Episode One- The Fifth- Chapter Two

Chapter Two

There’s dead silence.  It was not the reaction Woolsey had been hoping for but he is determined to get it as he ignores the looks of Sheppard’s team and extends a warm greeting to the new arrival.

“Welcome to Atlantis, Lieutenant.”

Lieutenant Kenmore falters.

“At-what?”

She walks slowly past Sheppard and his team, to Woolsey’s desk.  With each step, John can see whole new sets of muscles in her body tense, even underneath the BDUs.

“I was not trained for Atlantis.  I did not sign up for Atlantis.  What the hell am I doing in Atlantis,” she builds from whatever calm she had had to thoroughly pissed and shouts her final words at him.

Holy crap is the first thing to come across Sheppard’s mind.

Woolsey’s smile disappears.

“You signed up for this I assure you.”

“Really,” Kenmore doesn’t believe him.

She leans on Woolsey’s desk.  Woolsey pulls one of the papers out of one of the many neat and tidy piles on his desk and hands it to Kenmore.  She reads it and gains the same shock on her face Sheppard had had.

“You signed up for this,” Woolsey reiterates, “I assure you.”

Kenmore looks up at him.

“But I signed up for SG-4, maybe a higher ranking position on SG-5.”

Woolsey gets to his feet, “You should really read the fine print.”

Kenmore turns and snaps her orders out of Sheppard’s hands.  Well John could have done without that.  She shows the paper to Woolsey.

“What fine print?  It’s as plain as day.”

Richard points at a small line at the bottom of the writing, a line Kenmore had signed above, “There.”

Kenmore looks at it.

“That’s a line. You sign above it.  It doesn’t say anything.”

Woolsey’s secret-keeping smile returns.  He opens the right drawer of his desk, reaches in, pulls a magnifying glass out, and hands it to Kenmore as he finally leaves the safety of behind his desk.  She gives him a suspicious look, but puts the glass to the paper.  She keeps her head down.  She doesn’t want him to know it, but she can’t believe her eyes.  The line isn’t a line.  Instead she sees tiny letters confirming what Woolsey had said.  A secret transfer slipped in right under her nose—or in this case, right underneath her name.

“What the hell is this,” she snaps at him without looking up.

“The fine print.”

“So, what, you’ve got a sleigh and a team of reindeer up on the roof for me?”

Woolsey ignores her and heads for the door, but Sheppard puts a hand to Woolsey’s chest to stop him.  The Commanders meet each other’s eyes.

“We don’t need her,” Sheppard says.

“She doesn’t want you,” Kenmore pipes up.

Sheppard looks at her.

“Well at least we’re on the same page.”

Kenmore nods at him and Sheppard returns his gaze to Woolsey.

“It’s not really your call, Colonel,” Woolsey informs him, “You do need her and she is your fifth.”

No one looks pleased with the exception of Woolsey, but it’s a tie for first in who looks the unhappiest:  Kenmore or Sheppard.  John just might be winning, he really has to hold himself in and so does the rest of his team, but where John is barely succeeding, some of the other members of his team aren’t quite so successful.

“We don’t need a fifth,” Ronon pipes up darkly.

“I don’t see what the problem is.  SG-1 took on Vala Mal Doran and it turned out quite nicely,” Woolsey tries to smooth.

“Who is Vala Mal Doran,” Teyla asks.  And John had to remind himself that the last time Vala Mal Doran had come to Atlantis, Teyla had not been in the city at the time.  She had been with her people.  She had not met the woman in question at all, heard her name tossed around perhaps through conversation, but had never actually met her.

“SG-1’s fifth,” Kenmore answers, “And she was a conartist with warrants out for her arrest and death sentences all over the Milky Way.  She came to us seeking sanctuary.”

“And you took her in,” Teyla asks, not quite understanding the logic and not quite believing it.  She was proud of human compassion, but with all the effort and work it took for the IOA to accept her and Ronon when there was truly no strikes to be held against them to join the Atlantis Expedition, she was more than a little shocked to hear that this Vala Mal Doran woman was accepted despite all the claims against her.

“Yeah, she had useful information and artifacts she’d stolen to give us.”

