many are there?”

McKay looks at the back of her head, “I don’t know.”

She looks back at him.

“You don’t what?”

Rodney shifts uncomfortably.  This was difficult for him to admit to his closest friends, it was downright impossible in front of Zelenka, and Kenmore…but to Rodney’s credit and that self-growth he’d been working on for about a year now with his girlfriend, Doctor Jennifer Keller, the scientist is willing to try.

McKay starts slowly, “I don’t kn—“

“You don’t know,” Kenmore cuts him off, shocked.

McKay doesn’t like the tone of her voice.  He comes out from the transporting area.

“Yes, I don’t know.”

Kenmore turns her whole body to face him.

“Why not?  You’re the genius.”

“Excuse me, Little Miss Captain America, but I was not the idiot who got themselves beamed out by the enemy.”

“No, you weren’t,” she gestures at Sheppard, “He was.”

“Hey,” Sheppard takes offense.

“What?  I told you to stop.”

Sheppard shoves his finger in her face again, “In case you hadn’t noticed, Missy, I don’t take orders from you.”

Kenmore isn’t backing down for a moment, “Since when has ‘Stop,’ ‘Wait,’ ‘Don’t’ meant anything other than,” she starts tightly flailing her arms, “Danger Will Robinson, freakin’ danger?”

Sheppard, to Ronon’s delight—he looks on with a smile, About time—takes another step into her face but before he can say anything, and he was more than seething enough to do it as viciously as he possibly could, there’s a power hum from the transporting area.  They all look at the empty, semi-circular space.

“Someone’s coming,” McKay announces, like anyone needed him to, in a small panicked voice.

“Get out of sight,” Sheppard orders.

Without hesitation, they split up and take up positions on either side of the gap.  Sheppard with Teyla behind him and Ronon behind her on the left and Kenmore with McKay behind her on the right and, ironically, once again they’re waiting for the enemy to come from either side of an open entrance.  Kenmore blindly reaches behind, taps McKay, then leaves her hand, palm up, out to him.  He pulls his pistol out of its holster and puts it in her palm.  They all are careful to not look down the mini-hallway into the transporting area, they have to be content to simply hear for the new arrival.  Well, ‘simply’ is perhaps not the best word…

In the silence, Kenmore whispers, “Doctor McKay?”

“What,” McKay, whispering for once, answers back.

“Where were their heads?”

“Inside armor.”

Kenmore sighs, takes a moment to collect herself, then…“Where inside the armor?”

“Behind the shielding.”

“Is it like Goa’uld personal shields?”

“I don’t kn—“

Before he can finish, Kenmore lets out a big sigh of exasperation and looks to the others across the gap.

“Does anybody have a knife,” she whispers a little bit louder.

No one immediately answers her but Sheppard looks back at the other two members of his team behind him, knowing that both carry knives and are pretty damn good with them.

“Does anybody know how to throw one,” Kenmore tries again.

No one steps up to the plate but Kenmore tracks Sheppard’s eyes to Ronon, the one set of eyes that had been staring her down the entire time.  In the pause came the sound of someone beaming in.  Kenmore raises her eyebrows at Ronon, Well?

Ronon just keeps staring at her, frozen, like he was a really dangerous looking, pissed piece of stone.

They hear the footsteps of the Asgard soldier start towards them.  Sheppard looks back at her.  There isn’t genuine venom in her eyes like he thought there would be, she just looks frustrated and pissed off by it.

“God, you’re all so useless,” she whispers.

Then she reaches up, slips her dog tags off from around her neck, and blindly tosses them down the hallway.  The footsteps stop as the tags can be heard bouncing off the side wall then skittering to a stop on the floor somewhere down there.  Kenmore whistles as she simultaneously pops out from behind the wall’s edge.  The Asgard, that had been bending over to pick up the tags, has a split-second to try to look up before Kenmore fires.  The blast is incredibly loud in the barren space and silence and the hallway funnels it into a resounding echo.  A hole the size of a quarter cracks in the soldier’s helmet.  The Asgard’s legs give out underneath it.  It falls to its knees then collapses to the floor, dead.  Kenmore walks forward and collects her tags as the others come out from hiding.  McKay stares in shock at the downed soldier.  Deep colored blood, purple tinged at its edge, seeps out of the hole in the helmet and starts quickly spreading out from the body.

“But how,” he gapes as Kenmore slips her tags back on and buries them underneath her shirt again.

“A personal shield isn’t useful if you don’t get the chance to turn it on first.”

“But how did you know he didn’t walk in here with it turned on already?”

“I didn’t, but I know you can’t transport with a personal shield activated.  There’s too much disharmony generated by the field’s frequency in relation to the transporter’s frequency.”

She turns the pistol over in her hands and slaps it against McKay’s chest.  He takes back his weapon and Kenmore starts back to the transporting area.  McKay stares up at the rest of his team.  They don’t know what to say.  What was there to say?  Suddenly they hear dozens of clicking sounds and look over.  Kenmore is doing the exact same thing she did in the cell room, she’s slapping ever button on the panel she can, one or multiples at a time.  McKay bolts for her.

“Hey!  Stop that.”

He yanks her hands off the panel and shoves her away from it.

“It didn’t react to me,” she told him.

McKay examines the panel for the damage she might have done to it.

“No kidding.  And me showing up with a computer didn’t give you the tiniest clue as to how this thing is operated,” Kenmore glares at the back of his head and Sheppard, Ronon, and Teyla, picking their way over the Asgard Super Soldier body, move into the transporting area to join Kenmore and McKay.

Rodney plugs his computer tablet back into the panel and starts working again, “It only responds to the Asgard.  There’s a mechanism in the gloves of their suits that activates everything.”

“Well, get us out of here.”

“What does it look like I’m doing?”

McKay works for a few moments more with Kenmore hovering over his shoulder watching him intently as Sheppard stands a step or two behind them with Teyla and Ronon covering the two sides of the area’s opening just in case.  Ronon nudges Sheppard’s back.  The Colonel takes a step back to his friend but keeps his focus on the dueling Lieutenant and Astrophysicist.

“When you broke out of the cell, why did you take her with you?”

“I didn’t break out, she did.  And, frankly, I’m glad she took me with her.”

Ronon snorts disdainfully, “You let her break you out?”

“I didn’t really have a choice.”

“Why?”

“She was the only who knew what she was doing.  I’m not familiar with Asgard technology.”  He knew it was a lame excuse.

“How many more times are you ‘not really going to have a choice’ with her?”

John caught the dig with a smile, “As many more times as she proves useful.”

Finally Ronon smiles, That’s perfectly fine with me to use her, and goes back to his watch, Sheppard steps back forward again, and Teyla glances at them both from the corner of her eye.  McKay finishes up and announces…

“It’s done.  All that’s left is to pick—“

As McKay lifts his finger, Kenmore suddenly reaches past him and slams her finger against the first lowest button.  There’s a flash of Asgard light as all of them are beamed out.

 

 

The team arrives in another transporting area.  There’s a moment of shocked silence then Rodney turns and looks up at the Lieutenant; they all look at her.

“I can’t believe you just did that.  What is your problem?  We had one chance, one chance of getting out of here, and you blew it.  The system resets after each use.  I have to do this all over again.  Which gives them, you do remember who ‘them’ are right, more time to hunt us down and kill us.”

Kenmore faces the irate scientist head on without flinching nor seeing what his problem was.

“Yeah, that’s why I picked one of the lowest levels.  I didn’t want to land right on the first level.  Main levels are some of the most protected, and, uh, whoever wants to start sniffing around the bowels of hell?”

I’ll be damned, she’s done it again.  What was that, like three points now?  Sheppard looks at the scientist.  McKay’s temporarily catatonic at the fact that Kenmore has scored another point on him then he brings up his finger and begins to hold court over the Lieutenant the way only Doctor Rodney McKay can…

“Listen little girl—,” to which Kenmore promptly rolls her eyes and starts to walk away…Sheppard reaches out and grabs her arm once again yanking her back to him.  She looks up at him, her mouth opened and ready to protest.

“Look, I know you haven’t been here long and you don’t play well with others—,” she looks away from him too and then just stares ahead of her, past him, with this odd expression on her face but Sheppard wasn’t going to let her get away that easy, “Listen to me.”

She doesn’t respond.  He yanks her closer to him.  He sees the puffs of his breath shift the hairs of her nearest eyebrow.

“Look at me when I’m talking to you,” she doesn’t.  Aw damn,

“What?  What is it?”

“Door.”

They look up in the direction she’s looking and right across from them is an open door to a darkened room.  There is a round, quick flash of white light like someone’s shining a flashlight at them from in there.  John feels the urge to suddenly crouch down when the flash disappears then comes back then disappears then comes back again.  No, no one was in there; the light is disappearing then reappearing too rhythmically, something is passing in front of it at regular intervals.  But where was the light coming from?  John felt his hold on Kenmore loosen.  She slowly slides over to the pseudo-cover of the wall in the woefully overexposed hallway again in front of Teyla as the rest of Sheppard’s team fall back to the pseudo-cover of the hallway’s walls.  After a moment, Kenmore stands up and starts walking forward normally.  Sheppard hisses at her…

“Kenmore.”

“There’s no one here,” Kenmore whispers back, “Listen.”

They do.  Teyla looks over at Sheppard.

“She is right,” the Athosian whispers.

Sheppard looks back at Kenmore, “Then why are you whispering?”

“Because you are.”

Oh, Sheppard eases up and Kenmore walks out onto the walkway and starts walking the perimeter.  They follow her.

She steps into the darkened room, the rest of the team behind her.  It’s not dark from a lack of lighting, just broken-down, on-it’s-last-legs lighting dangling by its wires from broken panels in the ceiling a regular height above them; probably to clear the height of the Asgard with their soldier suits on.  It was kind of disturbing and handy to know that they spent enough of their time in those suits to decorate their locations based off of those measurements rather than the normal Asgard height which John already knew was a lot smaller than his.  It told him that all you really had to get around were those suits which Kenmore just proved was possible without too much planning or firepower.  It’s almost too dark to see anything.  Kenmore can make out a table with a couple piles of junk on it but nothing more substantial than that.  There are more lights, smaller green ones, in rows with about a foot spacing in between them going all the way up the walls to their left and right.  The glow from McKay’s computer tablet is enough to light his face not really anything else.  It gives him a pale sickly look, not even like death warmed over, more like death frozen under.

“Give me a second,” he tells them, “I think I can get us some light.”

Everyone stops in their tracks.  After a moment’s tapping in the dark, the secondary backup lights from a secondary generator system somewhere sputter on.  There’s no need to flinch from the transition from light to dark.  The light is marginal at best, the room is gloomily lit and it wasn’t going to get any better.  Sheppard looks at McKay and Rodney shrugs at him, unhappy with his own performance.  Well, he did say some.  The whole room, from what they can tell, is the same sterile silver-white as apparently the rest of the facility.  The rhythmically flashing light was due to it being on the other side of a giant fan with its massive propeller-shaped blades rotating in front of it.  The air system.  Not so elegant but super industrial, apparently the Asgard had since given up their design aesthetic and had instead opted to tear off the door to some sort of maintenance shaft, put a fan in, and consider the place aerated.  Apparently ten thousand years of hiding from the Wraith can do that to a technologically advanced super race. At least the other lights are revealed at last.  One foot by one foot squares with locking mechanisms in their upper right corners like built-in filing cabinets.  All green, all unlocked and there was a proverbial bright spot, the piles of junk on the table turn out to be Sheppard’s tacvest and holster and his P-90 and pistol.  Sheppard walks forward, inspects his gear, nothing is missing, and starts putting it on as the others spread out around the room.  Teyla takes up position by the door.  There wasn’t anybody out there now but there might be if the Asgard figure out that they beamed here instead of the main level.  Ronon walks around taking in the whole room, falling into his trademark pattern of watching for booby traps.  Rodney and Kenmore walk up to the cabinets; Rodney to the left wall, Kenmore to the right.  Sheppard notices Ronon keeping an eye on Kenmore too.  Rodney starts typing on his tablet again.

“Okay, I’m getting minute readings from these.  They don’t seem to be servers or databases of any sort nor are there—,” Rodney gets cut off again by the sound of metal squeaking on metal behind him.  He looks back at the other wall as do the others.  Kenmore has her finger poised maybe an inch away from the green locking mechanism, waiting, as it’s compartment continues opening up.  Rodney rolls his eyes and finishes, “any booby traps.”

He looks to Sheppard for a comforting reprimand to the Lieutenant-who-can’t-seem-to-pay-attention-to-anyone-let-alone-looking-before-she-leapt-which-could-get-them-all-killed, but Sheppard doesn’t notice him, he keeps his eyes on Kenmore.  She’s staring—Was that confused shock?—down into the cabinet the compartment revealed itself to be.  She reaches in, there’s a crackling sound, and her hand comes back out holding a set of neatly folded clothes and other personal items contained in a plastic bag sealed nicely and neatly with a metal strip with glowing blue writing displayed across the metal.  Kenmore looks back at Sheppard, Sheppard looks over at Rodney.  Rodney turns and opens up one of the filing compartments in front of him and, like Kenmore, he reaches in and comes back up with another sealed plastic bag with a different set of clothing and personal effects in it.

“There’s dozens in here,” he says.  He looks up and down his wall at all the other compartments unlocked and still untouched, “Probably in every one of them.”

Sheppard takes a look around the room.  There had to be the personal effects of hundreds of people in here.  What had they stumbled on to?  Sheppard looks back at Rodney, already waiting for John’s next order.

“I think we need to see what the bowels of Hell look like.”

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Episode Three- The Ruins- Chapter Seven

Chapter Seven

Kenmore and Sheppard are sitting against their individual cells’ walls, well at least against the metal triangular columns the bars connect.  At least the bars didn’t zap you when you leaned against them, Sheppard still hasn’t gotten over being pissed at Kenmore; he glares at her from where he sits, as far away from her as possible, the opposite end of the diamond.  And Kenmore continues to stare at the door and its panel.  Suddenly she dives towards the angled wall of her cell that stands between her and that door.  Sheppard’s glare deepens; he’s not biting at that bait.  Kenmore peers at the panel for a moment then feels her pant’s fly.  She looks down at her fly’s buttons, plastic.  Then she grabs at her belt buckle, metal.  She frantically starts pulling her belt off then she starts scratching at the nearest connecting metal pillar in front of her.  When she finally gets some curls of shaved off metal from the bar, she blows at it and the shavings fly out against the force field…and creates little sparks.  John sees the little sparkles and hears them from behind Kenmore.  Kenmore’s face bursts into a shocked smile.  She starts scratching metal against metal again, harder.  After a moment, she slides the buckle along the rut she’s made and gingerly slips it into the path of the force field.  Spark doesn’t even begin to describe it.  The explosion from the buckle hitting the force field rockets the belt across the cell, it hits another of her cell’s walls with a bright green flare and a sizzling sound, and skitters to the floor.  Kenmore jumps back, sucking on her hand.  John wants to laugh, Oh you so deserved that, but he doesn’t even crack a smile.  He works his fingers in his fist he has balanced by the wrist on top of his bended knee.  From his side of his part of the cell, he keeps glaring at her.

“Well that was pretty, why don’t you try it again,” his smart, condescension clear.

“I don’t want to die in a cage.”

Neither does Sheppard.

After a moment, Kenmore retrieves her belt, puts it back on, and turns back to the wall.  She scoots back over to it, takes her dog tags out from underneath her t-shirt and begins gnawing off of one of the tags the rubber that trims them.  Sheppard can’t help but notice the pair of rings dangling from the cheap metal chain alongside the other tag.  He felt himself break a little, sympathize for her just a little:  her wedding ring…and her husband’s.  Apparently she had taken that “Till death do you part thing” as more of a suggestion than an actual rule of marriage.  For a fraction of a heartbeat, he sees Nancy in his mind’s eye in that moment…standing across from him…her hands in his…as he spoke that particular vow.  The on-base chapel, nothing fancy, but it made her look like an angelic gift.  The veil cascading down from the Grace Kelly sort of updo she’d put her hair in.  Him in his dress blues.  His hair for once showing an attempt, however failed, at neat and tidy and respectable.  His heart had been pounding in his chest the moment he saw her step into the doorway and start her procession down the aisle towards him.  It roared in his ears the moment the priest told them to join hands and repeat after him.  John didn’t really know what the priest was telling him to repeat but he knew he was uttering something, he could feel it, and it must have been the right thing because Nancy’s happy, expectant grin just beamed back at him.  Even broader, even happier.  What would he have done if he had lost her then?

