Episode Seven- Home Again, Part One- Chapter Eight

(My pardon that this wasn’t posted last Friday, but there was a death in my family and I quite simply wanted to be with my family.)

Chapter Eight

A distant rumble draws Kenmore’s attention away from Ronon. She looks in the direction she thinks it’s coming from, as though she could see through the door’s wall. There’s another explosion. Then more. Suddenly they stop. Kenmore’s head snaps back to Ronon.

“Lay down,” she begs him.

“Go get the gun and help them,” Ronon grates.

“Right now what they need is not another gun. They need both of us out of here.”

“How does that help them?”

“McKay can’t use us as bait anymore. Now lay down!”

Another explosion goes off. Ronon stares down Kenmore. Then another explosion.

“Specialist, I’m not going to let them die, but I refuse to be the stupidity that lets them down,” she snaps.

Ronon would stare her down more, longer, but his friends’ time was running out. Reluctantly he makes as deep an inhale as he possibly can and begins to inch his shoulders to his right, tipping the top half of his body over. He hisses with ever move, grimacing through the pain. Kenmore puts a hand on the side of his neck and scoots back, giving him plenty of room. His tipping becomes a steady slide faster than Kenmore would like. She slides her hand against the descending side of his body and helps him fall to the floor as gently as possible. Once on the ground, she checks his wound.

“Looks like the initial movement caused more blood to come out, but the flow’s returned to normal now. The tourniquet is working.”

Again, she looks him in the eye and puts a hand against his cheek, rubbing it kindly with her thumb. And for a moment the pain wasn’t the first thing on his mind…

“How are you doing,” she asks him.

Ronon nods his head stiffly. He wasn’t sure he liked her being like this. It’s… uncomfortable. She’s too close, too personal… too personable.

“Fine,” he grunts.

“Okay. You can’t straighten your legs at this angle because they’ll run into the shield guarding my gear, okay?”

Ronon nods at her.

“So we’ll have to move you so that you can straighten them.”

Kenmore looks at Ronon. Even her eyes said she wasn’t entirely certain about this. He nods anyway. Then takes in another inhale as deep as he can manage and begins to inch his body back and forth, moving it slowly even with Kenmore putting a hand on his back and the other against his chest helping him move. There’s another explosion. Kenmore and Ronon freeze waiting to hear a second blast… but no other blast comes.

“Why isn’t there another one,” Ronon demands anxiously through his gritted teeth.

Kenmore looks down at his face. He’s sweating profusely.

“You have enough room to lay back,” she tells him. They had to get a move on. She agreed, the silence is a bad sign.

“Go get the gun… and help them,” he has trouble ordering her even more adamantly than before. The pain… if he grits his teeth much more, they’ll break. He’s sure of it.

“Lay back.”

“Help—“

“Specialist Dex, lay back,” she stops him.

Ronon doesn’t move. He just keeps eyeing her.

“Do it,” she begs him. “You’re causing more damage if you don’t.”

Ronon doesn’t move. Kenmore leans in closer to him and lowers her voice to an urgent, entirely unneeded whisper.

“What are you trying to do? Kill yourself,” she accuses him.

“If I’m dead, then you have to go help them.”

Kenmore shoots back up, shocked, “That’s the stupidest thing I’ve ever heard.”

Ronon eyes her. Suddenly they hear McKay yell. Kenmore looks back at the door; okay so maybe that silence before hadn’t been such a bad sign. It’s when McKay goes quiet that Kenmore returns her attention back to Ronon.

“Lay back,” Kenmore orders him urgently; she grabs his jacket collar and desperately bares down on him, “Please, please just lay back!”

Ronon doesn’t respond. Taking advantage of his situation and no longer caring about how much damage she would do to him, Kenmore shoves against Ronon’s chest. He tries to fight her. He tenses up his body in the semi-fetal position he had it in but Kenmore’s push and the excruciating pain are enough to overtax his strength. Practically screaming groans and spitting at her in both his rage and agony, Ronon’s body breaks and he collapses onto his back. Kenmore tries to check his wound again, but Ronon starts moving again, fighting her still. He was down, but he was not out.