Teyla nods at the Lieutenant, finally understanding that it was merely a trade, a very high-stakes trade, but a trade nonetheless.  Her people dealt in trades, although perhaps they would not have taken this one.  If they had known who the Genii really were, they would not have set up a trading relationship with them.

Woolsey looks uncomfortable at Kenmore’s words.

“Yes, well the circumstances of Miss Mal Doran’s entrance into the SGC aside, she has proven to be an incredible asset to her team—“

“Yeah, thieves are handy that way,” Kenmore cuts him off.

Woolsey’s frown is the only sign that he acknowledges Kenmore’s statement, but otherwise he ignores her comment, “and I didn’t see why such a success could not come here to Atlantis.”

“We’ve been successful enough on our own.”

Woolsey looks unconvincingly at Ronon.

“Forgive me Ronon, but there is always room for improvement.”

Ronon starts towards Woolsey, but Sheppard puts out an arm to stop his friend.  Not before Woolsey retreats slightly at Ronon’s imposing figure.  That was another thing Ronon had fallen back on, physically challenging anybody whose opinions he didn’t particularly agree with.  It was the one thing that had bugged the crap out of John when Ronon first joined the team.  He kept having to make everything an order for the big guy, even when John and the rest of the team had been bound and trapped in a shack and had had to make the comment that he couldn’t have even ordered a pizza but if the big Satedan needed anything and everything to be an order, fine it’s an order.  Eventually Ronon got over the order thing and learned to trust John’s judgment as well as the rest of the team’s.  But with Amelia gone, Ronon had slid back into the nasty habit.  Ignoring the Satedan’s aggression or perhaps piggybacking off of it, the new Lieutenant Kenmore pipes up.

“You can’t put me on this team.  The minute you put me on this team you’re saying this team isn’t good enough anymore, that they aren’t working.  That the next time they go through that gate there’s a pretty darn good chance that one of them might not be coming back.”

Woolsey looks at her.

“That may be the case.”

Sheppard starts at this, there was absolutely no call for that, but Kenmore steps forward with a rage that seems more than required for the situation to Sheppard’s way of thinking.

“There is always a chance they’ll come back,” she roars.

Everyone eyes her in silence.  Sheppard knows all too well the SGC’s motto of ‘No man left behind’ and the fervor by which the military members of the SGC, himself included, lived by the saying, but Kenmore’s explosion at the mere hint of someone getting left back was more than any Sheppard could muster.  Although truth be told, since the death of the Expedition’s original military leader, Colonel Sumner, the hard loss of Lieutenant Aiden Ford, the self-sacrifice of Doctor Elizabeth Weir which John took even harder, and every other loss this Expedition had ever suffered, John felt like he could have the same sort of rage in him, knew it actually, but he’d never let it get far enough for an outburst like that.

Major Lorne walks up to the door behind them all.  He takes stock of the tense situation for a moment then knocks on the glass.  The tension doesn’t exactly abate but everyone’s attention shifts to him.

“Hey Urs, didn’t know you were here,” Lorne smiles.

The first thing that Sheppard notices is how warm and genuine the Major’s smile is.  He’s never seen Lorne give anybody that look and the man downright coos at Torren.  Well it’s clear that the Major knew the Lieutenant pretty well, at least well enough to know her nickname.  Urs?  Now the truth would truly be told if the woman returned the sentiment.  Sheppard looks at her.  Kenmore looks uncomfortable, but answers.

“Yeah Lorie, didn’t know myself.”

Lorie?  Okay, she at least acknowledged his familiarity.  But still…Lorie?  His nickname is Lorie?

Lorne presses on.

“Guess who I found in the Command Center?”

When she doesn’t answer, Lorne steps aside to reveal a five-year old boy hiding behind him, with definitely not Kenmore’s hair.  The kid’s was blonde, but definitely her eyes, startling bright brown things—Sheppard pauses for a moment, he hadn’t realized that he’d noticed the unwelcomed woman’s eyes like that.  He’s dressed in makeshift SGC gear.  Clearly Stargate Command wasn’t used to the transportation of children let alone keeping them around long enough that they would need clothing courtesy of the SGC.  Kenmore starts towards the little boy.