Kenmore spits the rubber out then goes back to digging another rut into the metal bar with the raw edge of the tag.  When she’s made some more curls, she blows the curls gently onto the tag edge that had created them then she gently angles the tag into the field, Sheppard watches intently, and instead of an explosion, a fierce looking electrical bolt ignites over the tag and shoots into Kenmore’s hand and up her arm and starts to travel down the metal string the tag dangles from towards her neck.  It never reaches there.  Kenmore jumps back again, cutting off the voltage from its source and the travelling bolt dissipates quickly.  She slumps back on her butt close to the wall between them, nursing her hand.  Ah, hell.  Sheppard scoots over to her, sedately releasing the breath that had caught in his throat the moment he saw that mean looking bolt head for her throat.

“You okay?”

“No interaction,” Sheppard frowns at some area of the ceiling he can barely see where he thought the Asgard’s disembodied voice was coming from.

“Do you have something metal on you, not your belt buckle or your dog tags?”

Sheppard frowns at her, “I’m trying to see if you’re fine?”

“No interaction.”

“I’m fine.  Now what do ya got?”

Sheppard glares at her again but searches his body anyway.  He’s here on his knees face to face with her and he’s trying to be nice the least she could do is give him the benefit of a polite answer or a decent reply that acknowledges the attempt rather than being her apparently usual stubborn, self-absorbed self.  He pats over the shirt pocket over his heart and feels a twin pair of hard things there.  He reaches in the pocket and pulls out his wings.

“Those are perfect,” Kenmore exclaims.

There’s just two big problems.  They look at each other then the wall of laser light between them and Sheppard notices it.  First big problem down…

“It doesn’t go all the way to the ceiling.”

Kenmore looks up too.

“Can you toss one of them over,” she asks him.

Sheppard analyzes it for a moment then starts nodding, “Yeah.  I think I can.”

“No interaction.”

They inch back away from their side of the wall.  Sheppard hefts one of the pair of wings in his hand a couple of times, trying to gauge the height and distance…

“Okay.  One, two, three.”

He pops it up and lets it fly.  It goes up smoothly enough, high enough, but it comes down short.  It clips one of the laser bars and topples into the force field.  It ricochets back out clear of the top of his cell and smacks against the far wall before clattering to the floor.  Sheppard frowns at it then sees a bright red light near the ceiling in the corner of the room start flashing.  He looks back at Kenmore.

“Well that sucks and I think we’re gonna have company soon.”

Kenmore nods.  She starts shifting her wait from knee to knee, eyeing the wing in the palm of his hand.  No use dwelling.  At least they both had a heads up to what’s expected.  He hefts the second and last of the wings in his hand again.

“Last chance.  One…two…,” he takes a deep breath, “three.”

He hefts it again.  Gently this time, maybe too gently.  The set of wings barely makes it over the wall, but it does make it over and it clears the laser bars nicely.  Kenmore catches it on the other side.  Sheppard feels the urge to smile again, that was the second big problem:  that was his favorite pair.

She smiles for him though, slides back over to the metal bar and begins scratching again.  Sheppard winces as he watches her, that was half of his favorite pair.  His first pair, his good luck charms.  He’d have figured a way around these cell walls and kicked her ass if she’d lost them.  Now she’s doing that to them…Something strange is happening though, the curls, rather than scattering from the rut, stick to the wing.  Static electricity, somehow his wing has created static electricity.  When there’s a light dusting of curls clung to the wing’s edge, Kenmore turns it over very carefully in her hands and begins to scratch another rut.  This rut’s closer to the field.  Kenmore scratches hard as hell but less vigorously.  She’s even monitoring her breathing in order to make sure she doesn’t blow any of the curls off the wing’s tip. When there’s another dusting, she digs that wing tip into the rut, holds her breath, and slowly angles the other wing tip into the force field.  Sheppard almost shouts when the wing enters the field and angles a point of it out creating a new bright green laser beam at the door.  Kenmore slowly, gently maintains the beam and guides it to a certain spot on the computer panel that looks like some sort of lens.  As soon as the beam hits the lens, the force field shuts down and the laser light bars retract, opening the cells to each other as well as to the rest of the room.  Kenmore and Sheppard stand up and walk clear of their cell.  Kenmore hands him his wing back and Sheppard promptly goes over and picks up its mate, pockets them again, and looks the open door of his cell over.

“Well that’s a handy trick.  Where did you learn that?”

Kenmore, panting because she finally gets to breath again, manages to say, “Actually…MacGuyver.”

A smile tugs at the corner of Sheppard’s mouth as he goes back to looking at the open cell but Kenmore misses it as she starts concerning herself with the door panel.

“Really,” he asks.

“Kinda, I had to tweak it a little.  It was an episode with a laser web, smoke, and a gum wrapper, oh and a lit cigarette too.”

Sheppard jolts a little with laughter kept to himself.  Then he notices the flashing red light picking up speed, he calls back to her…

“Unless I’m mistaken, I think we just lost more time.”

“I’m working on it.”

Sheppard’s head shoots over to her.

“What do you mean you’re ‘working on it’?  You didn’t see which button he pushed?”

“No.  I think his big ole meat hook of a paw covering up the entire panel had something to do with it.”

Sheppard scoffs.  Should’ve known it.  God damn it, I did it again!

“Oh so don’t cop an attitude with me right now.”

Sheppard slowly looks over at her with a gapped mouth.

“Excuse me.”

“You heard me.”

Sheppard turns to face her.

“You don’t boss me around.  You’re not the leader here.”

Kenmore straightens up and faces him.

“You’re really pulling rank now?  Of all times, now?”

“I’ll pull rank any time I have too.”

“Oh so now you have to pull rank?  Like oh gee we’re running out of time, why don’t I pull rank like that’s really gonna help.”

“When it comes to you, it’s always a help.  And speaking of attitudes, you’ve done nothing but cop an attitude every since you got to this galaxy.”

“Gee, I wonder why!”

Kenmore suddenly notices the flashing, practically strobing, red light go solid red as Sheppard tries to lay into her some more.

“Oh crap.”

“Why?  What,” he looks behind him at the wall and the light as Kenmore goes back to the panel.  Yeah, okay, so ‘Oh crap’ is right.

“We’re out of time,” she says.

He looks at her.

“You figure it out yet?”

She straightens back up again, “No.”

She braces her back against the wall, Sheppard follows suit on the other side of the door.

“So what plan are you going off of,” he asks.

“Kick ass.”

“Oh I know that plan.”

Kenmore nods.  Sheppard gets comfortable against the wall while they wait for the Asgard Super Soldier cavalry to arrive.  So does Kenmore.

“Rodney would’ve figured it out,” he says at last, venting some of his earlier frustrations at her.  After all just because the light went solid and the bad guys were coming didn’t mean he just stopped laying into her, it just meant he had to hold off on it for a moment.

“Doctor McKay doesn’t waste time arguing with you.”

Shows how much you know.

“He still would have done it.”

“Doctor McKay has a computer.”

“And what do you have?”

“Me, myself, and you.”

“Oh that’s kind.”

“You want kind catch me on a good day.”

“You don’t have a good day.”

“Not since I’ve been here.”

Sheppard pauses, she is right.  She really didn’t have a reason to have a good day here.  Then she gasps.  It’s so deep and rattling.  Her eyes widen.  John looks back at the alarm light.

“What?”

The light hasn’t changed and it didn’t look like it was about to.  He looks back over at her.  She’s staring at the cell, only it’s more like she’s staring through it and, granted you can do that, but it wasn’t the same thing.

“What is it,” he asks.  What does she see?

Kenmore steps away from the wall, in her own little world and it was a fast little world.  John could see it from here, her mind was racing a mile a minute.  It was like watching Rodney snapping his fingers before he started typing an equivalent mile a minute on his computer tablet.  It usually meant something good.  Suddenly Kenmore turns to the computer panel and starts frantically pushing every button like an obnoxious little kid left to amuse themselves in an elevator.  John stares at her, That was it.  That was the great conclusion to all of that.  Rodney usually had some harebrained, theoretical astrophysicist scheme that managed to save the day in ten minutes or less, John knew, he timed it a couple of times.

“What the hell are you doing?”

“Being Doctor McKay because I’ve got a computer.”

“What,” John doesn’t get it.

“I’m overloading the computer in this panel.”

Suddenly the door opens then shuts then opens then shuts.  The force field of their cell suddenly flashes on then off before it can fully engage then on again then quickly off again.  The laser bars of their cells disengage then come back on then off then almost immediately on again.  Likewise the pillars that are projecting the bars and the force field start to slide down into the floor then up then they slide down again then up again.  The door to their room starts to slide open then before it can even get halfway shut it slides open again then starts sliding shut again.  Suddenly a flash of gas or steam or something that wasn’t good explodes out of the floor from the junctions where the pillars meet the floor.  The stun shows on Sheppard’s face.  Holy crap, that is a great conclusion.  He dives over, takes up position right behind Kenmore, reaches past her and starts pressing random buttons with her.  The systems start freaking out even more.  Behind him, Sheppard hears the force field fizzing like a shaken bottle of soda, he can hear the metal bars of the cell grinding themselves against the floor with a screech, and the gas or whatever it was is on continuous jet mode now.

“And how is shutting down the whole room supposed to help other than they can’t watch us anymore, which is my personal favorite,” he says beside her ear.

“Asgard surveillance systems work just like any other surveillance system.  Off of grids.  I’m hoping that this won’t just shut down this room but take out the whole grid for this level, which would be my personal favorite.”

“What if this is more like an elevator system than a surveillance system?  They’re gridded too but when one elevator’s computer goes it’s just that particular car, not the whole system.”

“Look around you, Colonel, we were put into cells.  This is more prison than hotel.  They’re surveillance systems.”

“This place hasn’t been accessed in thousands of years.  We’re probably the only ones here.  How do you know we aren’t bringing the whole facility down on us?”

“If what the mural indicated is right and they’ve been using Wraith cullings as cover, how many cullings do you think happen in this area of space alone?”

Sheppard nods.

“Okay, so we’ve probably got an army here that’s just as big a force as they’ve got.”

Kenmore nods.

Suddenly the whole room goes dark and Sheppard hears the cell pillars grind and screech down into the floor again and stay down, and the door to the room stays wide open.  Sheppard forces Kenmore behind him and braces his side against the door panel.  For a moment he doesn’t move relying on the darkness and natural shadows of the room to conceal their positions then he peers out into the brightly lit area outside their doorway.  He can see a huge circular room outside and the center of the room is hollow.  The only way around is a walkway that lines the perimeter of the room with no railings.  It’s all cold, gleaming, brushed metal like nickel out there.  No designs.  Even the doors around the perimeter are simple human design, just plain upright rectangles with no moldings of any sort.  Not even door panels like this one had next to their frames, just…plain.  It told him that all the doors were controlled by whoever is watching them wherever they were watching from.  He feels Kenmore get antsy behind him and when he slides back to push her further back into the shadows, she quickly moves past him and braces herself in the darkness on the other side of the door.  God damn it, she’s gonna do it again, isn’t she?  She looks out into the gleaming room too.

“Where are the other guards,” she whispers, “Shouldn’t there be a crap load of guards coming?”

“Maybe it is like an elevator.  You just blew our room.”

“But that doesn’t answer the light?”

Sheppard nods but he likes no one coming better than everyone coming.  It’s a shame though that they didn’t have any back up.  John had liked the thought of an army to go up against an army.  Two against an entire building’s worth of observant bad guys seems unfair, doable considering McKay and Daniel Jackson managed it but still unfair.

“McKay and Doctor Jackson were in this situation before,” he says.

“Really?  What’d they do?”

Sheppard stares at her, “I thought you read the report.”

“I glossed over the rest of it after I got what I needed out of it.”

Sheppard scoffs to himself.  Of course…he calms himself down a moment to answer her, “McKay got hold of a computer,” Kenmore scoffs, “and he used it to overload some computers somewhere else in the building.”

Kenmore nods, “Distraction bombing.”

“I always carry a little C-4 in my tacvest.  Never know when you might need it.”

“So where do you think it is?”

Sheppard looks up at as much of the ceiling as he can see which is none, just bright gleaming nickel ascending into darkness.  Like he thought, this place is huge.

“I can’t tell if there’s another level above us or below us.”

“They’d be pretty stupid to keep your gear on the same level as us.”

Sheppard looks back at the doors lining the walls of the perimeter he can see.  God this is a crappy choice.  Stay here and maybe die just from waiting here or go out there and die from whatever was out there.  If they had cameras in here, John could only guess the sort of equipment lining the walls of the perimeter.  Kenmore eyes outside as Sheppard tries to figure out what to do next then, with a sigh, she dives out onto the open walkway.  Sheppard curses and dives out into the open after her and…nothing.  In the complete sterile open of the massive room that seems to go on forever just as much above as forever can go below, the two SGC soldiers stand there looking around, again waiting for death to just come and get them.  They look around, dumbstruck.  What about the red light?  Shouldn’t an unmitigated horde be barreling at them from both sides right now like something out of the Lord of the Rings?  But there isn’t anything.  Not even an annoying voice saying, ‘No interaction.’  Here’s Aragorn and Gimli, of course Sheppard was Aragorn, braced to defend Helm’s Deep’s door and what, the Orcs decided to call it a day?  Sheppard looks at Kenmore.

“What the hell,” is the only thing he can think of to say.

Kenmore looks like she was about to shrug at him when her eyes suddenly zero in on something behind him.  Sheppard turns and eyes the perimeter as he and Kenmore fall back to brace themselves against the wall, he sees a gap in it that he hadn’t noticed before.   As his back hits the cold metal wall, he realizes that falling back doesn’t really afford them any good cover and their bodies are generating fuzzy reflections in the metal of the walls but they just didn’t have a choice, there just isn’t any cover here and where everywhere else a gap like that usually indicated a door that he had no problem seeing, Sheppard can only see more wall indicating that over there is definitely no cell door.  Suddenly Kenmore slips past him and begins to creep towards the gap in the wall.  Sheppard follows her.  The other Asgard might be able to see them coming but at least there was going to be a group of them that might not.  Even if their observant buddies warn them, the snakes have to come out of the barrel somehow and as far as Sheppard can tell, this is it.  One way in and one way out.  And if they managed to take down Kenmore, there was still Sheppard behind her.  They might know that, they might not.  Sheppard is personally counting on not.  Kenmore comes to a stop just beside the gap.  When suddenly they hear the distinct sounds of Asgard beaming technology so loud there’s no way whoever beamed in could expect the element of any surprise, either overwhelming force or firepower notwithstanding.  But with sounds, plural, maybe they didn’t need the element of surprise.  John didn’t feel good about this.  Before the silence can even think of taking over, Kenmore doesn’t even bother to check and see if he’s ready to jump with her, she just bolts into the open of the gap.  She barely manages to duck in time as a bright red stun blast flies over her head.  Sheppard hisses, dives after her as he looks down the hall to measure what they were up against or at least what he was going to be up against when the little nut got herself killed by not looking before she leapt again, and stops; he can barely believe his eyes…

“Ronon?”

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Episode Three- The Ruins- Chapter Six

Chapter Six

Sheppard’s eyes pop open.  The smell from the other room and, now that he’s awake, the sizzling sound reaches him as well.  God, it’s been a long, and he means a long, time since he smelled or heard that.  Sheppard lifts himself up on his elbows.  Kenmore’s bed looks boot camp perfect and everyone else…he surveyed the room…is either dead-to-the-world asleep or pretending to be dead-to-the-world asleep, Ronon.  Either way, it would only be a matter of time before the smell reached Rodney let alone the sound.  Keeping that in mind, Sheppard gets out of bed, didn’t bother making it up, and heads for the pantry ‘door’.