“Stop,” Kenmore begs him.

He keeps fighting her.

“Stop. Please stop.”

Through his roars and her pleading, they can’t hear the door open. McKay walks in, walks right over to Kenmore, and viciously slams the butt of his pistol across the back of her head. Kenmore yelps. Ronon stops moving. She clenches her eyes shut and gasps as she grabs the back of her head. After a moment, she opens her eyes and glares at Ronon.

“Laugh it up Wookiee, you aught to be lovin’ this. You had to pick a fight with me now of all times. You couldn’t do it, could you? You couldn’t do what I told you to do for once? Oh no, it was so much more important to piss off the new girl!

McKay levels his gun at the back of her head. The cold of the dark gray metal piercing against the heat of the injury.

“Pick him up,” he orders her.

“I can’t.”

McKay aims his gun at Ronon’s face.

“I will kill him.”

“That’s what he wants you to do,” she tells him.

McKay aims his gun back at Kenmore.

“And do you want me to kill you?”

Kenmore looks into Ronon’s eyes, “No, I do not intend to leave my son without a mother.”

Ronon stares at her. Suddenly silent.

“Pick him up,” McKay orders again.

Kenmore grabs onto the bicep of Ronon’s left arm, reaches under his neck, and pulls him up as best she can. To her surprise Ronon shifts his body in ways to help her lift him back up to sit back against the wall.

McKay turns back to the main computer panel and puts the gun underneath his waistband behind his back. He types on the Goa’uld buttons and stares at its screens. All he sees is white noise. McKay slams his hands on the panel in frustration.

“No.”

*                      *                      *

Teyla crawls on her elbows through the ceiling duct as fast as she can. Her radio receiving the same transmission from Kenmore’s radio that Sheppard’s was. She can hear Kenmore begging Ronon.

“Lay back. Please, please just lay back!”

“Ronon,” Teyla begged under her breath.

Teyla’s been listening long enough that she’s actually started to root for Lieutenant Kenmore. She hears Ronon’s all too familiar screaming groans of agony and figures that the Lieutenant has, as Teyla has come to understand the SGC soldier, taken control of the situation in her usual way. More than likely forcing Ronon to do what she wanted him to do no matter the damage done, but Teyla had been listening to the Lieutenant give care to him. In a strange way she hears her own voice in Lieutenant Kenmore’s in those moments and can’t imagine anymore that the woman would do Ronon harm without checking the damage done. Teyla can hear rustling and Ronon starts his groaning again. She has known her comrade and friend long enough to know what it sounds like when he’s still fighting even though wounded and down. Desperation covers her face as she crawls to a junction, takes the left turn, and shortly arrives on another junction. She goes left again. Lieutenant Kenmore starts to beg Ronon, her pleas echoing the ones in Teyla’s own mind, the ones silently spread across her face…

“Stop,” Kenmore pleads with him.

Their volumes competing.

“Stop. Please stop,” the Lieutenant begs.

Teyla can feel tears threatening her eyes. She can’t bare anymore. Her whole body becomes desperate, her crawl, her breathing. Now is not the time, Ronon.

“Please Ronon,” Teyla begs on her stomach.

Not even she can hear the door in the computer room opening through the turmoil over her radio and the turmoil she hears in herself. Suddenly Kenmore yelps. There’s silence over the radio except for the Lieutenant’s gasping, although Teyla can’t really tell whether or not they are Lieutenant Kenmore’s gasps or her own. The Athosian’s desperate scramble is rewarded by another fast approach to a junction. Teyla takes the right this time.

“Laugh it up Wookiee, you aught to be lovin’ this. You had to pick a fight with me now of all times. You couldn’t do it, could you? You couldn’t do what I told you to do for once? Oh no, it was so much more important to piss off the new girl!