“Oh my God, Michael,” Sheppard felt his heart start at the name and felt his body go simultaneously numb; the little boy is named Michael, “I told you to stay with our luggage.  What did you think you were doing?”

The team shoots each other looks.  John could only imagine what fresh hell Teyla was going through.  Michael Kenmore.  Yep, this wasn’t funny, not that it really had been before.

“I was bored so I followed you,” the little boy says.

“Really?  So how did Mommy end up here and you ended up there,” Kenmore points behind the child to the darkened Command Center filled with consoles and Atlantis personnel.  There was a staffer sitting at each and every one of the consoles, some of them observing the hustle and bustle in the gateroom down below, and there were even a few staffers standing in front of wall displays analyzing data.  Some ran into the center, consulted with one or more of those present, then ran back out again.

Mommy, it was hard to think of their Michael Kenmore having a mother.  Sheppard shook himself.  This little boy was not their Michael Kenmore despite the name.

The boy looks back into the Command Center and takes the moment to think of an answer.  He looks back at his mother.

“I couldn’t keep up,” he tries.

Kenmore crosses her arms over her chest and gives the boy a downright patented The Look.  The Mommy Look that says I’m not buying a single word your saying.  It was a look Sheppard knew Teyla hadn’t mastered yet because Torren was still so young why would she and the little guy could smile or coo and melt her in a heartbeat, but Kenmore had it down.  John felt the urge to shift under the sheer presence of The Look.  The woman’s Mommy Look reminded him of his mother’s.  And he remembered being the one the patented subdued glare was aimed directly at on more than one occasion.

“Nice try,” she tells her son.  And John silently agreed, That was weak.

Michael immediately descends into any child’s response to the Look:  pleading whining.

“But Mom, I’m hungry.”

Now that one she might actually buy.

“You’re hungry?”

Michael nods.  Kenmore looks at Lorne.  Lorne catches on to the frustration brewing on her face.  It wasn’t that difficult for him to see, the woman’s eyes were pleading and her eyebrows looked nanoseconds away from furrowing in distress.

“Can you…,” she trails off and Lorne starts to nod his head.

“I can take him to get something.”

“Thank you.”  Her eyes were relieved and maybe her brows too, but the muscles in her shoulders were still tense and that spoke volumes on what might be to come when her son was no longer in sight of her.

Lorne takes Michael’s hand and leads the little boy away.  Kenmore watches them go.  She’s so attentive to every step of their way.  It’s a mother’s gut reaction.  Sheppard’s seen Teyla do it every single time Kanaan walks away from her carrying their son in his arms.  Of course that was with the full knowledge and memory of the time their Michael Kenmore had taken control of the city and had targeted and hunted down both Teyla and the child in particular for the baby boy’s DNA and his mother’s company.  As soon as Lorne and the kid were out of sight, Kenmore looks away and rubs the bridge of her nose.  The tension returns to its previous visibility.  Yep, John had pegged that one right.

“God I’ll feel better about this when I get him into school,” she’s says out loud, more to herself than to anyone else actually in the room.  But…

McKay starts at this, “There is no school here.”  Sheppard can’t help but notice Richard slowly beginning to back further away from Kenmore in retreat to the relative safety of his Command desk again.

Kenmore’s head shoots up, “What?”

Woolsey immediately turns to go but Kenmore reaches an arm out behind her without looking and manages to flawlessly latch onto the back of Woolsey’s collar and uses his forward momentum to jerk the man to a jolting stop.  Sheppard doesn’t nod but he admires the tactic.  However his admiration is short-lived.

Kenmore breaks into a smile that borders on practically hysterical.  And John feels the urge to back away from her himself.  McKay looks scared by its bizarre joviality but answers anyway.

“We don’t have a school here.”

Kenmore starts giggling, McKay backs up and positions himself slightly behind Teyla.   Kenmore deteriorates into laughter as she turns to face Woolsey.  He looks into her face.  Suddenly the laughter is gone but the frighteningly perky, beaming smile remains.

“They told me there was a school here.”

Suddenly the smile is gone too.  She lets go of him and roars in his face.

“They told me there was a school here!”

“They also told you you were still in the Milky Way Galaxy,” Woolsey adds.