Carefully, he lifts open the fur flap and steps into the brightly lit main room.  It was another bright, and judging by the look out the nearest window, it’s a foggy morning on Athosia just like Sheppard remembered his first Athosian morning had been.  The half of the main table closest to the pantry had been cleared away and has been set two on each side with stainless steel plates, silverware, and cups, he recognizes them as standard military-issue.  There’s even cloth napkins for each of the four settings.  Going down the stretch of open table between the sets of settings sitting on top of a warming unit is a stainless steel coffee pot steaming with fresh made coffee, Oh dear God fresh coffee, and a large cast iron skillet full of hot, equally freshly made scrambled eggs, lots of scrambled eggs, scrambled eggs.  Sheppard feels tingling excitement in his stomach just like he did when he was a kid and the first one downstairs on Christmas morning beating his big brother, David, by minutes.  And for those few priceless minutes he had the whole Christmas treasure to himself.  Off to one side, Kenmore, in what looks like a fresh set of her green SGC BDUs, is cooking on something that looks suspiciously like a wood stove and as she moves to set something aside, he sees that she’s cooking in another large skillet.  Exactly what he smelled:  bacon, lots and lots of bacon.  John walks over to Kenmore.  Sitting on a plate on a table beside the stove are some already finished strips of bacon.  Without saying a word, Kenmore reaches out, picks up a fresh hot, crispy strip, and hands it to him.  Sheppard looks at her a moment, judging whether or not it would be a good idea to take something like food from her…but the smell…it’s just too much for his stomach to resist.  John takes the strip, leans back against the table beside the stove, and begins happily munching it.  Rodney did always say his reactions were Pavlovian.  In fact, he believed the exact phrase was: “Look at his eyes, all lighting up again, it’s Pavlovian.”  Bet Rodney didn’t think I’d remember that.  He looks around with a kid’s Christmas smile.  Okay, so maybe she is completely awesome to have on the team.  After all, none of them had ever thought to bring breakfast along on a mission with them before.  Sheppard’s body jolts a little with a silent laugh to himself.

“Relax, Colonel, it’s a piece of bacon,” she looks over at him, “not my respect.”

And Sheppard’s little ray of sunshine is ripped out of the sky.  His smile dies and so does his one-time good opinion of the new Lieutenant.  She goes back to cooking the rest of the bacon as McKay pops out of the pantry.  He looks at the main table, talk about Pavlovian, and then over at Kenmore and Sheppard.  He flails his arms.

“Oh my God, and after all your lecturing me last night about how it was a sentient being.”

Sheppard stops with the half-eaten piece of bacon partially in his mouth ready for his next bite, he takes it back out again, and looks at it.  Kenmore reaches back behind Sheppard, picks up the olive drab package bearing the word BACON stamped in big black capital letters on it, holds it up, and looks back at McKay.

“So you didn’t notice the two big ole packages filled with strips of bacon saying bacon sitting over here yesterday?”

Rodney glares at her and she puts the package back down behind Sheppard.  Feeling it was safe again, Sheppard takes that next bite.  Rodney stalks over to the table, sits down, and begins dishing out a large portion of the eggs to himself, a Rodney-sized large portion.  Sensing that this Christmas morning breakfast is about to be taken away from him by the astrophyscist’s incomprehensibly massive appetite which the scientist blamed on his supposed fast-acting metabolism, Sheppard rushes over and grabs a seat himself.  As the two men dish themselves up eggs, Kenmore brings over the plate now containing all of the strips of bacon and sets it down and the two men immediately set upon it.  Silently, she walks out the front ‘door’ of the hut.  Sheppard and McKay watch her go.  In a corner near the door, Sheppard sees Kenmore’s backpack with a plastic bag poking out of it containing what looks like a set of green BDUs, apparently the dirty ones Kenmore had had on, and right next to the backpack is Kenmore’s tacvest, likewise clean.  Apparently the Lieutenant had done laundry before making breakfast.  Sheppard takes note, Whoever taught her did a damn good job, her efficiency went above and beyond the call of duty for a friggin’ boy scout, and goes back to breakfast with McKay.

“Remember to save some for Teyla and Ronon,” John warns as he takes a bite of egg.

“I do.  I never take anymore than is my fair share.”

“Yeah, well your fair share is enough for three.”

“Hey—,” Rodney takes offense.

“I’m just saying.”

Teyla and Ronon walk in for breakfast and take their own seats then the team turns their collective attentions to breakfast.

“You know…I think we finally found a use for her,” Rodney says through a mouthful of eggs.

Even Ronon nods at this as he scarfs down some eggs.  Sheppard glances at the door.  Teyla nods as she pours herself some coffee and offers to pour for Rodney, which he of course accepts with a happy nod of his head and a gesture with his fork to his cup.  Sheppard stares at the door again.

“Well I doubt she’s gonna be able to bring this fare along every time she goes AWOL,” Sheppard says.

“Every time?  You expect more of this?”

Ronon looks at Teyla then back at Rodney.

“Wouldn’t you?”

“I agree.  We’ve been on just three missions with her.  Three. And she has run off to do whatever she thinks needs to be done each and every time.  I mean,” he swallows the food he’d been talking around, “last mission she ran off and assassinated someone.”

Teyla nods her acknowledgement of that fact and Rodney adds without missing a beat…

“And would you please stop staring.  She probably already ate.”

Suddenly Sheppard looks back at him, snapped out of whatever he was thinking of.  He looks at his team.  He hadn’t realized he’d been staring.

“Don’t you think she’s been gone a long time,” he asks.

“No,” the scientist goes back to his eggs and Sheppard goes back to staring at the door.

After a few bites, McKay gets fed up with his leader, yanks the napkin from where he had it dangling over his chest by his blue shirt’s collar, and slaps it and his utensil down on the table.

“Fine.  I’ll go check on her,” Rodney says getting up from the table.

McKay walks out the door; well if having her around was all it took for Rodney to get up and do something rather than let somebody else do it first, that was better than breakfast.  There’s a moment where the rest of the team get to go back to their breakfasts for another bite before Rodney’s exclamation came…

“Oh my God!”

They drop everything and run out the door.

 

 

Just outside the door is Rodney staring at Kenmore, wearing a standard-issue military rain parka and a set of latex gloves, standing in front of another table she had apparently set up before they had gotten up as well this morning.  Only this time the table isn’t laid out for dinner, the little pig’s body is laying spread open on it.  There’s blood on Kenmore’s gloves and some smears of it on the rain parka.  Sheppard, Teyla, and, of course, Rodney can’t believe their eyes, well except for Ronon.  Kenmore’s actually staring back at them like nothing unusual is going on.

“What the hell are you doing,” Sheppard gaps at her.

“An autopsy.”

This is too much for Rodney…

“You lectured me—“

“They do autopsies on people too Doctor McKay, even children.”

Rodney scoffs then he cringes in repulsion as Kenmore reaches back into the carcass and starts moving it’s organs around again.  Suddenly her face quirks, she dips her head down disgustingly close, it was Sheppard’s turn to cringe, to the animal’s open belly, peers up into its chest cavity, and “Humphs” then straightens back up.  She keeps her eyes focused down on the carcass.

“You’re the one dating the Doctor, aren’t you?”

Rodney glares at her and takes the stance he takes with all people he’s had enough with.  Kenmore moves some organs aside.

“Tell me what you see,” she tells him.

“Guts,” McKay replies with absolutely no effort and no enthusiasm.

“Tell me what you don’t see,” she modifies.

Rodney’s face quirks at her, his stance shifts a little, then he reluctantly leans over from where he is and looks.  Suddenly he steps forward and gets just as disgustingly close to the opened body as Kenmore had and with far more interest, which means a hell of a lot for Rodney considering during quarantines he usually was King of the Germaphobes and Captain Panic Attack all rolled into one and that was with a hazmat suit on.  It sure as hell gets Sheppard’s interest.  Still cringing, Sheppard steps forward too.  Whatever she’d found, he didn’t want to be left out of it again.

“What?  What is it Rodney?”

McKay suddenly pops up and looks at him.

“It doesn’t have a heart.  Someone took its heart.”

“Might not another animal have taken it,” Teyla offers and John appreciated her always trying to be the optimist but he’d never heard of any predator attacking its prey and taking just its heart and leaving the rest of the carcass to be fed on by other animals.

“The edges are smooth,” Kenmore tells her, “It implies a surgical cut.”

“She’s right,” Rodney adds, “Animals tear, the edges of the wound aren’t shredded.  Someone cut this thing open while it was still alive and took its heart out.”

Sheppard stares at the poor little pig’s body.  Well that doesn’t sound good.  Did that mean that there were other people here?  Athosians still hanging around the planet…those ruins?

Rodney turns to Teyla, “Are there any Athosians still living here?”

She shakes her head, “No, all of my people have relocated.  I know of no Athosians remaining here.”

Well that didn’t bode well, John continues to stare at the body on the table, that meant somebody’s moved in during the Athosians’ absence or were at least visiting and were very territorial about their vacation spot.  Perhaps Kenmore had stumbled onto something here.

“Did you know a pig’s heart is the closest in complexity and structure to the human heart,” Kenmore suddenly pipes up.

“Yeah, Jennifer told me that once.  It’s why the SGC sends them for her to conduct experiments and autopsies on.”

Sheppard stares at Rodney and wanted to ask him what experiments Keller is doing that requires pig hearts to fill in for human ones, as Kenmore slowly looks away from the pig with that same quirked expression on her face that Rodney had had on his and she looks right over at Teyla.

“I hope you don’t mind a personal, really intimate, question.”

Teyla’s sour smile returns, two in John’s lifetime, “No, I do not mind.”

“I wasn’t asking you I was just giving you a heads-up.”

Teyla’s smile disappears gracefully enough but John can see that the sour’s taken up residence in her eyes and the muscles in her face have tightened as she faces the Lieutenant.

“What do you want to know,” Teyla asks her.

“Are you sure your father was taken by the Wraith?”

It’s such a personal question and so out of the blue that there’s a moment of stunned silence.  Teyla recovers first thankfully, but she sounds as pissed as Ronon looks, like she’s trying very, very hard to restrain herself.

“Yes,” she answers, “I am.”

“Are you sure you’re sure,” Kenmore asks again.

“Yes.”

“Are you sure you’re sure you’re sure?”

John actually sees Teyla start to tremble with restraint.  She quickly and smoothly hides her balled fist away behind her as her other hand tightens its grip just a little bit harder on her P-90.

“Yes,” her polite voice tingles slightly with the strain.

There’s a moment’s pause then…

“Are you sure you’re sure you’re sure you’re sure?”

Teyla finally becomes exasperated with the Lieutenant and Sheppard jumps in before she can answer…

“Yes she’s sure.  It happened when she was a kid, you don’t forget things like that when you’re that age.”

“No, I know you don’t forget.  That’s exactly what I mean, do you remember it exactly as it happened?”

Kenmore lets go of the body’s organs, takes off the parka and ungloves as she heads back into the hut amid the confused looks of Sheppard’s team.  They look at each other.  What the hell did that mean?  Then Kenmore comes back out of the hut with the video camera in her hands.  She’s looking through the camera’s footage for something then she finds it and pauses.  She looks up at Teyla.

“Are you sure—“

Kenmore get’s immediately cut off by Sheppard and McKay’s scoffing and the rolling of Ronon’s eyes.  Teyla’s jaw makes it look like she’s freezing.

“We have already covered this,” McKay complains, “Yes, yes she does.”

Teyla doesn’t object though, she gets angry.

“I remember everything about my father being culled by the Wraith,” her voice trembles with anger.

“How old were you,” Kenmore asks.

“I remember everything—,” Teyla seethes, but Kenmore cuts her off.

“Are you sure,” she gets more scoffing, “you would have been able to tell the difference between Wraith beaming technology and say other beaming technology?”

“Oh come on—,” McKay begins then it dawns on him what exactly she just said, “wait, what?”

Even Teyla is caught off guard.  Her anger quickly flees her.

“What do you mean?”

“Would you have been able to tell the difference between a Wraith culling beam and, say, an Asgard beam?”

“Wait, what?  Where do you get an Asgard ship took Teyla’s father?”

“From this,” Kenmore turns the camera around for them to see.

It shows the first mural Sheppard had examined when Teyla had first taken him to the Temple.  Kenmore points to a small part of the image, a crescent shaped sort of bowl thing hanging in the sky topped with these sort of star shapes with people hiding underneath it and a trail of dots and then a brilliant sun and then a new moon shape with a dark crescent in it trailing down from what John had figured was an abstract art representation of a wraith scout ship eyeing fleeing prey for its hive ship and darts underneath the crescent moon beneath the stars.

“You cannot possibly be claiming that that is an Asgard mothership,” McKay objects.

“Oh and like that big ole honkin’ thing looks exactly like a hiveship,” Kenmore objects right back, “It’s abstract art Doctor McKay.”

“You can barely see that.  And it doesn’t prove anything.”

“Just think about it.  Both are sweeping beams of brilliant white light.  Except for how they sweep and how large an area they cover.  And from the reports I read—,” Ronon scoffs dismissively, “cullings are tumultuous times.”  She suddenly turns to Sheppard, a surprising turn to everyone but Ronon perhaps, but considering that this morning, by Atlantean time, she had turned to Woolsey for help in an argument, “I read the report about the siege of Atlantis your first year here and how you and Miss Emmagan went to scout out the ships that were heading for you.  Now in that report, you both reported that there was some sort of freaky mass beam thing the Wraith just set in the middle of the village.  Now none of you had seen anything like that before and none of you have seen anything like it since, as far as I can tell.  But what if that means something unto itself?  Just because you haven’t seen it doesn’t mean someone else hasn’t?  And what if rumors of those weapons have traveled from planet to planet?  Would you have been able to distinguish an Asgard beam from some other Wraith beam you weren’t familiar with but might have heard rumors about?  We’ve all played telephone before.”

“I’ve never played telephone before,” Ronon quips.

Sheppard glances back disapprovingly at him before returning his attention to Kenmore.

“We know how rumors can get distorted along the grapevine,” Kenmore presses.

Sheppard looks at her.  She is unabashedly pleading with him…in front of his team, people she frankly liked about as much as they all liked her.  He had to admire her conviction, her passion about something she barely even knew and, by her own admission, barely had a working knowledge of.  But she meant this, every word of this.  Aw, crap…Sheppard knew he is gonna catch hell for this, serious hell at the very least from Ronon, but…

“Why would the Asgard take my father,” Teyla suddenly asks.

Kenmore turns to her.

“Back at the SGC, Jack was taken once by an Asgard named Loki.”

“You are not serious.”

Kenmore turns to McKay at his exclamation, “But Daniel’s report indicated that they were doing the same thing that Loki was doing.”

John looks back and forth between the two of them.  Clearly Kenmore and McKay were on the same wavelength but John needed some help.

“What was Loki doing?”

“The Asgard were dying of a genetically based disease due to the fact that they were using cloning as their form of reproduction,” John already knew that, but whatever, “Some Asgard, like Loki, found a way to cure the disease by taking human DNA and using it to fill in for the deterioration of the source DNA due to the cloning process.  The Asgard High Council never used this process because they found it to be just as invasive on human life as Goa’ulds taking a host.  They outlawed everything and anything even remotely related to that sort of experimentation,” McKay explains.

“And the Asgard you met here didn’t agree with the High Council’s ruling, did they,” Kenmore adds.

“No, in fact they advocated against it because they were all still alive and all the other Asgard are dead.”

Kenmore turns back to Sheppard.

“And what better cover than a Wraith culling?  They’re already taking people, what’s a few more, and they take all the blame.”

Sheppard looks in her eyes, this kid is relentless.  He was already convinced of this before Teyla provided the bell that saved his ass the first time, but now he’d have to finally say it out loud.  He looks at Rodney, but public back up was better especially to alleviate a ring or two of the Hell Ronon was going to put him throw for this judgment call.

“Is this possible,” John asks Rodney.

Ronon scoffs again and starts to walk away, not a surprise.  Ooh, Hell is soooo going to be an understatement…

“The Asgard took my father,” Teyla asks.