She can hear the frustration and anger in Kenmore’s voice that a part of Teyla feels as well. Ronon’s stubbornness had become reckless. A danger he could not see coming. Or perhaps he did? Is his hatred of the Lieutenant so overwhelming that he must act this dangerously? To himself? To them, his friends of many years?

“Pick him up,” she hears the Goa’uld inside of Rodney order.

“I can’t,” the Lieutenant tells him.

“I will kill him,” he tells her.

“That’s what he wants you to do,” the Lieutenant informs him.

Teyla could feel her blood boiling at Ronon. How could he? How could he be this reckless when the situation was already so dire? How dare he? Teyla reaches the junction General Carter had told her about before they started this plan. She urgently crawls out of the duct and stands in the middle of another laddered crawlspace: the maintenance duct. A duct stretching far up into the rest of the ship with a ladder running up one side and the rest of its round circumference dotted with holes leading into the other ceiling ducts of the other levels of the ship. She’s gasping, her heart’s pounding. She reaches for the ladder and her hands grip firmly around the rung at her eye level.

“And do you want me to kill you,” the Goa’uld asks.

Teyla freezes. Her eyes wide. Waiting.

“No,” came the Lieutenant’s voice firmly, “I do not intend to leave my son without a mother.”

Teyla’s face temporarily contorts in the painful fear she has held ever since she learned of Torren’s conception now uttered so boldly by another mother who shares the uniform Teyla wears. The tears that had previously threatened to stream down her face now threaten to pour. Eyes brimming. Gasping, Teyla pulls herself together, pulls herself up onto the ladder, and starts to climb up.

“I’m coming for you,” she whispers determindedly over and over to herself, to Kenmore, and to a little boy planets away.

She stops what must be a level up, reaches out, and crawls into the hole in the wall closest to her on her left.

“Pick him up,” the Goa’uld inside of Rodney orders again.

It was only a few feet further that Teyla comes upon the air vent in the ceiling she needed to get to. Teyla folds her body and, putting all her emotion into force, slams her feet at the grate. The metal easily gives way. Teyla slides forward and drops down into the corridor below.

*                      *                      *

Sheppard slowly stalks down a hallway. Suddenly a vent in the ceiling a few feet behind him hits the floor, Sheppard immediately turns around, P-90 at the ready, and sees Teyla drop down out of the ceiling. She looks like hell.

“Are you alright,” Sheppard lowers his gun, concerned. He really didn’t need Teyla losing it too right now.

Teyla nods her head vigorously and takes back up her own P-90 clipped to the front of her tactical vest.

“I am coming for them,” she breathes.

“Okay,” Sheppard says slowly while nodding his head, not really understanding but if she was holding it together as much as she possibly could right now with those words, then he was going to take that and run with it as fast as he possibly can and not argue with her determination.

They run up the hallway together. At the end, they meet up with Jacob Carter messing with the wiring and crystal slats of a ripped open wall panel.

“Almost there,” he tells them and gently but quickly pulls out another sapphire blue-edged clear crystal slat.

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Episode Seven- Home Again, Part One- Chapter Nine

Chapter Nine

Kenmore and Ronon watch McKay. He pulls his computer tablet out from behind him again, sets it up on the smooth panel, and brings up the lifesigns map on it again. Two of the dots have met paths, close to the third. McKay taps a few times on the tablet’s smooth surface.

“They’ll stop you,” Ronon spits, gritting through the pain, at the Goa’uld.

“Oh really,” the Goa’uld mocks back with a sardonic and sarcastic wry grin that they’ve, even with Kenmore’s limited experience with him, seen Rodney give on several occasions when any of them dared to insinuate that the genius astrophysicist couldn’t possible pull off the impossible.

At hearing the start of a Manly Man pissing match, Kenmore returns her attention to Ronon and his wound. God, she had no time for this…

“They’re getting to you,” Ronon tells him.

The Satedan’s urge to take advantage of Goa’uld McKay’s frustration and goad him into making more mistakes, the self-indulgent movements causes Ronon’s wound’s flow to increase.

“Specialist, stop it. You’re hurting yourself,” Kenmore tells him.