That was stupid.  In a rush, Kenmore draws her gun from her hip and points it at Woolsey.  Sheppard yanks his hands out of his pockets but he’s not fast enough to do anything more than that.  He hadn’t expected her to be that fast.  Frankly, he hadn’t expected her to draw period.  Whenever anyone else gets pissed at Woolsey, they usually just thought about drawing their pistol, they never actually did it.  Their revenge usually amounted to taking an extraordinarily long time getting their reports to him, which drove the pencil-pusher satisfyingly nuts until the paper-filled manila folders were in his hands or on neatly placed on his desk.  And besides, John didn’t have his gun with him, that didn’t mean he wasn’t armed though.  Woolsey practically leaps back away from her.

“You can’t do that,” his frightened voice warbles.

Kenmore stares him down.

“Do you honestly think anybody in this room’s gonna stop me?”

Sheppard takes the consideration.  Maybe he might.  He glances over at the rest of his team.  Rodney is now fully hidden behind Teyla, seeing as how Teyla stepped forward to try and protect Woolsey herself, and, like Sheppard, had been caught offgaurd by Kenmore’s lashing out.  So Rodney wasn’t going to stop her and neither was Teyla but ‘maybe’ was definitely in Teyla’s category.  Ronon had his hand on his gun.  Okay, so Ronon would beat them all to it if it came to that.  Sheppard looks back at Woolsey’s situation.  Yeah, they were good.  They could stop her…if they had to.

Suddenly klaxons Kenmore has never heard before begin to blare.  She looks around.

“What the hell is that?”

Woolsey takes the opportunity, which Sheppard thought was both a good call and a lucky one given the circumstances, to dive past her and scamper out of his office to the Command Center.  Kenmore spins around to let her eyes follow Woolsey’s fleeing form as Chuck the Technician’s voice makes the announcement over the city-wide speakers…

“Unscheduled incoming wormhole.”

“Lucky,” she says under her breath.

You have no idea, Sheppard thought and everyone follows Woolsey though not as fast as the former attorney had moved.

 

 

Woolsey enters the Command Center and takes up position at Chuck’s side at the Stargate’s dialing interface.

“What’s going on?”

“Sergeant Stackhouse’s team is coming in hot, Sir.”

“Lower the iris.”  Chuck obeys.

Blasts erupt from the new wormhole.  Sheppard and his team arrive with Kenmore as Stackhouse’s team staggers out of the wormhole and fall to the ground.  The wormhole shuts down.  Woolsey, Sheppard’s team, and Kenmore race down the stairs to the gateroom and to Stackhouse’s side.

“What happened,” Woolsey asks as Chuck puts the call out over the city speakers for a medical response team to the gateroom.

Stackhouse is winded but manages to gasp a reply like a good marine…

“Wraith.  Dozens of them,” he looks up at Sheppard and shakes his head, “There was nothing…nothing we could do…We just had to run for it.”

Sheppard nods at him and pats his comrade’s shoulder.  Everyone looks on with a mixture of relief and disappointment.  It was great the team returned but that was yet another gate address that had to be earmarked as tremendously hostile.  It was the fifth, supposedly uninhabited planet, in a row that turned out to have a strong Wraith foothold presence.

“And that bastard made me bring my kid,” Kenmore says under her breath and Sheppard hears it.

He looks back past the rest of his team to Kenmore as she looks on from the foot of the stairs behind them.  Teyla and Rodney spread out to the rest of Stackhouse’s team members to give as much help and get as much information as they can.

 

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Episode One- The Fifth- Chapter One

(Just to clear up some things brought up in comments at Gateworld, the events of this story take place three months after those in the Stargate Atlantis movie Stargate Extinction, whose few details that have been released about the movie are occasionally referenced throughout this Season Six series and can be found both on Joe Mallozzi’s own WordPress blog and Gateworld.net.)