Rodney looks back at her.  She’s distressed.  He knows this, he feels this, but he has to say this, “I’d have to get a better look, but maybe, and I stress the ‘maybe’ part.”

They all look back to Sheppard for confirmation, even Ronon.  Well, McKay could back up her beliefs even if he wouldn’t put the evidence together quite that way, he was willing to try and she did have Teyla somewhat on her side now, with Rodney’s help.

“What else do you need,” he asks Rodney.

“Well another look—“

“The Temple,” Kenmore says so finitely McKay looks at her.  Her eyes never break away from Sheppard’s and likewise, “I need to go back to the Temple,” she tells him, “I didn’t finish checking out all of it.”

“There can’t be much there considering there was a cave in,” McKay points out.

“You’ve got it,” Sheppard says.

Without hesitation, Kenmore runs for the forest.  McKay stares at him.

“You can’t be serious?”

Sheppard doesn’t answer him, he just runs after Kenmore and hopes his team follows him.

 *                      *                      *

Kenmore skids over the hill and a few seconds behind her is Sheppard as he skids on his butt—falls—down the hill.  As soon as he lands at the bottom, Kenmore turns around and grabs the flashlight off of his vest.  Before he can say anything, she runs away again.  Sheppard has no choice but to follow her, but as he gets up, he can hear his team behind him.  He starts running after Kenmore again, this time with a smile on his face.  Despite the circumstances, he at least still had their trust.  Kenmore slows up at the entrance to the cave system, enough for Sheppard to catch up to her.  She tests her foot on the slab of fallen ceiling.  It’s stable, she turns his flashlight on, and starts to head in.  Sheppard tries the slab behind her then takes his first step in and stays there in the threshold to wait for the rest of his team.  Kenmore uses the light to guide her back to the mural.  Sheppard calls back to her.

“Are you sure about this?”

“Are you sure about alien abductions?”

Sheppard actually smiles, thank god no one was around to see it.

“How did you know about the roof?”

Kenmore follows the trail of light across the wall to the next mural.

“When I brushed dirt away from it, there was a gap.  It was big enough to let me see that the edges of the roof were smooth.  The ceiling was meant to come down.  For what reason, I don’t know.”

The mural’s just a picture of a dart flying over a village of huts.  Nothing to help her.  She points the flashlight at the next mural, nothing, and the next, still nothing.  Kenmore stands up in exasperation.  She was sure something would be here.  With the ceiling falling as one solid piece, she was sure.  The flashlight’s light falls across the floor and lighter, practically white, stone glints by in sudden contrast to the sandy-colored stone around it.  Kenmore catches it.  She points the light all over the floor.  There’s more of it.  They’re designs, she thinks, but the area is too big and the flashlight’s beam is too small for her to see all of it.  Kenmore stands back in the corner and angles the flashlight to cast as much of its light as it can over the whole floor.  Her jaw drops.

“Oh my God.”

From the doorway, Sheppard didn’t quite make out what Kenmore’s just said, he’s too far away from her without her talking louder than that, but he does see Teyla coming, leading the trio, followed by McKay, and lastly, shocking and yet not shocking, Ronon, being a part of the team and yet not wanting to have anything to do with this going along with Kenmore and all.

“We’ve got company,” he calls back to Kenmore.

Just as the others race up to the entrance, Sheppard turns to come in and they take a moment to catch their breaths before following him.

“Okay, now what did you say about this?”

“Don’t!  Stop,” Kenmore dives for him as he begins to cross the floor.

Suddenly, there’s a beam of white light in the middle of the room, Asgard beaming light, and both are gone.  Wide-eyed, Teyla, by gut instinct, puts out her arm and slams her and Rodney back against the wall next to the entrance, Ronon stands still in its threshold.  Lieutenant Colonel Sheppard and Lieutenant Kenmore are gone.

 

 

Kenmore comes to on the dark charcoal grey floor, the texture of a charcoal briquette, of a cell.  She looks around her.  The room is pretty close to exactly like the room Doctor McKay and Daniel Jackson described waking up in in their reports about when they were taken by the new tribe of Asgard last year.  An even darker shade of black than the floor, an almost impenetrable darkness engulfs beyond the rows of thin, bright green laser light connected at key points by a sort of vertical bar made out of some sort of metal it’s too dark for her to be able to make out what type it is.  That would have been helpful but…The whole thing comes together in a large, but deceptively cramped seeming, diamond formation.  She sees Sheppard a few feet away from her just coming to as well.  He doesn’t have his tacvest on anymore, he doesn’t have any weapons and she didn’t have any of those things to begin with this morning on Athosia.  Oh this is going to be lovely.  She immediately gets to her feet and starts for him when suddenly another set of cell bars slide between them and the cell’s green force field activates with a flash between the bars then vanishes from sight.  It snaps Sheppard to wide-eyed awake attention.

“No interaction.”

As Sheppard gets to his feet, the two SGC soldiers look around the apparently empty looking room again for the owner of the voice.  With the added light of the new set of cell bars, they can see an almost more armored Super Soldier looking figure standing in the semi-shadows next to a door.  Frankly Kenmore had hoped he’d simply been a prop she just couldn’t quite make out the definition of yet, an unmoving shell that an Asgard had left behind while it had gone someplace else to tend to something far more important than the two of them locked in this cell.  Kenmore narrows her eyes at the figure, she didn’t like anybody telling her what to do, and if somebody is actually in that suit, she intends to test this prop’s limits.  Kenmore, while keeping her eyes on trained on the Asgard super soldier, tries to reach between the green laser bars and her hand slams into the force field.  It flares brilliantly as she yanks her hand back with a gasp of pain and shakes it.

“No interaction,” the Asgard soldier repeats.

Then it reaches out and slams its fist against a panel on the wall next to the door.  Suddenly the field between the bars becomes visible.  Smoky and glittering and, as far as she can see, absolutely impenetrable.

“Force field amplified.  No interaction.”

Then the soldier hits the panel again.  The door opens and outside Kenmore can see a massive, a friggin’ huge, room that’s hollow in the center and only has a walkway without railings lining the perimeter.  There was a door, simple in design, human in design.  There might be some help there.  Wherever the ceiling is or the main floor for that matter, she can’t see it.  And whatever else might be lining the walls out there, all she knows is everything outside this door is bright and shiny, highly reflective silvery metal.  The soldier walks out and the door slides shut behind it.  Kenmore looks over at Sheppard.  Sheppard walks away from the bars separating them, shaking his head and running his hands through his hair.

It would figure.  It would just figure.  Especially with her.  Why did I have to give her the benefit of the doubt?  Why the hell did I do it?  Way to go, John, trust the whack job kid for a moment.

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Episode Three- The Ruins- Chapter Five

Chapter Five

Evening was already settling on Athosia by the time they returned to what remained of Teyla’s village.  Kenmore pushes aside the cobbled ‘blanket’ of furs that acts as the Athosian meeting hut’s door and walks in.  The blankets fall only for a moment behind her and as she just starts to dump the chairs on the long, rectangular wooden table in the middle of the main room, the furs swing to the side again, held open by Ronon, and Teyla walks in followed by Sheppard then McKay and finally Ronon.  McKay comes to a halt with a big gaping mouth in shock at the sight of the table.  It’s covered in all sorts of surveying equipment.  Crap, they had taken a lot of time, Sheppard looks the table over too.  She’d even had time to set up a computer.  It’s sitting and waiting for her to plug in the video camera’s contents.  McKay turns his gaping expression on Kenmore.

“How the hell did you do this?  Did you come here twice?  Once before we actually left and then when we actually left?”

“No,” she answers.

“Then how?”

Kenmore doesn’t answer Rodney, she simply takes a step towards Sheppard, and extends her hand out to him.  The Colonel, distracted by all the pieces of equipment already setup and waiting, suddenly realizes her extended hand in his field of vision and snaps out of his own thoughts.  He hands the camera over to her without thinking of the action at all.  Kenmore walks away and Sheppard catches the look Ronon’s shooting him out of the corner of Sheppard’s eyes.  It’s clear he absolutely believes Sheppard is taking it easy on the Lieutenant.  John looks his friend head on.  He is not taking it easy on her; it was just, right now, she had all the cards and Ronon may not want to see what she’s holding in her hand but John sure as hell did.  Without a word, Sheppard breaks eye contact with the Satedan and watches Kenmore as she plugs the camera into the waiting computer.  She leans over the computer, watching the download.  She rocks back and forth a couple of times before she realizes that they aren’t moving, aren’t talking.  She chances a glance out the corner of her eye at Sheppard’s assembled team.  But they are staring at her.  Kenmore returns her eyes to the slow moving download bar.

“Woolsey gave you guys and me an hour,” she shrugs, “I can do a lot with an hour.”

“But you said you never came here before we left,” Rodney points out.

“Have none of you ever actually gone down to the supplies depot and got the extra equipment you use yourself?”

Okay, there was a hugely uncomfortable silence.  She was right and as the outcast that was so wrong on so many levels no one knew where to start because there was nowhere to start, she had them.  Even Teyla looked uncomfortable with the realization that no, not even the kind, caring, compassionate Athosian leader had ever actually gone down to the darkened bowels of Atlantis to the Supply Depot to get the extra equipment that sometimes accompanied them on their missions.  It was usually just hanging by a hanger on a rack in their gender appointed locker rooms waiting for their next mission or waiting for them there in the gateroom in the waiting hands, or arms, of some supply staff member or another.  Teyla bows her head slightly, she is not really sure if she even knew their names.  That was unlike her.  Kenmore is either heedless of the silence or once again steamrolling over it because she didn’t care about what it meant.

“When I volunteered to get the supplies, I picked up a few extra things.  It’s still survey stuff, it’s just meant for archeological surveys.  Woolsey looked the list of stuff I got over and signed off on it.  I don’t think he even noticed what most of this stuff was anyways, I think he was just glad I wasn’t making a fuss.”

“You weren’t making a fuss because you were getting your own way,” Rodney snaps.

“Duh,” Kenmore goes on, “And then it took you guys a while to follow me.”

Rodney rolls his eyes and throws up his hands in exasperation at her.  It was hard to tell whether or not he was actually irritated at her for what she’d done or because he hadn’t thought of it or had the gumption to do what she’d just done for the past five years.

Without looking up again, Kenmore gestures with her head back towards the wall at the end of the hut.

“I setup the sleeping bags in a room I found back there.”

Teyla looks back at the fake wall she knows is there.

“There is very little room back there for everyone to fit.  That was where we stored our food,” she informs them.

Kenmore finally looks up from the download.

“Yeah, the local wildlife found the pantry.  Tore it up pretty bad.  So I pulled out as much of it as I could and set up shop.”

For the first time since he’s known her, Sheppard sees Teyla smile sourly at the Lieutenant, she drops the equipment she carried from the cave unceremoniously on the floor, then walks past the table and Lieutenant Kenmore.  In a wall of seemingly just canvas and furs, her eyes easily find the crease.  Teyla pulls back the furs, walks into a darkened area, and lets the furs fall closed behind her.  Ronon sends Sheppard a quick glance of disapproval before he drops his equipment too and follows Teyla, and Rodney never needs an invitation.  In the quiet, Kenmore returns her attention to the computer and, in quiet, Sheppard goes to join his team.

 

 

The former pantry is just as nice and cozy as the interior of the cave had been.  There’s a lantern, bigger and brighter than the ones in the cave, in the middle of the room.  Lighting the whole area in creamy light, adding to the cozy.  There are five sleeping bags, standard-issue but nice and heavy in case of a chilly night, sitting on top of their own standard-issue cot with accompanying pillows, fluffy and ironically white considering everything else is camo green.  Each team member staked out a bed leaving one left which Ronon had been staring at for awhile.  Sheppard, turns on his cot for the third time, thought it was mostly because the empty cot was right by that hidden door and they could still see light from the hut’s main room from underneath the ‘door.’  All in all and due to what John had come to believe was a natural distrust of the attitudinal young Lieutenant, it was just Ronon being Ronon.

John looks over at Teyla, sitting silently on her cot.  She hadn’t said a thing since they came in here an hour and a half ago, although Rodney had finally taken a breather from his running mouth.  So finally John got to ask the question.

“How are you doing?”

Teyla looks at him.  There’s a moment of silence in which Teyla looks shocked and maybe distressed but then her lips break into that thoughtful smile of hers once again.

“I am fine.  It is just,” she stalls for a moment, “it has been many years.”

She looks around the pantry.  Her friends did not know that she had spent that morning with friends like Halling, before he had gone off in search of Jinto, or Amri or Ramphi and his partner Jaden with their newborn child still slung to Jaden’s chest or Toran, who had tried to court Teyla although she refused his advances and who had been the first to die in their imprisonment onboard the hiveship.  They had spent that morning brewing their tea and talking of what furs Teyla could trade on what worlds when the dawn brought light with it and Teyla had intended to go through the Ring of the Ancestors to trade fine goods and further the good name of her people before Halling had called formally at this hut’s doorway that he had brought men from away and Teyla had welcomed the chance to start the year off well for her people and said enter.  And everything had changed from that moment on…Her mind returned to the present.

“I did not think I would ever return here.”

John nods at her.  He remembered how it felt when they first returned to Earth after their miraculous first year defeat of the Wraith attack on Atlantis.  He had come home after he personally was absolutely convinced that home was gonna be a grave at the bottom of a watery planet someplace in the Pegasus Galaxy.  However, he came back to Atlantis a Lieutenant Colonel, a considerable leap from Major considering his career and the way the military brass viewed him, and he was happy to come back period.  He had missed Atlantis, ironically enough.  He wondered…

“Are you happy to be back or does it feel weird?”

“I…do not know…yet.  It is all so…very different and yet so very familiar.”

“Did you miss here?”

“I remember missing this place.”

“Remember?”

That Athosian smile is displayed again.

“In the beginning, when I was first on Atlantis, I missed this world, my homeworld.  It was hard not having a place, a world, of one’s own.  Even though my people later lived on the Lantean mainland and then later the Ancestor’s gave us our own world again, it was difficult.  But New Athos and Atlantis has long since become my home.  It has been a long time since I have thought of this place.”

“The lights are out,” Ronon suddenly says.

Sheppard and Teyla look over at him, he keeps staring, then they look over at the ‘door.’  It had gone dark on the other side.  Sheppard looks back over at Ronon and nods then he looks over at Teyla and puts a finger to his lips.  Kenmore had to be coming in eventually and, yes, they weren’t talking about her right now but maybe later.  Ronon nods back at him with another look of disapproval at John’s apparent going easy on the Lieutenant as he eased himself back onto his bed.  John frowns it off.  He wasn’t.  He knew he wasn’t.  It was just…Damn it, he wanted to see those freakin’ cards she was holding so close to her vest.  Last time, he hadn’t and it’d gotten Shiana assassinated and the time before that, it’d almost gotten the Lieutenant killed and them pinned down by a wraith ambush.  Teyla nods with silent non-judgment and settles into her sleeping bag, quietly but there’s an air of duty about her movements like she was holding something back or not allowing herself to go near it but keep an eye on it from the outskirts, like she’d trained herself to do it.  Rodney McKay could sleep pretty soundly but apparently the sounds of people talking had the unmitigated effect of waking him up.  And Rodney…was Rodney.

“You know she’s a complete whack job, don’t you,” he asks in his normal volume of voice, John rolls his eyes, the same volume that has absolutely no regard for the concept of quiet let alone silence, “I mean who hi-jacks, hi-jacks, a mission to go off and do their own thing and get their own way.”

John can’t let this one slide.

“Like someone who, oh, I don’t know, say hi-jacked a mission for his own personal needs and ended up blowing an entire solar system to smithereens,” John smirks up at the hut’s ceiling.

Rodney glares at him as the scientist gets comfortable underneath his sleeping bag again.

“Oh very funny.”

It was.  John thought it was.  But as funny as it was, it didn’t bode well for the rest of the night.  If Rodney is going to be this talkative…He stands up and heads for the fake wall.  McKay freezes.

“Wait.  Where are you going?”

“To make sure she isn’t ditching us again,” he sort of lied.  It was a half-truth, but John didn’t figure it would be nice to say ‘To get the hell away from your mouth and to make sure she isn’t ditching us again’.