But Ronon can’t resist finally having the ability to help Sheppard and the rest of his team while Kenmore refuses to pick up a gun using him as an excuse…

“They’ll strip away every advantage you have,” he presses.

“Specialist,” she warns him.

McKay’s tablet screen starts to faze a little then suddenly goes black. He no longer even has the lifesigns map. McKay’s fingers scramble harshly across the tablet’s touchable screen. Nothing. In his frustration, McKay slams the computer down on the Goa’uld computer panel then hurls it with a God’s strength across the room. It explodes against the wall. Shattering into broken bits of severed wiring, snapped plastic, and scorched remnants of motherboard onto the black shiny lacquered flooring. McKay looks around, breathless and infuriated. Ronon allows himself to smile.

“We know McKay,” he gloats.

“Dex,” Kenmore warns.

McKay turns around to face Ronon’s front and Kenmore’s back.

“You know McKay, do you?” The Goa’uld mocks sarcastically, taking a few steps towards them.

Ronon nods, the taunting smile still on his face.

“Ronon,” the Lieutenant hisses.

The Goa’uld smiles back. It seems more like the leer a cobra gives a mongoose.

I know McKay. And I know how little you all care about her.”

In one fluid, flawless motion, McKay pulls out his gun, raises it at Kenmore, and fires. Ronon flinches when her blood splatters across his face. The blasts pushes Kenmore forward and she sticks out her left arm. Her hand braces her against the wall right beside his head. Her own head slumped forward. Hair pooling around her face. Ronon stares at her. She doesn’t scream. It was all so terrifyingly familiar. Ronon in front, egging someone on, a woman in front of him whose done nothing but care for him, and the enemy behind her… and they open fire, and she takes the hit right in front of his face. Melena, she hadn’t screamed either when the Wraith took her from him… Slowly, Kenmore lifts her head. Hair pulling back away from her face. She works her mouth and fights her gasping, pulling in strong, loud inhales through her nose. She withdraws her arm from the wall. Slowly leaning back on her heels again. There’s a cool, collected calmness in her eyes and demeanor that Ronon has never seen before and, frankly, admires. She straightens her back up and looks straight ahead of her.

“Golly gee willikers Batman,” she says, “you suck at this.”

*                      *                      *

Sheppard, Teyla, and Carter run through another corridor.

“At the end turn right,” Jacob tells them, “So when did you come up with blowing out the computer systems?”

“The assassin in my head took out Ronon and tried to take out Teyla using their trust in me. It’s my advantage, I’m their friend. So I had to take out McKay’s advantage. That, and I remember the assassin shooting the crap out of our ZPM podium powering the city.”

Jacob nods. He approves of Sheppard’s tactics, Selmak does too. They make their turn and Jacob outpaces them to the third corner on the left in the new hallway. He digs his nails in between a tiny break in the paneling and begins to pry the door panels apart. Sheppard and Teyla catch up and help him. As they work they can hear the disturbance they caused over the radio.

“We know McKay,” they hear Ronon say. God, he sounded more seething than he usually did when trapped.

“Specialist,” Kenmore’s voice warns.

“You’re friend doesn’t understand when to back off does he,” Jacob comments.

“No, not really,” John answers, straining to pull his side of the panel off the wall.

“You know McKay, do you,” the Goa’uld asks and Teyla’s blood runs cold. She feels her fingers slipping slightly in her pulling on the other half of the panel door. There’s something in the tone of his voice…

“Dex,” Kenmore warns again.

“Doesn’t listen to her does he,” Jacob asks.

“No,” John doesn’t have trouble admitting, “he doesn’t like her all that much.”

They get the doors open and stare at an obsidian maintenance ladder leading both up and down.

I know McKay. And I know how little you all care about her.”

Carter gets on it first. The explosive gunshot over the radio freezes all three of them. They can hear her gasping. Selmak silences the urge of his body to run as Jacob swallows down the urge to scream Ursula’s name. Jacob looks back at Sheppard.