Chapter One

It was home.  It was a completely different galaxy but it was home.  It had become home a little over five years ago now.  They had fought to get here, fought to stay here, and fought to get back to here.  Even though there was no other way to categorize themselves out in the universe as anything other than Earthlings, the peoples of Earth, it was perhaps after that first battle in defense of the formerly lost city of Atlantis at the end of their first year here in the Pegasus Galaxy that they started to also think of themselves as Lanteans as well.  Now…it was hard to think of themselves as Earthlings still.  Yes, they defended the very planet Earth itself from the Wraith and a Superhive, but they had defended her with the city.  And when they floated into San Francisco Bay under the safety of the cloak, they thought of themselves as Lanteans simply visiting their first homeworld after a long time away from her.  After the honeymoon period on Earth, they all wanted nothing more than to return their city back to their new homeworld in their new home galaxy.  And they did.

The Atlantis wormhole establishes with its usual flush and the newcomers from Earth come pouring out.  Some with bags, some with containers of supplies.  Some of the already established Atlantis personnel walking around the perimeter of the gateroom come to help the newcomers struggling with crates or boxes or bags and some come to welcome the new personnel already assigned to them, while others continue on their way to their respective jobs.  One newcomer, a young, full-figured Hispanic woman with long, naturally curly, brown hair pulled back into a ponytail and bright, brown eyes wearing SGC-grade green BDUs, comes out of the gate into the middle of the embarkation floor and stares around her in amazement.  Something small lightly bumps into her from behind, but it doesn’t faze her any and she keeps looking around.  Finally, her eyes land on what she can only guess would be the Operation Commander’s office.  She can’t see who’s inside.  She looks around her immediate area.  There doesn’t seem to be anyone free to help her either.  She stares at the glowing stairs ahead of her…

“Wait here,” she says.

…and heads for them.

 

 

Richard Woolsey, wearing the uniform of the Commander of Atlantis that he’s become so accustomed to, sits at his desk milling about with his papers and files and eyeing the notepad never truly far from him.  Finally he stands up and walks over to his window’s view of the gateroom below.  His city is putting its best foot forward for her new residents.  Sunlight is beaming through her stained glass windows creating the most stunning, colorful light mosaic he could ever ask for across the Gatetrium, as it was lovingly nicknamed by her more settled denizens, floor.

He observes the new arrivals filing through the active gate with a subdued smile.  How could they not want to stay here?  How could they not want to be here in the first place?  Although it was not commonly known, Richard had, behind-the-scenes, vied for the position of the Atlantis Expedition’s new commander.  It was not that Colonel Samantha Carter had been failing, that she had proven to be an ineffectual leader, quite the opposite, but it was quite simply that the IOA had wanted and believed that since Atlantis had been meant all along to be a scientific expedition, that required, as it had in the first place, a political decision of appointing a civilian leader, not a military one.  So when the rumors had started to circulate within that the IOA’s top people were considering a command shake-up in Atlantis, Richard himself had put forward the suggestion that Carter be replaced.  His suggestion had been turned into reality and it had left a gap wide-open for him to put his name into the ring for the job and subtly fight to keep it there.  The IOA had accepted but, of course, with the specific clarification that Richard was a fill-in, a temporary replacement while the IOA head-hunted around for someone that would fill the position on a permanent basis.  That had been fine with him, the whole reason he had set all those wheels in motion was for one simple fact:  he wanted to prove himself.  He wanted to prove he could do this, period.  His strength laid in his knowledge of the rules and regulations and protocols laid out by both and he had taken into consideration the very real reality that sometimes all three of those strengths had to be bended and flexed in order to do this job at all.  And at the end of his first year in command, and with the handy help of a shape-shifting, consciousness-altering alien, he had both passionately proven and earned the right to stay in Atlantis as its permanent commander.

Colonel Sheppard, Ronon, Teyla, and Rodney approach him quickly through his ever open office door.  Woolsey hears the footsteps and his quiet smile shifts to the one someone wears when they know they have a secret that no one else has and they’re about to spill it.  He turns around to face the one man he had been expecting to see.

“Ah, Colonel Sheppard.  I’m glad you’re here,” his smile quickly dies on his face and what would have been his next words evade him as well, as he notices Ronon, Teyla, and McKay, the people he had not expected to see; disgruntled, he recovers, “and the rest of your team.”

The team exchanges looks between each other as Woolsey returns to his seat behind his desk and Sheppard already knows he’s in the doghouse for bringing along others he hadn’t been expressly told to bring along.  Sheppard walks up to his boss’ desk with his hands still in his pant’s pockets.