With that Sheppard lifts the door flap of furs and walks out.  Rodney glances back at the others.  Teyla has already settled in for sleep with her back towards the center of the room and Ronon just harrumphed as he stared at the ceiling.  Clearly there had been or was trouble brewing in Bromance paradise.  Rodney just rolls his eyes and settles even more underneath his sleeping bag.  Well, if no one is going to acknowledge what a liability this chick was on their team…

 

 

Sheppard walks out into a completely, pitch dark room.  It was such a stark contrast to the room he had just left.  ‘Lights out’ had been an understatement.  It was like light had never existed in this place.  Sheppard looks around, not like he could really see anything until his eyes refocused, but still…and he saw the door of furs slightly open revealing a small, practically minute wedge of clear, full moonlight outside and a silhouette crouched down by it.  Sheppard silently walks over and crouches down by Lieutenant Kenmore.  Suddenly he hears rustling, not at all trying to hide itself, outside.  Sheppard starts but Kenmore puts out an arm across his chest, stopping him.  He has enough room to look out the wedge of open door and see the small pig emerge from the forest nearby and run across the open ground in the bright moonlight and into the other side of forest.

“Relax, he’s been circling the camp for the past hour.”

“It was so nice of you to inform us.”

“Oh gee, I’m so sorry the pygmy pig is scaring you people.”

Okay, John did not need that.  He wants to say something to her but she’s so focused on watching outside, he wasn’t going to get the satisfaction of seeing her expression when he told her off.  Damn it, that seemed to be the thought this kid always evoked in him, just Damn it.

She’s partially in the shadow of the hut’s wall and he figured what could be seen of her from the outside, her face, was pretty well shadowed by the visor of the BDU cap she’s wearing.  Whoever taught her, taught her well.  John couldn’t’ve done much better if he tried.  Assuming the same silence she seemed to exude being completely still, shallowly breathing, and all, John settles down to watch beside her.

“You don’t have to do that,” she says, “I’m quite capable of taking First Watch by myself.”

I know you are, that’s part of the problem.  John lowers his head for a moment, feeling like he should nod, if it were anybody else he would have but the expression Ronon’s been shooting at him all day floats back up in his mind and he can’t bring himself to do it.  This kid is not part of his team.  He isn’t about to treat her like one.  Sheppard lifts his head.

“I know you are, that’s part of the problem.”

And there was your resounding rendition of ‘You’re not one of us’, well maybe not as resounding as John wanted to be satisfied with.  He looks out the wedge and Kenmore, to her credit which John wasn’t about to give her, didn’t even glance at him from the corner of her eye.  And silence took back over as two soldiers kept watch.

 

 

It was the third time Sheppard looked at his watch that Kenmore decided to speak up…

“You could go get some rest if you’re tired.”

Sheppard glares.

“I’m not tired.”

“Then why do you keep checking that watch?”

Before John can answer…

“It’s because you’re either bored or tired.  And I can’t use either one out here.”

Sheppard’s mouth falls open.

“Excuse me.  You aren’t ‘using’ anything because you aren’t team leader.  You have no team here,” Sheppard stabs a finger in her direction, “And another thing—“

The shrieking scream cuts him off and both of them look out into the open.  The pig’s screaming doesn’t stop and Kenmore bolts out of the hut like its gut instinct for her to run towards anything screaming.  Sheppard runs after her.  He reaches out and grabs the camo green blanket she’d wrapped around herself.  He pulls on it to yank her back to him but the Lieutenant struggles out of it and leaves him in the dust as she charges the rest of the way across the open ground and just before she enters the forest, she slams the pair of night vision goggles she’d been wearing on top of her cap down over her eyes.  Then she’s gone.  Sheppard slams the blanket on the ground as the rest of his team runs out of the hut.  He doesn’t wait for them, he charges into the forest right after Kenmore, and his team follows him.  They’re blind and he could care less.

Kenmore charges through the forest, jumping up over fallen logs or scrambling under balanced but equally downed trees.  The screaming isn’t stopping and all she can think is Oh God, the poor creature, and I’ve gotta save ‘em.

Somewhere behind her, Sheppard is tearing his own path.  Granted there isn’t a whole lot of light but there is enough that he can see most of the obstacles ahead of him and what he couldn’t see was slowing him down and pissing him off even more than Kenmore slipping out his grasp and running off again.  Behind him he can hear Ronon just barreling through anything obstacle or not and further behind he could hear Teyla and somewhere behind her he swore he could hear Rodney hitting every obstacle like it was a brick wall.  It’d be a miracle if the scientist made it with them to wherever they were going.

Kenmore climbs over a massive stump.  Suddenly the poor pig’s screaming stops with a pathetic and heart-wrenching groaning, moaning into nothing.  Kenmore runs faster and slides ungracefully down the lip of a root saturated, eroded hill.  As she tries to get off her butt, a few feet away she sees a small pool of something, probably blood, glowing in the moonlight peeking through the treetops and it has a trail leading off further into the forest.  Her whole body stops except for her panting breathing.  Then Kenmore carefully picks her way over to the pool.  She looks at the ground all around her and sees the tiny marks of hoof prints where the pig had come from around the hill and had apparently been sniffing around the base of it, either for food or bathroom facilities, whichever the prints quickly go from the pressure of searching something out to the mad, panicked scurry of an animal that has itself been searched out.  It had moved in circles.  It hadn’t been allowed to move far, indicating two assailants, two to corner it.  The little creature had spun around and around, kicking up all sorts of dirt and decaying leaves and broken, rotting twigs.  It had tried all it could to survive but despite the amount of blood, Kenmore figured the animal had not been killed here.  Mortally, fatally wounded but it hadn’t died here.  Perhaps with the wound, its adrenaline had triggered its flight response a second time and perhaps its attackers had figured they had done it in well enough that they could do whatever it was they had planned to do with it whenever it ran out of time, but Kenmore isn’t sure about that.  With the amount of blood, yes, the animal had still been alive but she needed to be able to see more and the moonlight just isn’t cutting it.  Despite the hitherto helpful combination of darkness and light, Kenmore lifts up her goggles, pulls her flashlight off of her vest, and flicks it on.  She starts its concentrated beam of light at the pool of blood then follows the trail.  As she walks around the pool to continue to follow the trail, she hears Sheppard coming and out of consideration more for the crime scene than his safety, calls out…

“Watch out, there’s a drop!”

She hears Sheppard slow down practically to a stop and pick his way forward then the slide of him coming down the eroded hill, apparently about as gracefully as she had.  Sheppard gets slowly to his feet as he sees the pool of blood and calls back to the apparently incapable of being silent rest of his team…

“Watch out!  Hill!”

Sheppard’s team heeds his warning—well, McKay heeds the warning by falling down the thing, but he rebounds nicely enough—and they’re all there.  As Kenmore’s examining some blood splattered on a tree with her flashlight, Sheppard, Teyla, and McKay have their flashlights out and trained on the pool.

“What did this,” Teyla asks.

Before John can say natural predator, Kenmore walks off, following the blood trail of heavy drips.  Bleeding like hell, screaming for its life, the poor creature had made a run for it.  The trail zigzags like the animal had tried to go in different directions but was forced to return to this one path, probably stalked to the bitter end, making Kenmore believe even more firmly that there had been more than one assailant, and then she stops and lets her flashlight continue following the trail across the dust and dirt-covered, rotting leaves groundcover and the bits of broken stone and onto the slab of ceiling now acting as the floor of the cave system’s entrance and the main cave itself.  Staring at the dark entrance, she takes a deep breath then heads into the cave-in.  Somewhere behind her she hears Sheppard yell…

“Kenmore!”

…and she ignores him.

 

 

Inside the cave, her flashlight shines on the blood.  It’s gone from drips now to one continuous pool.  The poor animal had been in its death throes here and was probably simply staggering and…Kenmore’s light shines on the little pig’s carcass lying in a massive pool of its own blood.  Its belly is cut open.

“Aw, you poor baby,” Kenmore says quietly like she was referring to her own son.  Of course, she is referring to someone’s son.

She walks over, kneels in the blood, and scoops the little animal up in her arms, cradling it like she had cradled her own precious child when he had been this small.

 

 

Sheppard paces back and forth a few steps away from the cave’s entrance.  It wasn’t going to do anybody any good if he just blew up at her right now.  And he sure as hell wasn’t sending anybody in there.  The place had just, just caved in.  That place was a friggin’ deathtrap.  And she just walked right in!  He is so pissed.  He can’t believe she’d do this again—well, yes, yes he can.  How could she do this again?  Half a warehouse wall had fallen on her the first time and that had been a lot more stable than a small rickety old carved out room that had a cave-in two hours ago.  Then he hears her footsteps coming down the entrance of the cave.  Okay, so he wouldn’t be getting that cool down time.  Fine.  Sheppard rounds on the entrance and stops on the brink of yelling at her.  Kenmore walks out cradling the body of the little pig in her arms like she was cradling a baby all she was missing was the little cotton blanket the color of a perfectly cloudless day.  The little body is covered in blood and looks like it’s been gutted.  That was why it had been screaming, it’d been gutted alive, and finally left to die in misery from blood loss in some caved in little hole.  What a way to go?  Kenmore walks past McKay and as she passes…

“All of that for a pig.  I thought someone had been attacked.”

“Someone was being attacked,” she answers him simply.

“But it’s a pig.”

Kenmore rounds on Rodney.

“Just because someone isn’t as smart as you doesn’t make them any less of a sentient being.  It was screaming for its life Doctor McKay.  It was scared and hurt and it knew it.  It was self-aware.”

Rodney’s left silent as Kenmore walks away.  She takes more care cradling the pig than she does to let the flashlight’s light guide her feet.  The light traces the outskirts of the path.

Each member of the team looks towards the other.  They had not expected such vehement passion from her.  They all knew she could get just as angry as the rest of them, she’d taken on Woolsey in the briefing room after all…and assassinated Shiana, but this wasn’t just anger, it was different.  McKay looks genuinely ashamed.  He looks at the ground, away from the looks of his team members, for a moment then his eyes come back up and Ronon leads the team after Kenmore.


 

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Episode Three- The Ruins- Chapter Four

Chapter Four

Kenmore can hear Ronon continuing to slam himself over and over into the portable force shield she had erected over the main cave’s front entrance as she stands on top of a chair she had brought with her with a soft brush in her hand dusting a small part of the wall.  Then the slams stop, she hears the force shield turn off, and Sheppard’s team walk in.  She turns her head slightly to gently blow away some dirt, dust, whatever, covering the brick she was trying to uncover and sees Sheppard look around out of the corner of her eye.  She turns her face back to the wall.

Although the entrance into the cave is dark, the room is well lit by the lamps sitting on top of the three tripods Kenmore had brought with her placed in a triangle formation around the room.  Her tacvest and backpack, which had some tools and clear plastic bags pouring out of it, sat in a corner.  There was another chair like the one she was standing on in the middle of the room with a little handheld video camera sitting on it.  The walls, given a whole bizarrely archaeological-sort of homey vibe by the lamps’ lights, were exactly as Sheppard remembered them and John could tell by the look in Teyla’s eyes that she thought the same way too.  The walls were constructed of sand-colored stone bricks and at the center of each of the four walls was one large smooth square brick with a dark mural carved into its smoothed surface.  Some murals depicted the hunter gatherer lifestyle of Teyla’s people.  Other murals depicted geometric renderings of giant hiveships and smaller darts culling, depending on the wall, either a city or a village and there was writing specially carved into the corners of the murals.  John always figured that was like the metal placards at art galleries telling you what the name of the work was and who the artist was.  Here it was much different though, the murals showed the culling of Teyla’s people going back thousands of years, so he figured the ‘placards’ said what the year was.  Some of the bricks themselves had symbols, words, just painted on them in all sorts of colors.  Kenmore brushed some dirt away from one of the higher up bricks and blew on it again, revealing the brighter red of the painted symbol underneath.

“Well you’ve certainly made this cozy,” Sheppard comments.

And he wondered how?  This place was far from the village and he hadn’t thought they had taken up too much time back at the Beta Site planet.  They had dialed Atlantis to inform Woolsey of the change in plans then dialed here as soon as the gate was ready.  That hadn’t been that much time, had it?  Kenmore didn’t respond, she just kept working on recovering the brick’s symbol from both dust and dirt.  McKay’s jaw, however, had dropped to his chest and his eyes were practically straining to bug out of his head as he slowly turned around, taking in everything he could about the room.

“How could you not report about this place?”

Sheppard looks back over at him.

“I did.”

“You didn’t report it like this,” McKay then slips into a voice that sounds like a Muppet, “At first glance they looked like the scratching of a child, blah blah blah,” he said finished in a normal voice then returned to his Muppet voice, “They were no innocent childhood sketches, but the brutal history of a people,” he finishes then returns to his normal voice again, “Do you know what we could’ve learned from this place?”

John wasn’t sure Teyla was going to like Rodney making fun of her people being culled by the Wraith.

“See what happens when you go back and check things,” Kenmore comments from the wall.

Sheppard and McKay look over at her.  You could practically see the smile through the back of her head.  She made some big sweeps with the brush over the brick’s newly revealed red painted symbol, gave one last blow refining its exposure, then climbs down off her chair, and walks over to her backpack.  She put the brush down on her tacvest then rifles through her bag until she came back up with a black marker and a page of small white sticker labels.  She wrote a number down on the next available sticker, peeled it off, then grabbed the camera from its chair as she passed by it, went back up on her chair, and labeled the brick.  Then she held up the camera and John saw the little red light on the thing come on.

“Okay Daniel, this is number thirty-seven of the brick paintings.  And like before, your guess is as good as mine,” she began.

“Who’s Daniel?”

“Sorry about that Doctor Jackson, it’s Doctor McKay.  I figure you can kinda guess the rest already,” she sighs and you can tell she was rolling her eyes.

McKay frowns at her, “Oh gee I’m so sorry I’m not Danny-boy.”

She looks back at him.

“Danny-boy?”

McKay doesn’t answer her.  She turns back to the wall, films for a couple more seconds, then turns the camera off and climbs back down again.  She puts the camera back then puts her hands on her hips and, apparently, for once takes a breather.  That explained to Sheppard how quickly this operation got setup.  The kid just simply didn’t stop.  Kind of like what he thought of her attitude.  She was a bulldozer.  It reminded John of her full tilt run off to the left in a warehouse booby-trapped by Wraith.  Who does that anyway?  Who runs that blind in a situation like that?  The sudden vivid memories of John taking a puddle jumper out on its first mission came to mind and that nasty little voice that he had managed to stay silent for awhile was back…You did, remember?  A ghost of Sumner swam up before his mind’s eye and he pushed it away.  That was different, John hadn’t been wrong about going after Sumner, his people, or Teyla and hers.  The little voice chided him.  She hadn’t been wrong to go the way she did then.  And John’s actions afterward had proved that more than her own, he’d walked his team right into a booby trap.  Now it looked like the same thing if McKay had anything to say about it.  Oh God, John was never gonna live this down.

“Why are you taking video of this stuff for Daniel Jackson?”

“Because he’s the SGC resident expert on the Ancients.”

“Excuse me, I am the Atlantis resident expert on the Ancients.”

“Ancient technology, not Ancient archeology.”

Sheppard glances at McKay, she had him there, and in true Doctor Rodney McKay fashion, the scientist wasn’t going to admit it.

“If the ruins are so important to you, then why are you here and not there,” ha, he was going to go after her that way.

“Because if that place is booby-trapped, I want to know about it first and when both Miss Emmagan’s and Colonel Sheppard’s reports detailed the drawings of a city I figured I’d come here first.  This place might show me some things.”

“The drawings depict the city being destroyed.”

“That doesn’t mean it isn’t depicting contingency plans being enacted.”

John almost winces as he looks over at McKay.  Oh and she scores another one.  Rodney isn’t about to let her get the chance to make another point at his expense, instead he just looks away and back at all the drawings surrounding them.  But he wasn’t quite done being snarky just yet…

“Well have you found anything yet?”

“Maybe.”

They all look at her.  Hell it caught Sheppard’s attention.