“Just how much does your friend not like her,” he asks instead.

Sheppard doesn’t know what to say, but the shock on his and Teyla’s faces are enough of a reply. They did know their friend hates his friend, but they clearly didn’t know their friend hated her that much. Then it comes…

“Golly gee willikers Batman, you suck at this,” Kenmore says strong and smoothly.

Jacob smiles, “That’s my girl.”

He begins to climb down to the computer room’s level. Silently, Sheppard follows him then Teyla.

*                      *                      *

Kenmore braces her wounded arm up against her body. Her hand cupping her opposite side’s breast. She reaches down and undoes Ronon’s belt with her good hand. She snakes it out of its belt loops and pulls it free of his body. She threads the tip through the buckle and holds onto both making the belt form a giant loop like a noose. She turns her wrist and dangles the loop above her head. Then she lowers it down around her. When the loop lines up just under her breasts, after some painful wriggling, Kenmore lets the belt buckle slip out of her hand and slide down the length of the strap she’s still holding onto, tightening the circle around her. Then she yanks the strap off to the side and the noose suddenly clamps around her. Her hand leaves her breast, twists at the wrist—she fights the urge to hiss at that—, and grabs the belt. Kenmore finally drops the strap and brings her good hand to the buckle. Working with both hands, she gives the strap another hard yank, her body wincing and suddenly trying to recoil at the sharp intense feeling of its own pain, then feeds the buckle’s prongs through the holes in the belt—Thank God the Big Guy is so skinny—then threads the strap through the rest of the buckle, and knots the excess the same way she had with her own belt on Ronon. She reaches over and grabs one of the remaining two gauze pads nudged a handful of inches further away from where they had been before by her and Ronon’s attempts to get the giant Satedan on his back, tears it free of its wrapper with her teeth, folds it in half between her fingers, and, with a grimace, wedges the pad in and stuffs it over her wound then she pulls her bra strap over it, tightening it with her slippery bloody fingertips, as a sort of makeshift tourniquet over the bleeding injury.

McKay just stares at Kenmore’s back. An approving, leering smile across his lips. He licks them with a nod of considerable approval as his eyes trace down her body then back up it. Perhaps, this one would be a better choice for a Queen. He had only had need of them before as simple breeding stock. Just barebones DNA. But perhaps, with this woman’s ingenuity… if he could pass on such knowledge to her offspring… yes, she would indeed make a much more useful host for a Queen than that other human female. Much better—  He feels the fringes of darkness closing in on the outskirts of his consciousness; the host is fighting him again, or at least threatening to—  However, her disobedient streak…

“Batman,” the Goa’uld says, “All you come up with is Batman.” And he feels the darkness ebb.

Kenmore winks at Ronon.

“We know McKay,” she says.

That disobedient streak. Why did all of these Tau’ri humans have such rebellion in them…

“You know McKay,” he retorts, “What do you know about any of this team,” he snarks.

Suddenly the door opens and a single blue shot slams into McKay’s side followed almost instantly by another. He crumples to the floor. Kenmore looks back at him.

“They don’t give up,” she says, “So kree shac, shel nok.”

Sheppard steps into the room, the Wraith pistol he has a tendency to carry with him trained on McKay. Teyla rushes in, heading straight for Ronon and Kenmore’s side. And Jacob Carter runs to the Goa’uld computer panel. He double-checks as much as he can, he smiles as he jabs his fingers at the buttons, and nothing responds to his touch. Their plan, Sheppard’s plan worked. Teyla puts a hand on Kenmore’s wounded shoulder.

“Don’t,” the Lieutenant tells her, shaking off the Athosian woman’s attention, “Take the last gauze pad and give it to Specialist Dex. He needs it more than I do right now. He had thirty minutes from the time McKay shot him, he’s got ten minutes left.”

Teyla nods at her and does what the Lieutenant told her to do. Sheppard looks over at Kenmore.

“We don’t have that kind of time to get him back to Atlantis.”