“Yeah, well, you said you had something to tell me.”

Woolsey checks his labtop one more time, taps a few buttons, and seems satisfied with whatever he’s seeing on its screen before he addresses Colonel Sheppard once again.

“We have new arrivals from Earth coming in today.”

Sheppard has to fight to keep from rolling his eyes or breaking into something that couldn’t be misconstrued as anything other than the blatant disregard for the chain-of-command that it would be, but behind him, Ronon rolls his eyes and the others lose whatever slight tension they had had at any actual urgency Woolsey might have really had.

“We can see that,” Sheppard tries to put a nice spin on it but he can hear the irritation in his own voice and he hopes his commander didn’t hear it.

Woolsey smiles again but it’s not as sincere as before.  Nope, he did.

“Yes, well, they’ve brought something with them,” McKay rolls his eyes at Woolsey’s words and glances at the people hauling containers around the gateroom below like irritating little ants he’s going to have to put up with for God only knows how insufferably long, “they’ve brought something for you.”

McKay suddenly looks down at the gateroom again with considerably more interest.  Well from here they didn’t look like little ants so much as treasure-laden magi.  Please, please stay as long as you like—well, at least your stuff can stay for as long as I would like.

Even Sheppard bites.

“And that would be?”

There’s a knock on the glass of the doorway behind them.  Sheppard, Ronon, Teyla, and McKay all turn around to see a Hispanic woman wearing green SGC BDUs standing in the crystal, clear glass framed doorway.

“Does anybody know where I can find a,” she refers to a piece of paper in her hand, “Lieutenant Colonel John Sheppard?”

Sheppard shifts his hands in his pockets and looks at her, a little wary, but answers…

“You found him.”

The woman steps forward and hands the paper to him.  Sheppard takes the paper and reads it.  His wary expression descends into disbelief, he actually pales a little.  He looks back up at the woman.

“I’m Lieutenant Ursula Kenmore,” she introduces herself.

“Your fifth,” Richard says from behind his desk.

Sheppard and his team stare back in shock at Woolsey’s proudly beaming face, reclaiming the glee that he had been robbed of at the sight of Ronon, Teyla, and Doctor McKay tagging along behind the Colonel.  The woman is still unaware of a problem.

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Episode One- The Fifth- Dedication and Prologue

Dedicated to my Mother:

Go raibh maith agat Momma.  Go raibh míle maith agat an méid sin chun a chreidiúint i dom.  Go raibh maith agat as a bheith ann i gcónaí go dtí mé agus mo chuid oibre riamh agus a thabhairt suas ar cheachtar de dúinn.  Tá súil agam go breá leat an scéal seo agus bhí sé ag Mamaí fiú do fóill.

(Thank you Momma.  Thank you so much for believing in me.  Thank you for always being there for me and my work and never giving up on either of us.  I hope you love this story Mommy and it was worth your wait.)

Prologue

“Ah c’mon Buddy,” Lieutenant Colonel John Sheppard leans back leisurely against the wall acting as the headboard of his bed in his quarters on Atlantis with his hands behind his head and facing one of his closest friends, Ronon Dex.

The Satedan was sitting on one of the big gray vinyl upholstered chairs beside John’s bed and morosely looking down at his fingers which were fidgeting.  He looked so pathetic.  John tried again.

“Look I know you’re bummed out that Amelia is gone.  But look at it this way, yeah, she got that big promotion she wanted and that meant a transfer back to Earth for her, but she did get a promotion.  So…this is a good thing.”

Ronon looked up at him, not buying a single word.  John kept trying.

“Really.”

Still not buying it.  Still trying.

“For her.”

Still not.  Damn.

John felt like he should say something else, keep trying, but he didn’t know what else to say.

Ronon held his gaze for a moment of silence longer then lowered it down to his fingers again.  Well that was the “Taps” bugle call on that relationship.  And John was left to realize he had already said everything he should say, now he had to try to figure out just what he could say to his friend that would help the bugle call become a bit more distant when the voice of Richard Woolsey, the Atlantis Expedition’s latest and finally permanent leader, John liked the sound of that, sounded off in his ear…

“Woolsey to Colonel Sheppard.”