“Maybe,” Rodney inquires.

“Yeah, I don’t know how to read Ancient and without a complete sentence, I can’t decode it either,” Sheppard lights onto that, but lets it slide.  It would have been the primest opportunity to go after Kenmore with but, “So if someone wrote something down, then yes but until I know that for sure, maybe.”  She looks around again with a sigh then starts for her vest.

“Have you discovered anything in the drawings yet,” Teyla asks.

“Maybe,” Kenmore answers picking up the brush.

And the Lieutenant leaves it at that again.  She gets back up on the chair against the wall and starts brushing at a brick right at the ceiling.  Teyla sighs, for once, and looks around her again, giving up on getting anything out of the Lieutenant.  The rest of the team follow her lead and John was only too grateful to see that from McKay, although he figured Rodney wasn’t too anxious to get in another argument with the Lieutenant for fear she’d score another point at his expense.  But who was keeping count?

“There’s some sleeping bags set up if you need them,” Kenmore offers.

Teyla nods to Kenmore’s back and looks off to her own right.  Against the bottom of two connected walls there’s only a small standard-issue lantern in their corner with two sleeping bags split open and spread out to make four beds.  Sheppard wasn’t missing the fact of four.  He glances over at Ronon and met the same look from his friend.  And neither one was particularly going to stand for it.  Teyla doesn’t hesitate to walk over to a sleeping bag, she sits down, and leans her head back against the wall.  She looks tired and stressed.  Even though you can’t hear it, John sees her chest rise high slowly then fall quickly.  She had sighed.  He walks over to her and kneels down in front of her.

“You know if this is hard on you, you should take the rest.  We’ll cover you.”

Behind him, McKay picks up the sentiment, “Well since you’re offering.”

Sheppard looks behind him with a frown aimed at Rodney but the scientist is blissfully unaware as he walks over to the other sleeping bag and gets comfortable against the wall.  Sheppard looks back at Teyla.  She smiles her kind and knowing smile at him and nods.  As Sheppard stands back up and backs away from her, she too gets comfortable closest to the wall.  Sheppard walks over to Ronon.  He lowers his voice just for the two of them.

“You know you could get some sleep too.”

“No, not with her around,” Ronon is firm.

Sheppard looks back at Kenmore.  Yeah, with the crap she’s pulled in the last two hours, there is no way Ronon’s gonna back down from this.  His trigger finger is still tense, not itchy anymore but still tense.  Sheppard looks back at him.

“Okay, just lie down and fake it.”

Ronon looks at him.

“I’ll be fine and it’s not like Teyla isn’t on alert either.”

Ronon takes one last look at Kenmore then relents with a nod to his friend and goes to sleep right next to Teyla.  Two guns are better than one.  Sheppard knew that, Ronon knew that.  Sheppard takes a glance at Kenmore then nonchalantly walks over to the chair in the middle of the room, picks up the camera, and sits down.  And three are even better.  Again Ronon knew that and Sheppard knew that.

 

 

John Sheppard looks back at the cave system’s entrance.  It’s getting darker.  Dusk is starting to creep in from outside.  It was making the light in the room seem brighter and the stone made it creamier.  The whole place looked even cozier than before like a darkened cabin lit by a roasty, toasty fire.  Rodney had started snoring about an hour ago, basically two minutes after his head hit the cushy part of the bag.  It’s been awhile now too that Sheppard thought Teyla might actually be sleeping.  And Ronon, John knew, was wide awake and on standby.  John continued to play with the camera in his hands.  Twisting it, turning it, coming close to breaking it a couple of times by nearly dropping it on the dirt floor but he recovered well, Kenmore never wavered for a moment or gave the slightest hint she was concerned with what damage he might be doing behind her back.  She was just about done revealing a purple symbol.  She was working at brushing dirt away from the top of the symbol’s brick.  John went back to the camera.  She’d only borrowed it about four times from him and had asked him for it in a nice, pleasant even tone each time.  John consented each time, frankly shocked as hell she was being so nice and watching Ronon out of the corner of his eye each time.  His alert friend kept getting slightly tense each time Kenmore approached Sheppard, his finger wrapped just a hair more securely around the trigger of his weapon, which John had also noticed was back to being set to kill.  Ronon…but he never jumped the gun…But still, kill?  Really?  So she took them from the lap of alien Tahitian luxury to go on some mind-numbing archeological dig, John glanced up at her back, Okay so I can understand ‘Kill’.

Kenmore continues cleaning, unawares.  Her brush sweeps right at where the wall meets the ceiling and a long segment of dirt drops away.  Kenmore stops and stares at it.  She leans in and under a little bit and sees the distinct and dark, just a little bit bigger than hairline, gap between the end of the ceiling and the wall.  And she can see that the wall goes up further than the ceiling is letting on.  Suddenly another segment of dirt, smaller than the one Kenmore had dislodged, falls away of its own accord.  Dislodged.  Kenmore climbs carefully but quickly off of the chair.  She rushes over to Sheppard, kneels down in front of him, and puts her hand on his knee.  That certainly catches his attention…and so does the look on her face, a very worried and urgent look.  He didn’t think the kid could look like that.

“We need to start packing up.  And we need to do it very quietly and very quickly,” she whispers to him.

“What is it,” he whispers back.

“No time.  Just get them out of here fast okay.”

Sheppard nods, keeps a firm grip on the camera, and starts to get out of the seat when he suddenly realizes he just took an order from the Lieutenant.  He had agreed to it though and for some reason he felt he had to.  Maybe it was the look on her face or the hand she’d put so carelessly and yet so confidently on his knee, whatever.  He’d have to deal with that later, John knew Ronon was listening in.  Big and massive as he is, Caveman Rodney liked to put it, but dammit his hearing was downright Vulcan sometimes.  Now was something else.  Sheppard continues to get out of his chair as he watches Kenmore carefully but efficiently close up the one she’d been standing on.  Sheppard gingerly picks his way over to Ronon and before Sheppard’s knee can even hit the ground near him, his friend is already lifting himself up.

“What is it,” Ronon asks in his normal volume voice, gruff and low though it is.

A little dust falls from the wall the Lieutenant had been working on.  They look back at it.  Kenmore temporarily stops breaking down John’s chair to shush them.  Some dust falls off the wall again.  She glances back at it as the two men go back to each other.

“I don’t know but whatever it is, it’s freaking her out,” John whispers, “So let’s just get us and this stuff out of here okay.  And let’s do it quietly.  That seems to be key.”

Ronon nods.  He doesn’t like that Kenmore’s calling the shots right now and his expression shows it, especially when he shoots a quick glance at her, but he still gets up and starts breaking down the nearest tripod.  John says a silent prayer for that as he inches forward to Teyla’s side.  Kenmore, with the two chairs already hefted on her back, starts breaking down the tripod nearest her.  Damn the kid is fast.  Sheppard nudges Teyla’s shoulder and she starts a little but quickly comes around.  He nods towards Ronon, Teyla looks at her Satedan friend then at Kenmore, then nods at John.  He could always rely on Teyla without words.  She and Sheppard silently get up and Teyla starts rolling up the sleeping bag she and Ronon had shared as John walks over and kneels beside Rodney.  John nudges his friend’s shoulder.  The scientist swipes at Sheppard’s hand and rolls even further over on his side, mumbling something incoherently.  Sheppard rolls his eyes as the sound of McKay’s voice suddenly catches Kenmore’s attention.  Her head shoots up to stare at them and she freezes.  Ronon keeps working but his eyes are entirely focused on her. Teyla is a little bit more subtle but she keeps an eye on the situation as well.  Sheppard nudges Rodney’s shoulder again and again McKay slaps his team leader’s hand away.

“Five more minutes,” Rodney says loud and snappy.

A little bit of dirt falls from the wall behind Kenmore.  Ronon side glances at it but she doesn’t look back at all.  She stalks over to the two men then suddenly reaches out and yanks McKay up to her face.  Undoubtedly, Rodney snaps fully and wide-eyed awake frozen in fear as he stares eye-to-eye with the Lieutenant.  At least that was one good thing about her, she could scare the crap out of Rodney.  Sheppard looks back at a temporarily frozen Teyla, with the sleeping bag under her arm and had been reaching down for Kenmore’s tacvest and backpack, and Ronon, with a tripod and lamp slung over his back and was frozen in the middle of working on dismantling the third.

“We don’t have five more minutes,” Kenmore whispers a little bit louder than she had with John, “Now get up, start helping us get this stuff as well as your own butt out of here fast.  And do it silently.  Not your version of ‘silently’ but my sort of,” she drops her voice down to a lower whisper than she had used with Sheppard, it was more like she was mouthing words than actually saying them, “silently.”

McKay looks panicked.

“Oh my god, are you nuts,” he exclaims.  He hadn’t whispered.

Suddenly a lot of dirt falls from the ceiling down the wall she’d been working on.  Kenmore’s head snaps back to it.  More dirt starts falling like the sprinkles before a downpour.  That was it!  Cave in.

“No time,” she says.

“Move,” Sheppard shouts.

They all bolt for the entrance with what they had or had been reaching for.

 

 

Ronon’s the first out followed by Teyla then Sheppard and Kenmore, dragging McKay with her by a two-handed grip on the chest straps of his tacvest, has no hope but to make a dive for it with him as the cave roars from the ceiling finally coming down inside.  Kenmore and McKay hit the ground with the point of their boots just inches from the threshold of the cave’s entrance as a storm of dust and dirt and perhaps broken stone rushes over them.  And the roaring goes away.

It’s done.  Kenmore coughs as she gets to her feet.  Sheppard and Teyla, also coughing, step forward and help Rodney get to his.  Lieutenant Kenmore looks at the dark entrance to the cave system and the slab of rock, the ceiling of the entrance presumably, that had come down as well to cover and replace the dirt that had been the floor there before.  Then she walks over to the entrance, reaches down, brushes some debris away, and picks up the force field generating device, a sort of black suction cup looking thing with a big bright red button in the middle of it with a black cord that was just long enough to span the width of the entrance connecting it to another black suction cup looking thing.  She folds the device together in her hands then pockets it in her BDU shirt pocket and sighs.  To Sheppard’s surprise, she looks bummed, just bummed.  Not really pissed off or in any way really distressed at the situation.  Just bummed.

“It’ll be getting dark soon,” she says, “We should head back.”

Sheppard feels himself start to slowly nod as his mind is blatantly covered in a thin film of shock at her unexpected reaction.  Why wasn’t she pissed off?  He’d be pissed off.  Twig cracks nearby and Rodney, like the panicked armed madman he is, immediately draws his pistol with reflexes frankly no one thought he had, and aims.  Before he can fire, Kenmore turns, grabs his wrist, and shoves his hands into the air.  The shot goes harmlessly off into the treetops and out of the shadows where the twig-breaking had come from darts a small pig.  It disappears squealing back into the darker parts of the forest undergrowth.  Kenmore sighs.

“Please don’t shoot the local wildlife, Doctor McKay.  They live here.”

With that, Kenmore let’s go of his wrist, readjusts the position of the chairs on her back with a bouncy heft just like she had when she ditched them on the Tahiti planet although they didn’t know that’s what it had looked like, and starts heading off into the forest.  The team glances at each other then follows her.

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Episode Three- The Ruins- Chapter Three

Chapter Three

Sheppard and Teyla come out of the gate practically at the same time followed quickly by Rodney and then a couple of heartbeats later by Ronon, ready with his gun clenched tightly in his hand but not quite poised to fire…yet.  Boy is he ready to shoot this girl, Sheppard caught the sight out of the corner of his eye.  The gate shuts down behind them as they look around.  The sun is showing itself to be a little after dawn, fog still clings to the ground a little bit here and there but even that is quickly dissipating like the rest of it had already.  They have maybe an hour or two before noon.  It’s quiet.  Sheppard hadn’t exactly known what he’d expected to greet him but nothing was not it, wasn’t even the tenth idea to come to his mind.  He lowers his P-90 as he keeps looking around.  Where was Kenmore?  Where was all the crap she’d been carrying?  Teyla looks around with an entirely different sentiment.

It has literally been years since she has been here and the last time she had been here she had been swept up into a culling beam and had feared her own demise let alone the demises of those of her people that had been culled along with her and woke to find themselves trapped behind the webbed gate of a Wraith cell.  Her first time in one but it had proved to not be her last nor had it proven to be the last time the members of the Atlantis Expedition or indeed John Sheppard would break her out of one.  It felt…weird to be back.  So much had changed in her, in her life, as well as the landscape.  But the landscape had not changed so much that she could not find the way back to her own village.  She looks over at Sheppard, he seems wary but he nods at her and she leads them away from the gate.  A thought comes to her and her cheeks plump with a small demur smile, Charin used to call her Teyla Who Walks Through Gates.

 

 

It was odd how her heart was beating as she kept up a steady, unyielding pace down the road to her village.  She was beginning to recognize trees, even with the passing of time they were still so familiar to her, and she knew she was close to the entrance to her village and her heart was racing, pounding in her chest.  Even through the bounce of her own firm and consistent steps, Teyla could see her heartbeats rhythmically shuddering the tacvest covering her chest.  Suddenly there it was up ahead, only about twenty feet ahead, there was the gap.  She closes her eyes, Teyla Emmagan was coming home, she opens them, she takes a deep breath, turns…and stops.  It was…it was…She had not expected to see her village look so…destroyed.  Teyla takes timid, slow steps down her village’s main avenue.  It is unreal, it is all so unreal.  She had had a vision in her mind of the place much as she had left it.  Perhaps a little battle scarred from the Wraith culling but no worse from all the previous cullings they had suffered, but not this, without knowing it she had slowed to a stop, not anything like this.  Sheppard comes up beside her.

“How are you doing?”

Teyla takes a moment to recover her slackened jaw and realize she had stopped, “I had not expected this.”

“Neither had I,” McKay pipes up.

Teyla and Sheppard look back at McKay, who had fallen behind in the pace and had respectfully taken up the rear.  He was looking back at the village’s entrance and beyond the road is another gap that opens onto a lake with a sand bar for a dock and beyond the lake are the ruins of a large Ancient city—well, what had once been a large city.  Emege, Teyla remembered its name.  Her people told stories of once living there.

“What,” Sheppard asks him.

McKay looks back at him.

“All this time and you never thought to tell us that it looked like that.”

“The reports have been on the books for a long time Rodney, you could’ve checked them out any time.”

“No one’s reports, not yours, not Bates’, mentioned the city looking anything like that.  Some of the towers are still standing, do you not see that?  We went Indiana Jones-ing through tales about a brotherhood of monks, almost got killed by the Genii including our good ole friend Kolya, you do remember that time, don’t you, when we could’ve been rummaging through this place without the slightest possibility of guns pointed at the backs of our heads, and you didn’t think to mention this place,” Rodney gestures back at the broken city across the water.

Teyla looks at him and recalls so well the words Charin had spoken to her only the morning before she first met the Atlantis Expedition on these very grounds, “It is all gone long ago.  Everything of value salvaged, everything worth using taken when my people dared to enter its ruins.  There is nothing there but stone and twisted metal, all else has fallen to dust.  Emege fell many and many a year ago, Rodney.  There is nothing left.”

It felt comforting to Teyla that she spoke so strongly, so like herself, when this place brought up so many memories, both good and bad, for her.  Rodney, like the true friend he is to her, takes her word for it, but Rodney, like she knows Rodney is, did so begrudgingly.  That morning even she had considered venturing into the city to see if she could recover anything of value to trade on her people’s behalf.

“Yeah, well, there’s no sign she’s gone to the city.  All that talk about the abandoned city and she hasn’t gone to it.”

Sheppard looks at Teyla.

“What else was in our reports?”