Even wounded herself, Kenmore is still trying to help Teyla tend Ronon as much as she can. Holding the already drenched gauze pads in place so that Teyla could slip in the fresh one she just tore open from its sterile wrapping in place without disturbing the rest and running the possibility of doing more damage to Ronon.

“We don’t have to,” the Lieutenant tells the Colonel, “Remember I told you these things have their own Stargates. Jacob, get down to the sarcophagus room and start dialing home. You know…”

“Yeah, yeah, I can pilot this thing to orbit that planet we gated to to get here from there and use it as the base chevron for this thing’s gate.”

“How long will that take,” John asked watching the medical activity going on on Ronon. It was bad. He had heard in Kenmore’s voice over his radio, but now he realized she must have been softening her a analysis a bit for his friend’s sake. Ronon was sweating so profusely John would’ve sworn he’d just gotten out of the shower or a bath or something and there were heavy dark circles coloring the flesh underneath his eyes. Even they, Ronon’s normally alert dark eyes, were becoming more and more unfocused by the minute. His friend was here, his mind was here with them, but Ronon’s eyes made it look like he had no clue where he was or what was going on. They were losing him. And fast.

“Five minutes,” Carter states.

“Better than ten. Do it,” Kenmore orders.

Sheppard doesn’t argue. In five minutes Ronon would probably be unconscious and Kenmore was right, five is better than ten. In ten minutes, Ronon would probably be a lot more out of it than unconscious. He’d be dead. Again. Permanently maybe. If they couldn’t get this tub moving right, if they were running out of time quicker than they thought, maybe they could find a sarcophagus here and power her up. But that was only if this ship still had her sarcophagus. John watched Ronon furiously blink his momentarily crossed eyes back into focus as he continued to stare at Kenmore. They had options. John liked options. Options are good. John looks down at the problem at his own feet. He reaches into one of his vest pockets and fishes out a couple of flexcuffs.

“What was that you said? That last bit,” he asks as he kneels down and starts to restrain McKay, starting with his hands.

“The Goa’uld stuff,” Kenmore clarifies.

“Yeah.”

“Well, directly translated,” Carter shoves his hands into the nest of crystal slats Rodney uncovered, starts grabbing slats left and right, and quickly begins reorganizing their placements. A few systems reactivate, just enough to coax the ship as far as they need it to go, “it means—“

“Bite me,” the Lieutenant finishes sharing a smile with Jacob before returning to her medical duties; Sheppard catches the old hat exchange.

Kenmore and Teyla continue jointly tending to Ronon. And the wounded Satedan can’t take his eyes off of Kenmore.

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Episode Seven- Home Again, Part One- Chapter Seven

Chapter Seven

Sheppard, Teyla, and Carter stare at the lit up junction at the end of the corridor.

“I really hate playing games,” Sheppard says.

“Well you’re going to have to start liking to play them real quick,” Jacob tells him.

“Is there nothing we can do,” Teyla asks.

“Not really, McKay’s with us on practically every mission. There isn’t a move I can make without him knowing it already.” God, they really were stuck without Rodney on their side, weren’t they? John’d always lorded it over the astrophysicist that they could make it without him. It was something just to goad Rodney a little, but now it was goading John. He couldn’t believe it. They actually were stuck without Rodney.

But Jacob catches on to something John hadn’t.

“You said ‘practically’. What missions were you on that McKay wasn’t?”

Sheppard starts running through them, “There was that time when the Genii took over Atlantis during a storm and then there was that time…”

Sheppard trails off. Teyla straightens up.

“What is it,” she asks him.

“I can’t fight like me.”

“What?”

“You remember that time when Weir and I had those assassins in our heads?”

She nods.

“McKay wasn’t with me then. He wasn’t even tracking me. Elizabeth and her assassin were messing with Atlantis’ computer systems. McKay was focused on what she was doing. And…,” Sheppard turns his attention to Carter, “and I got Weir to shoot Ronon and I put in a call to medical before I left him for dead.”

Jacob nods at him. “That’s a good place to start,” he agrees.