Sheppard put his fingers up to his earpiece and activated it.

“Sheppard here.”

“Good morning Colonel.  I want you in my office as soon as possible.  Believe me when I say it’s urgent.”

John rolled his eyes.  What had he liked about ‘permanent leader’ again?  Richard Woolsey had a tendency, even after serving a year already as Atlantis’ leader, to think everything was urgent.  It was hard to take him serious anymore especially when he himself sounded quite perky.  What urgent thing in Atlantis ever evoked perkiness in people?

“Be right there.”  The earpiece’s channel closes on Woolsey’s end and automatically on John’s.

John pushed himself up from his comfortable recline to sit on the edge of his bed and looked at Ronon.  The Satedan looked just as melancholy as ever. Then John stood up and stretched.  He looked down at Ronon again.  Maybe if he looked at Ronon enough the big guy would snap out of it.

“Let’s go see what’s so urgent with him today.”

Ronon stood up too and, keeping his head down, headed for the door.

“Let’s go,” he grumbles to the floor.

John watched the door to his room open at the sheer presence of his friend.  Well that was a big fat ‘No,’ how was he supposed to stare his friend back into the land of the living unromantic if the big baby never looked him in the eye occasionally?  Then he followed too.

Ronon hadn’t stopped and waited for John to catch up like he normally did.  He just kept walking.  Of course, these days Ronon rarely did things the way he used to—well, sort of.  In fact, he seemed to have reverted back to the way he was when he first arrived in Atlantis.  That wasn’t necessarily helpful.  It had taken a year to get Ronon out of his shell and even then it had taken a big catastrophic thing like being taken back to Sateda by the Wraith and hunted around it all over again to do it.  It had taken John weeks of stalking the Satedan using both Atlantis’ internal sensors and his own knack with a lifesigns detector before he first encountered Ronon alone on the north pier when Ronon first arrived at and started staying in Atlantis.  That night the big guy had drawn his sword on Sheppard, John had expected an aggressive reaction but not ‘I’m gonna lop your head off if you hide in the shadows much longer’.  Then it was another set of weeks after that when, using the lifesigns detector again, Sheppard tracked Ronon’s movements and predicted he was heading towards one of the city’s grounding stations.  So John beat the warrior there, took a seat on the railing, dangling his legs over the ocean, and simply watched the detector and waited for Ronon to ‘accidentally’ walk into him.  When Ronon finally did show up, John started his inane babbling about the ocean’s awesome waves.  In fact, John believed his first words to tempt the Satedan to stay and listen had been:  “Good swells here.”  And it started from there.  Some ‘run-ins’ involved inane babbling about football or flying choppers, that one usually John couldn’t help himself and he ended up way too into the talk and started gesturing maneuvers.  But apparently that had worked on Ronon because one night, months after the pier run-in, he finally spoke to John, actually was the one to initiate conversation.  And it had been about the Runner’s past.  John had made a politely casual comment on the single line.  And another two months later the Satedan got his follow-up sentence out and a third one, still more about his Runner past.  John added two comments to balance out Ronon’s two.  And without necessarily rushing him, John got Ronon to be comfortable around him, trust him…John wasn’t sure that there was going to be another monumental disaster as big as returning to Sateda heading their way any time soon to snap Ronon out of his self-inflicted solitary confinement, but dammit there had to be something.  John pauses in the hallway to make sure his door closed before walking on.

Doctor Rodney McKay, Atlantis’ resident genius, comes around the corner behind him and quickly joined John in lagging behind and observing Ronon from a distance.  After a few feet, McKay leaned over to Sheppard.

“Is he still moping about Amelia?”

Sheppard nods, “Yeah.”

“It’s been three weeks,” Rodney can’t believe this.

“Hey just imagine how’d you feel if Jennifer got transferred back to Earth as a part of her promotion and ended the relationship you two share for as close to forever as we get around here short of a body bag?”

McKay’s step falters.  John really wanted to say ‘See, told ya’ so’, but Rodney’s step recovers quickly.  His suddenly horrified face didn’t.

As they continue to follow Ronon down the hall towards a transporter, Teyla Emmagan, Atlantis’ resident SuperMom, John liked calling her that, having just left her son Torren with her partner Kanaan, comes out of a hallway and falls into step beside Sheppard.  She quickly ascertains that they are more or less trailing Ronon.