 

 

This was familiar.  Teyla leads Sheppard through the forest.  What wasn’t familiar was the fact that Rodney was right behind Sheppard and Ronon was vigilantly bringing up the rear, still waiting for Lieutenant Kenmore to pop up out of nowhere so his itchy trigger finger could get a chance to release some of its tension by shooting her; for John’s effort, he made the Satedan switch his weapon’s setting from kill to stun.  Teyla crawls over a steep hill that has and had been eroded with broken and gnarled tree roots sticking out of it.  The first time John had gone over this thing, Teyla had climbed over it with no problems but John had taken a sliding fall on his ass down it to which he had tried to cover the fact of by quickly bouncing up to his feet at the hill’s bottom and brushing his hands together like he had meant to butt-surf it the whole time.  Teyla had smiled at him then.  John scaled the hill with trouble from the giving ground again but no butt-surfing this time.  He wished this time could have been just as jovial as the first, but…Behind him, John heard Rodney do the butt-surfing.  Half a smile caught Sheppard’s mouth, it wasn’t exactly like the first time but that was funny as hell.

Then McKay said it, “Ow.”

And John fought to stifle his giggle.

 

 

Teyla climbs over a massive broken and downed tree trunk and sees the entrance to the caves that held the carvings.  Although it looks like it might have been a natural cave at one point in time and had simply been more finely carved out, the short wall of rock betrayed how constructed it truly was and when you got to the low narrow doorway, you could see the brick work inside and that said it all.  Teyla stops, Sheppard comes to stand beside her, and Rodney comes to a stop on her other side with Ronon.

“This is it?”

McKay was clearly underwhelmed.

“It is enough,” Teyla says.

And with that, Teyla starts towards the cave.  Rodney looks over at Sheppard but he doesn’t say anything.  Teyla gets to the entrance and runs right into a force field that’s been erected over the entrance.  She staggers back a few steps shocked, that had hurt.  The others rush forward, Sheppard and Ronon check on her.

“I am fine,” she assures them.

But Rodney walks over to cave’s entrance.  He slowly extends his hand, it hits the field, and he yanks it back then he turns and gestures back at the entrance.

“Let me guess, that wasn’t there the first time.”

Sheppard shakes his head.  And Ronon’s finally had enough.  Suddenly he lunges at the entrance, slamming himself over and over into the force field and taking all of its pains.  McKay throws up his hands in exasperation.

“Yes, of course, because that’s gonna help.”

Ronon keeps going despite Rodney’s comment or perhaps the Satedan just added that aggravation to Kenmore’s.  Just when even Sheppard is about to tell Ronon to rein it in, Kenmore appears on the other side of the reacting, light purple-colored force field.  She watches Ronon for a moment like she had had to see it with her own eyes first before she believed it before speaking.

“You know you could’ve just pushed the big red button sticking out of the leaf cover on the ground there,” she points down at the start of the right wall of the entrance.

Ronon stops and they all look at the indicated area and, just like she said, Sheppard sees a painfully obvious big red button sticking out of some sort of black suction cup looking thing sticking out of the leaf cover that had fallen on the ground.  They look back up at her.  She shrugs.

“Just a thought.”

They watch Kenmore disappear back into the dark cave entrance.  There’s a moment of silence then Ronon slams himself into the force field again.

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Episode Three- The Ruins- Chapter Two

Chapter Two

The wormhole ride was as smooth as ever.  They arrived during the planet’s daytime.  It was beautiful here like a cross between the forests of Endor and the most luscious waterfall spot on every poster supporting a long vacation in Tahiti ever seen, especially since said gorgeous waterfall was roaring down it’s cliff a mere twenty yards behind this planet’s stargate.  What a welcome!  Sheppard takes a deep breath.  Well there was another good thing about this planet.  The air was clean and fresh and vibrant as the smooth breeze travels through and with the waterfall’s fine spray.  John is liking this place for a Beta Site already.  Right now, he looks around, he is sooo willing to throw this planet’s name into the ring for the Alpha Site.  Sheppard turns back to the rest of his team and Kenmore.

“All right kids, nice wide spread.  Don’t want to get too close to each other but not too far in case anything happens,” he slips on his sunglasses with a smile, turns back around and starts off down a naturally worn path in the knee-high tall, bright green grass, “And remember keep your eyes peeled for any spot that would make a nice putting green.”

The place is beautiful, giant bright orange alien hibiscus were going from vines wrapped around the trunks of a couple of the nearby trees, little white flowers with petals in the formation of the Star of David dotted the ground here and there through the grass, and Sheppard feels himself slip into a casual saunter like he hadn’t done in a long time.  God this was great.  And why exactly did they not do it more often.  About twenty yards behind him, Teyla falls into step and McKay, ignoring the ‘nice and wide’ direction, is right on her heels.

“Teyla, you’re a farmer, trader, do you recognize any of these plants?  Are any of them citrus?  You know I’m deadly allergic to citrus.  Why are smiling like that?  I’m serious.”

Teyla and McKay continue on, Teyla smiling in demure silence as Rodney continues to ramble on about all the things that threaten his health, which they all had learned a long time ago was an extensive list, and Ronon, using the excuse of double-checking his gun, lets thirty yards pass before he chances a look back at Kenmore, the real excuse for his lagging behind.  He catches her kneeling down tying her boot laces then having some trouble standing up underneath the quickly and easily shifting burden of the surveying gear that Woolsey had ordered to go along with them on her back.  She had shocked all of them when she’d volunteered to carry it all on the embarkation floor but none of them had stopped her or even tried to step in to talk her out of it.  Ronon allowed himself a Rodney McKay-grade smirk at her expense.  Maybe letting her be the team pack mule will help get her off our team quicker, Ronon turns and walks on with a not-too-often-seen smile on his face as Kenmore continues to struggle under the gear, she deserves it.

When Ronon is about thirty yards away, Kenmore suddenly stands up solidly without any struggles and she shifts all the gear quickly and easily into more comfortable positions.  She stares at Sheppard’s teams’ backs, Like I’ve never carried crap like this before.  She let’s Ronon gain about another thirty or so more yards before she turns and walks over to the DHD and begins dialing.

The gate starts turning.

Sheppard freezes and turns as do all the others.  Even from his distance, Sheppard can see the blue lights of the gate symbols chasing themselves around the gate and the chevrons were locking in fast.  Holy crap.

“Kenmore!”

Ronon just flat out bolts for her but both the Satedan and the Lieutenant had put too much of a spread between them.  Teyla, McKay, and Sheppard make a run for it too but John can see the distance is just too great.  Perhaps he should have rethought the wide part of his orders.

The seventh chevron locks into place, the stargate flushes into life, and Kenmore casually walks through it.  Ronon’s strides are long but he only manages to make it to the DHD before the gate shuts off then the DHD goes dark too.  They catch up to Ronon.

“Did you see which symbols she used,” Sheppard asks.

Frankly he wouldn’t put it past Kenmore to have just dialed back to Atlantis, leaving them to hoof it around here on their own and without, according to Woolsey, the proper equipment, and telling Woolsey he could stuff it too.

“She picked that one,” Ronon points to a symbol, “that one,” points to another symbol, “that one,” points to another, “that one,” points, “that one,” points, “that one and that one.”

Teyla suddenly looks up at Sheppard.

“It is my homeworld’s gate address.”

Sheppard looks up at the silent gate.  Well, here they go again.

 

 

The gate shuts down.  Kenmore looks back at it.  She really had expected them to have managed to follow her through the gate, at the very least the big guy, but no one had…or no one wanted to.  They probably figured they could lose her here for awhile, wander around over there and do their mission then traps back to Atlantis and tell Woolsey ‘Sorry, she got lost in the woods’ and leave it at that, life moves on in Atlantis.  Kenmore goes back to looking at Athosia stretched out before her.  Tree lines starting in a V-shape from behind the gate spread out on either side of the gate and nothing but sparse, short-growing grass in front of her.  One massive field, you could get a couple of pretty decent rugby matches goin’ here, although Kenmore was sure Sheppard rather have football games.  The big ole hunks of what looked like random pieces of driftwood, probably just dead tree stumps cut down and left to petrify, would make effective boundary line markers.  It could work, she could kinda see it.  She looks up.  There isn’t enough sun in the sky yet.  It must be dawn.  It’s still grey and a little foggy and misty from the night, but not exactly a hindrance.  Kenmore starts walking and follows the tree line on her right until she finds a wide opening in the line, a small lane, although it could also pass for a two-lane dirt road to her, just like the reports had said.  Without missing a beat, Kenmore turns onto the lane and disappears into the forest.

It isn’t exactly a long walk.  Pretty cut and dry.  The lane cuts through the forest and then eventually, off to the right, there’s another gap in the tree line guarded by what might have been metal drums but they had become rusted and fairly stripped by the weather.  Kenmore walks into the guarded gap and sees that the gap itself is opened by two tall metal pipes sticking out of the ground like thin spindly trees themselves.  One of the metal pipes had fallen over and torn up some ground with it, obviously pushed over by winds or wildlife, again the metal was beginning to rust and was stripped.  Kenmore continues steadily on beyond the pipes and down the main avenue of what remained of the village.

There were dozens of semi-dome-shaped, layered huts, their entrances and, Kenmore guessed, windows covered by what remained of metal grates shaped like the hood of an eyelid or in some cases just capped by giant rounds of the metal, that were either blown to bits by weapons fire, Swiss-cheesed by the weather, or just plain reclaimed by the forest itself.   Kenmore passes by one particularly large hut, still intact, with a double-wide entrance, signifying that that was the main meeting hut the reports had mentioned where the envoys of the Atlantis Expedition had first met Teyla Emmagan, leader of the Athosian people or at least of this particular group of them.  Now in which direction was that cave Emmagan had taken Sheppard to?  Without hesitation, Kenmore angles her path off the main avenue, passes between two broken huts, and slips back into the forest.  Her step hasn’t faltered for a second on Athosia.

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Episode Three- The Ruins- Chapter One

Chapter One

Atlantis’ conference room isn’t as tense as it usually was since the new Lieutenant Kenmore’s arrival.  In fact, it was really quiet, really quite normal.  The fan of presence-opening doors at the far end wall are closed.  The long, rectangular mahogany conference table Woolsey had expressly ordered shipped with him to Atlantis and had heralded almost single-handedly Woolsey’s taking New World Order control of the city was manned on both sides like its owner believed it should be.  Lieutenant Colonel John Sheppard and the rest of his team, affectionately referred to back at the SGC as Team Atlantis he’s discovered, and their new Lieutenant, although he really wouldn’t call her theirs, sits in what has become their usual spots around the conference room table, there again with Kenmore as far away as possible, as the Expedition’s leader, Richard Woolsey, sitting at the table’s head, starts briefing them on their newest mission:

“It never hurts to have a beta-site,” Or a quiet mission, John thought but Woolsey continued, “And this planet called…”

Woolsey trails off to check his notes on the matter but Doctor Rodney McKay, the team’s resident genius, steps in like usual…

“Nerea, we believe it’s a play off the word—“

“Nereid, from Greek mythology referring to Sea Nymphs,” Kenmore spoke up, cutting him off.

The team starts at her, it was the first time she hadn’t responded with a snarky attitude, but only Rodney glares.  He didn’t like being interrupted by anybody especially if they’re saying the same correct thing he’s about to say.  Kenmore never even looked up from whatever she was so intently studying.  A computer tablet from what John could see from where he was, diagonally up across the table from her.  While the others’ eyes go back to either their own mission files or Woolsey, Sheppard’s opt to remain on Kenmore.  True, this was only their third mission briefing with the newly arrived Lieutenant, but she never paid this much attention to a mission report even one that came very, scarily very, close to killing her and, likewise truthfully John got the feeling, she never really cared to.  What was on that thing that had her attention like that?  Sheppard’s eyes return to Woolsey as the Expedition leader decides to go on.

“Yes, well, according to the Ancient database that would be exactly right.  The planet is covered in dense forest of varying types.”

“That sounds good.  Plenty of ground cover,” Ronon could always be counted on to think of the tactical element.  Sheppard took his ball and ran with it.

“Plenty of top cover too.  It’d be pretty hard to use darts effectively.”

“Jumpers too.  Not to mention the F-302s.”

Sheppard looks over at Rodney, leave it to his friend to rain on his and Ronon’s parades.

“Not really.  The jumpers have cloak.  That does stack the odds a little in our favor.  And the F-302s have trained in heavily wooded areas back on Earth,” John just couldn’t resist breaking out an umbrella.

Rodney scrunches up his face at John in that usual manner he did before coming back at somebody with a snarky remark of his own.

“And so have Wraith darts.  You know it isn’t exactly like we’ve never come across a heavily wooded planet here before.”

Sheppard begrudgingly gives McKay that.

“But the Wraith have only ever culled in the open,” Teyla interjects, “My people as well as many other peoples have fled into the forests surrounding their villages to hide from the darts during cullings.”

John smiled, leave it to Teyla Emmagan, Super Mom, to save the day.  This time it’s McKay’s turn to shrug as a means of begrudgingly granting someone their point.  They return their attention to Woolsey.

“Indeed, the information we’ve acquired from the database is promising but…very minimal.  All we have on this planet is a brief description of the various plants that are apparently very effective as medicines and this world’s name but other than that…nothing.  That’s why I’m sending you in.  I want you to evaluate this planet and explore it.”

Ronon rolls his eyes, he hated exploring.  Woolsey catches this and chooses to address his next remarks to Ronon directly.

“I know it’s been a while since we’ve had the chance to explore anything but in light of recent events…,” he shoots a glance at Kenmore that again goes ignored by her, “A little calm might suit us all.”

That doesn’t exactly calm Ronon but Sheppard knows how Woolsey had been downright terrified he’d lost his shiny new ‘weapon’ on her first outing and frankly John was backing him all the way on this.  He hadn’t liked sitting across from Woolsey’s desk a few weeks ago, almost a month now, trying to figure out how he would have told the Lieutenant’s five-year-old son about his mother’s death.  It wasn’t something John was ready to maybe face again quite so soon.  And then there was the whole she assassinated another world’s leader thing, a couple of weeks ago that posed a problem too.  John would never hit a woman, he was too much of a gentleman, but he had shoved the Lieutenant back with his boot, practically kicked her.  He was ashamed of that, but she had pushed him to his limits let alone anyone else’s and John had had enough of that for the time being too.  He nods at Woolsey.  Woolsey nods back.

“Well then, if there’s nothing else—“

“Why didn’t any of you go back to Athosia,” Kenmore suddenly pipes up.

Everyone gapes at her and finally Lieutenant Kenmore looks up from the computer tablet.

Leave it to McKay’s slack-jaw to recover and answer first.

“What,” he exclaims.

“According to the original mission reports, there were ruins just across the lake from Miss Emmagan’s village,” she holds out the computer tablet she had been so engrossed by and points at it like they could read what it said, although Ronon might be able to since he was sitting closest to her, “You people thought that it might have had a ZPM somewhere in it, but after that first attack by the Wraith—“

Teyla cuts in, “It was not their first attack.”

“God, I know that, whatever…,” Teyla rolls her eyes, which was saying something about her tolerance for the Lieutenant right now, “Why didn’t you go back?”

“I don’t know maybe it had something to do with the fact that the Wraith already knew we were there,” Rodney snipes.

“So?”

Rodney stalls, he had not been expecting that, “What do you mean ‘so’?”

“The Wraith already knew you were there, they also, if there is any intelligence to their race, have gone back there and seen that the whole village had either been evacuated or, or,” she takes back the report and scrambles through it for a quick second then she finds what she was looking for, “…culled.  Culled?”  She looks closer at the tablet and wrinkles her nose at the sound of the word.  Well, John was somewhat happy to know their new Lieutenant at least didn’t like the sound of the word let alone the word itself or, and this was judging by the way she was suddenly working her mouth around the word as though it were a disgusting piece of food she was trying to get out of her mouth, that she didn’t like the taste of saying it either.  “Either way,” she went on, “you were clear because it was a place they already knew was empty.  They relied on you never going back and you played right into their hands.”

Ronon sits up.  He didn’t like anyone, especially the new Lieutenant with her last name, insinuating that his or anyone else in Atlantis’s actions were in any way governed by the Wraith.  And, of course, Rodney took offense too.

“We were busy trying to figure out just how screwed we were.”

“You had already figured out how screwed you were before you even went there in the first place.  That’s why you went there.”