“Is he still…,” she trailed off delicately for her friend’s sake.

“Yeah,” John answers.

Teyla nods, understanding that this was going to be more complicated and more difficult than when Ronon was forced to give up his hopes of a long-lasting relationship with Doctor Jennifer Keller, Atlantis’ chief of medicine, when Jennifer chose Rodney over Ronon.

“You know I can still hear you,” Ronon said loud enough for them behind him to hear.

The team paused and shot each other looks.  No, they hadn’t actually realized that, but thanks for finally mentioning it.  Although after all these years with him, they should have.  His hearing was just as good as Teyla’s and he’s proven it on countless missions.

Ronon was forced to stop and wait at the transporter while someone else was in transit inside.  It gave enough time for the rest of his team to catch up with him.  The silence was an awkward moment quickly snuffed out of existence by their scientist genius’ ever present ability to turn any situation back to revolve around himself.

“So what are we all doing today,” Rodney chimed in and everyone knew that Rodney only ever did that for one of two reasons: a) he’s working on something exciting to tell everyone and anyone about or b) he has absolutely nothing to do.  Neither was an option that necessarily required anyone to answer, McKay would let them know either way, but John played along anyway.  What the hell, he was bored and after all they were just waiting around basically for a free elevator to arrive on their floor.

“Woolsey called me.  Wants me in his office immediately.  Apparently it’s urgent,” John tells him.

“Oooh,” Rodney cooed sounding just as alarmed as everyone else was.

“Ronon’s coming with me.”

Suddenly McKay’s whole demeanor shifted into just as perky as Woolsey had sounded.

“Ooh, can I go too?”

Okay, so it was b).  John nods.

“Sure, what the hell.”

Both men looked at Teyla expectantly as Ronon continued to mope by the door.  She took the hint from their eyes and rose to the bait.

“I believe I have some free time as well.  May I join you?”

John shrugs with his hands in his pant’s pockets.

“Why not.  The more, the merrier.”

The door finally opens and sullen Ronon steps inside.  His teammates exchange a glance with each other.  Okay, perhaps merrier was not the right word right now.  Then they stepped in, the door closed, and Sheppard reached out and pressed the button that would take them to the transporter closest to the Gateroom and Woolsey’s office.  Oh yeah, he was looking forward to the rest of today.  McKay was bored, Ronon was still moping around from the loss of his girlfriend, and Teyla was simply playing along just like he was except she could get away from it all by just saying she had to go check on Torren or she wanted some time alone with Kanaan.  Oh yeah, how much worse could today get?

(Chapter One will be posted next Friday!)

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Episode One- The Fifth- Front Cover

Well, due to continued silence on an actual publishing-in-print front, I’ve finally decided to release my Stargate Atlantis stories as fan fiction doled out through a blog.  Each week will feature a new chapter of the “book”.  That way I get reader feedback immediately and know how I’m doing according to my audience.  I first got the idea actually from Stargate Atlantis writer and producer Joe Mallozzi’s blog, so thanks Joe!  And I hope everyone likes this.

Each book/episode’s first entry will be what on an actual in your hand book would be the front and back covers.  Then the book’s final entry will be the Epilogue as well as the Acknowledgements for that particular story.

Well, here it goes!

SG-1 got theirs in the form of Vala Mal Doran, now Atlantis’ flagship team gets a new team member…

The heroic men and women of the once lost Ancient city-ship known in legend as Atlantis have returned their beloved city to the Pegasus Galaxy.  The journey was dangerous, but now they are home.

Things return to normal, well…As some old personnel transfer out of the city back to Earth, including someone very near and dear to a member of the flagship team, new personnel arrives including a brand new Lieutenant…and her young child.  But all is not as it seems.

Betrayal and a tide-turning secret lies at the heart of her arrival.  Changing the dynamics of the city’s senior staff forever.  The city has a history of poor luck with Lieutenants, can this young woman survive?

Her first mission with her new team may test her to her life’s limits, but it will also reveal that an old enemy that Atlantis believed dead and cremated is alive and well and not finished with them yet.

So, want to read more?

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