Ooh, she had a point there.  It was Grodin’s discovery and Rodney’s belief in how screwed they were that had ultimately led to Elizabeth’s decision to send Sumner and John out to a gate address that Rodney had personally chosen from what part of the Ancient database he had been willing to use energy to access.  John wanted to smile, he always loved watching Rodney and Zelenka butt heads and frankly this was getting to be just as funny.  John turned his chair to look at Rodney.  He was game for a tennis match, besides the briefing had been pretty much how this mission was supposed to go:  boring.

“It was decided from let alone the Wraith attack on the village but also Sergeant Bates’ report that the ruins were going to be a dead end anyway.”

“But no one ever proved that.”

“We were busy trying not to die out here.”

“You were too busy to look for a power source to save your ass on your front lawn?”

McKay sits up, Sheppard fought the smile and the giggle starting to tickle his stomach, Oh he was revved up now, “It was not on our front lawn,” Rodney snarks.

“It was on hers,” Kenmore sticks her arm out at Teyla.

Rodney rolls his eyes although Sheppard felt the urge to do the same too, he didn’t, and he could see Teyla restraining herself on Rodney’s other side.

“Look we’ve already given it what consideration we could and it’s a ‘No’.”  And that was it.

McKay turns his chair back towards Woolsey so the man could finish up the briefing and each one of them could go to their own personal get-ready corners then meet back up in the Gateroom in an hour or so.  But like before, Kenmore didn’t back down easily in the face of adversity, apparently, especially in this room.

“Well I want to go there.”

McKay turns his chair back to face the Lieutenant, his mouth dropped open like a dead fish and absolutely horrified that anyone was questioning him.  Again if it were anyone else, John again had to fight the smile that threatened to naturally spread across his face and the giggle at Rodney’s expense that was now clawing his stomach, trying to get out.  Instead, John leans his arm on the table, extends a finger across his closed lips, and looks with raised eyebrows over at Rodney, and swivels his chair from a little bit from side to side just to make sure it was in good working order so he’d have no trouble watching the tennis match keep going.  Ding, ding, ding.  Players to your sides.   Doctor McKay, your serve…

“And I said no.”

“Maybe you didn’t hear me, I want to go there.”

And then she did something that surprised the hell out of Sheppard, she turned her chair to defer to Woolsey for back up.  McKay does too and John can’t help but turn both his raised eyebrows and his chair slowly towards Woolsey too.  Woolsey looks at Rodney then at Kenmore and rubs his hands together for a moment.  Sheppard’s eyebrows lower, he knows that sign.

“I think right now, we should stick to our current plan and visit Nerea,” at Woolsey’s proclamation, Kenmore, just like Sheppard had expected, scoffs and slumps back into her chair, “But I will take into consideration your proposal Lieutenant and ask that one of our other teams go over the database for any further information and I will also ask Doctor Keller and Teyla,” he nods to Teyla and she returns his nod, “to inquire further among the Athosian people about the ruins in the meantime.”

Kenmore doesn’t look happy but she keeps silent.  Woolsey takes that as an acquiesce, he claps his hands together.

“Well, since no one else has any further business, Colonel Sheppard your team has a go for an hour from now.”

With that, Woolsey begins to gather up his files and his notepad, signaling the end of the mission briefing.  Sheppard stands up and stretches, Well that was fun, as the other members of his team exit in their usual manners.  Quiet and graceful, an unhappy stalk, or a quick hot-footing while muttering exasperatedly under their breath.  Kenmore silently gathers up her mission briefing file, that had gone unopened, and her computer tablet.  For once she didn’t look like she wanted to break something or someone as she practically clawed her way out of here or like she thought whatever they had just been ordered to do was the dumbest thing she’s ever heard a team be ordered to do and why were they doing it.  John follows her quietly out of the room.  He hoped this quiet, calm, even, complaisant demeanor was signaling that she was learning to pick and choose which battles to fight and which ones not to and not make them suffer through her attitude in the meantime.

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Episode Three- The Ruins- Prologue

Prologue

Day clings to Atlantis—well, actually—morning.  The city’s spires appear all creamy and honey-colored in the light of its planet’s sun.  But the city’s interior did nothing to quell the sunlight shining through the many windows of the city itself, regardless if they were stained glass or not.  The city was kind of like NYC all day and all night long.  Just light constantly streaming through her quarters’ window.  In the beginning, she had welcomed the change in a way from the deep definitely dark woods that her backyard on Earth had ended at.  Now she found it a nuisance.  How was anyone supposed to actually get some sleep out here ‘cause the shades were worth crap…

The newly minted Lieutenant Kenmore, Lieutenant Ursula Kenmore still wearing her black t-shirt and green SGC BDU pants, walks around a corner with her head down focusing entirely on the computer tablet she’s carrying on her forearm.  She’d been instructed before to get used to one of these things…Woolsey.  Although she didn’t see why, it wasn’t like she planned on being here long enough to have to get used to using these tablet things.  She hadn’t had to back at Cheyenne Mountain and she didn’t see why she had to here, now.  Kenmore taps on it, waits for a moment, then taps again.  And they are God-awfully boring too.  The tablet’s screen is displaying a mission report:

SG-PATCH11

MISSION REPORT

Rising

Atlantis’s first mission.  Well if she had to get use to using these things, Kenmore figured now was as good time as any to see just how screwed she really was being stuck here with these people.  She taps the tablet and the text of the mission flips to the next page of Doctor Elizabeth Weir’s wordy report.

Weir was never really a succinct person, only when it came to detailing personnel progress reports, Kenmore’s noticed.  And even then those were a good, solid page complete with some of the tiniest and probably the most unhelpful photos Kenmore’s ever seen attached to personnel files.  Some things never change.  From what she remembered from being back at the SGC, Weir wasn’t exactly liked there.  Could you really blame her though in the beginning, she came in mowing over General Hammond which everyone had gone through Hell with and for more times than they had fingers and toes to count with.  It would be easy to hold a grudge against her at first, then she opened her mouth and started using her new command position and you realized ‘Yeah, we were right to hate you in the first place; you have no business being here.’  Kenmore remembered a distinct mass exhalation of breath when Weir’d been removed from the General’s chair at Cheyenne Mountain and replaced with Jack O’Neill and an even more profound seen of barely restrained cheer when word had spread through the program that Doctor Weir had been put in charge of the Antarctica base and then the Pegasus Expedition.  Kenmore distinctly remembered one of the line-cooks, of all people, saying “Thank God” when he heard.  Then when the Expedition filled the base for the inaugural launch, you could have heard a pin drop from the sudden and tensely held intake of collective breath when Weir said the words “we may only get the one chance at this so if we are able to achieve a stable wormhole…”  It was the “only one chance” and the “if” parts that had everyone’s heart racing behind the scenes for an entirely different reason than those down in the gateroom.  If this didn’t work, they might just be stuck with her for longer, a lot longer.  ‘Dear God, please let it make a stable connection’ sort of became the base’s collective prayer there for a moment in time.

Kenmore taps for the next page again, reading beyond the initial thrill of the city’s beauty:

It was more astonishing than anything I had dared to imagine.  Never, not once, had I believed we would find Atlantis intact.  At best I’d hoped for a vast ruin, undisturbed by looters and treated kindly by the ravages of time.  At worst I’d imagined dust or a hostile reception from the descendants of the gate builders.  But this…I tried to take it all in as I slowly climbed the stairs to the mezzanine level.  I could see Major Sheppard and Doctor McKay already up there, their voices mingling with the constant chatter that drifted through the vast chamber and the stream of static and awed voices that came over my radio.

My people were spreading out, exploring and securing this most alien of environments.  The first humans ever to stand here!  It was a giddying thought.

Big freakin’ Art Deco whoop, and the extraordinary feeling of the city coming to life at the arriving expedition’s presence:

It was already clear we were talking about technology that far surpassed our current understanding, but if we could just make sense of a fraction of it, the possible advances were beyond the power of my imagination.

Oh good Lord, the lights came on not the clouds parted and heavenly choirs started belting out Hallelujah at the top of their lungs, then the horror that the whole place at least followed myth in one respect:  it was entirely submerged and resting at the bottom of the ocean.

I was living a legend!

Oh my God…

Slowly I approached the glass.  Outside lay a vast city of sweeping spires and arching walkways, a beautiful city of ethereal elegance, all covered by a thin skin of energy.  I looked up and far above them I found the source of the mottled blue light that permeated the whole complex.  It was sunlight, filtered through the shimmering surface of a vast ocean.  We were underwater.

And the thin shield that was surrounding it and holding back all that water from crushing them was failing, and failing fast.  Kenmore couldn’t take it anymore.  She was just skipping as much of this crap she could from now on.  And then Weir went on and on about how horrible that was, yadda yadda—flip the page—and more ‘Oh woe is Atlantis,’ there again, yadda yadda—flip again—the necessary decision to expel precious energy by dialing the gate with a randomly selected gate address for an evacuation site.  Oh, well that was different; at least Weir had finally learned to make command decisions that didn’t involve sitting in a nice big chair behind an equally impressive desk.  But then again there was going on and on about the randomness, spoke too soon, Weir was back in Weir mode, and looking soldiers in the eye and watching them leave, sending them to their deaths:

He came to a stop in front of the gate, glanced up at the control room and noticed me watching them all.  I was frightened.  I slightly lifted my hand in greeting.  Major Sheppard acknowledged it with a nod and then turned toward Peter Grodin who stood in front of the Stargate….Tucking the GDO into his vest, Major Sheppard once more glanced up at me.  I knew I must have looked pale and worried in the blue light.  It was the first time I had to order my people into harm’s way, and so soon after arriving.  Trying to reassure me, Major Sheppard offered me a thumbs-up.  A ghost of a smile touched my lips, and with that he turned and followed Colonel Sumner, Lieutenant Ford and the two security teams through the Stargate.

Grab me a friggin’ hanky.  Could this be a little less about her and a little more about the mission.  No wonder Weir almost got thrown off the job when contact was re-established with Atlantis but no one was crazy enough to say ‘Oh no, stay here on Earth.

Flip, more yadda, woe is Weir rather than woe is Atlantis; big frickin’ shock.  Flip, and references to the following accounts being recorded here as third-person rehashed accounting from the following sources:  Sergeant Bates (original military leader Colonel Sumner’s right-hand guy), no real need for him, he wasn’t here anymore, Lieutenant Aiden Ford, likewise, Major (then) John Sheppard, okay, that’s worth a look, and Teyla Emmagan (the Expedition’s first alien contact), ditto.  Kenmore taps to the side of the report and brings up another window asking her what report she wants access to next and Kenmore types in two requests:  Major John Sheppard, Mission One and Teyla Emmagan, First Contact.

It takes a second but then the two files come up in their own separate windows.  Kenmore shuffles through Sheppard’s report’s first few pages.  He was essentially rehashing what Weir had reported initially too although far more succinctly than she had, perhaps a little too succinctly.  It was almost bordering on a boring read.  You could tell command was not his thing, he wrote like it.  Kenmore comes to the spot where Sumner’s team and Sheppard come out of the gate on the planet that they would later learn was named Athosia.

We stepped out the other side into darkness.  Our feet crunched on dead leaves and twigs.  We were near a forest.  Through my goggles I could see trees and the rest of the team crouching in their shadows.

Colonel Sumner signaled for us to spread out, then move out.  Still keeping low, I dodged to my right and kept on Colonel Sumner’s six as we began to make our way through the forest.

Gee don’t strain yourself getting all eloquent there.  Flip, some about the true First Contact and how Sheppard almost shot a little boy in the dark.

Then Colonel Sumner held up his fist and we all froze.  Waiting.  Listening – a sound was close and closing fast.  Someone – or something – was crashing through the undergrowth.  I raised my weapon.  The sound was behind us now.  I turned.  I could hear that there was more than one.

A shadow darted out of the trees thirty yards ahead.  Small, fast, creepy.  I signaled to Lieutenant Ford and we split up, circling to approach from opposite directions.

Alone in the woods, I moved through the undergrowth.  A twig snapped somewhere ahead of me, the sound of a scuffle and a high-pitched scream.  I started running.

In a small clearing up ahead I could make out Lieutenant Ford struggling to yank off his night-vision goggles while a short figure, I figured to be the source of the scream, cowered before him.

Another shape barreled out from the trees and broadsided the screaming creature and knocked it flying.

Then I heard a small voice say “Please don’t hurt us.”

Ford was staring, I slipped into the clearing with my weapon raised and asked Lieutenant Ford what did he have.

The second creature reached up and pulled off what was apparently its mask.

It was just a kid…

Oh that would have been a big help.  Blow some poor innocent farmboy away.  Oh gee sorry Luke Skywalker tell Uncle Owen ‘My Bad.’  Yeah that would have been lovely.  Flip, then about how the boy’s father took them to met his people’s leader, Teyla, and the official First Contact…Whoopie, could this take any longer, maybe Sheppard wasn’t any better at this crap than Weir was…and then something about the discovery of a set of ruins of an Ancient city across a lake from Teyla’s village when dawn brought brighter light with it.  Kenmore pauses there then taps over to Teyla’s First Contact report and flips through that till she comes to the part where Colonel Sumner, Sheppard, and Lieutenant Ford come to—or, well, at least asked—her about going into the city:

I accepted their information without speaking, but I was uncertain.  Then I told them that my people have long believed that the Wraith will come if we venture into the old city, but that it was a belief that we had not tested in some time.

Colonel Sumner did not answer, his eyes fell on Major Sheppard.  “Gentlemen,” he said then without further comment, he led Lieutenant Ford and Major Sheppard out.

After a few moments, Major Sheppard returned.

…Flip…

I asked him if indeed it was true that he and your people could not return to your world.  Major Sheppard said that you could not.  It was then that I believed I must show him the caves—

Kenmore stops in the middle of the hallway…Wait, what?  She urgently brings back up Sheppard’s report, flip:

The something turned out to be quite a hike from the village.  The forest was dense and foot-tangling.

We kept walking through the trees until I saw a short wall of rock ahead of us.

I asked her if this was it.

She nodded.

The sand-colored stone was broken in sharp angles, and vines and other forest life covered the entrance.  A narrow, barely visible path cut through the dense undergrowth.  Teyla led the way along the trail.  She told me she hadn’t been there in a long time.

I followed her and saw a low, narrow doorway that had been cut into the rock.  It looked like this place had once been a natural cave maybe that had been widened and squared-off and now hidden by the brush.

I knew it was a breach of protocol, but Colonel Sumner had ordered me to find out everything I could so, keeping my weapon ready, I followed Teyla into the cave which actually turned out to be more like a system of caves.

She told me she used to play in them as a child.  She believes it’s where the survivors of her village hid from the Wraith during their last great attack…

Yeah, she had read it right.  Cave, a system of caves in fact.  And inside were drawings—no, carvings, he calls them carvings—and…Kenmore refers back to Teyla’s report, yes drawings and how they tell the story of the Wraith’s cullings of her people maybe dating back thousands of years.

Whoa, wait, ‘maybe’?  Didn’t these people know?  Kenmore goes back and forth between the two recounts of the private exchange and…that’s just it, ‘maybe’?  What the hell’s with this ‘maybe?’  Didn’t anybody go back and check?

Kenmore starts walking again, still engrossed by the information on the tablet.  She brings up a search directory and tries to bring up more and more files referencing these ruins, or these caves, after all the whole point of the mission wasn’t just to find a safe haven in case Atlantis’s dam decided to break but to find a Zero Point Module no longer being used to stop that from happening in the first place.  With all of Atlantis’ power problems after the city rose, even after they survived the assault on Teyla’s village shortly after this exchange in this temple and Atlantis rising due to her failsafes so that temporarily alleviated the urgent need for power and translated it to a more pressing need for it, wouldn’t Weir, someone, anyone, have sent back a team to check things out on Athosia?  Flip, flip, flip…But no, Kenmore tries every database this tablet is going to let her have access to, and there wasn’t a damn thing saying anything further about the Ancient ruins by Teyla’s village on her homeworld or those freakin’ caves.  No one had been back since Teyla’s people had abandoned it in order to seek refuge in Atlantis amongst the Expedition.  No one, not even a whisper of going back to check on it.

Kenmore stops dead in her tracks, finally looking up from the tablet with a look of disgust on her face.  She flails her free hand…

“What the hell?”

…and it slaps against the side of her leg.

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