“Do you remember enough of the assassins’ tactics,” Teyla asks him. That had been a long time ago. And it had not actually been John doing all of those things although the alien entity did admit to both Ronon and later Teyla that John’s own consciousness had been present if only in the background of his own mind.

He nods, “I think so.”

“You think so,” Selmak reconfirms cynically.

“Hey, it’s a plan.”

Selmak retreats back, These humans…  Jacob nods.

“What do you want us to do,” he asks.

*                      *                      *

Rodney McKay sits with his back leaning against a wall in another corridor. One of his legs bent underneath him comfortably with the other bent up in front of him, helping support the forearm his computer tablet is leisurely propped up on. He’s smiling and tapping. The computer’s screen is showing a map much like the one the lifesigns detector would normally show him… if it were working. And that was the best thing of all to him: the others were left blind. All of them except for that Shol’va Tok’ra—Selmak, he had heard of her, met her, encountered her a number of times; that Tok’ra was a formidable foe—, but the others, yes, they were without direction. Lost in an environment they did not know as well as he. In much ways it was like there was only one against him. Me, McKay laughs out loud, of all gods, Me? McKay’s laugh descends into a condescending chuckle with a gentle shaking of his head. These humans… these feeble minded slaves.

Three blue dots in a distant corridor slowly move to the end of their corridor and split up. One dot takes the left corridor and the other two move into the right. McKay presses a few ‘buttons’ on the tablet and brings up video of the left corridor. It’s the Shol’va Tok’ra, zat’nikatel gun out in front of him and moving like the old soldier both Selmak and her host were. McKay brings the lifesigns detector map up again. The other two dots come to the end of their corridor and split up again. McKay brings up video again, this time from that new left corridor one of the dots was in. It’s the leader of this group, what did the host say his name was… Sheppard. McKay presses a single button and watches as a part of the left wall a few feet ahead of Sheppard explodes into the corridor. Sheppard immediately runs back out of the camera’s view. The Goa’uld’s host’s body jolts a little with the sudden chuckle he made to himself at the sight of the frightened human scampering away from the explosion like an insect frightened of the nearing heat of magnified light.

He brings the lifesigns map back up again. The two dots that had just split up meet back up at the junction again and split again. McKay brings up the left corridor camera again. This time he sees the female human… Teyla… walking cautiously down the hallway. She picks her way around the debris on the corridor’s floor. For a moment the Goa’uld zooms the camera’s focus in on her face. His smile turns from one of amused condescension to one of appeased admiration. He types in further instructions to the camera and the hidden device begins a slow analyzing descent of her prowling body. McKay nods, yes, very sufficient. He had never had much use for a Queen before, just base DNA, but what he knew of this specimen from his host’s knowledge of her, she would be a fine thing to have at his side. Especially since she was already gifted with part of the DNA of the threat to the humans in this galaxy and she had already born a child just as strong and gifted as she… and her offspring was a male. How perfect, the Goa’uld laughs again, this time the amusement slipped past his lips and he caught the sound in his ears, A host to raise in exactly his image.

Suddenly the Goa’uld’s mind blanks; he comes back quickly enough, blinking the infringement away. The host is fighting him. The idea of using the female’s child as a host seemed to illicit a great surge of emotion and strength of will from this Doctor Rodney McKay. The Goa’uld had chosen him because of the human’s intellect, but he had not expected this from the scientist. In Goa’uld society, and the human societies they controlled, Thinkers were not normally known for this type of strength of mind. But no matter, the God had quickly stifled it down and now he knew to keep a tight leash on this host. Perhaps more threats to those he cared about would keep him in line.

The other female…  She is half Ancient. The Goa’uld could sense it in her, practically smell the offensiveness in her bloodstream, in her flesh… and bone, the Goa’uld thought putridly. According to the host, she had been brought to this galaxy as a weapon to use against the threat here. Her…and her child. So she had offspring as well… another male child. This one older than the other one’s child. Another host, one I can turn.

The Goa’uld felt the blood in the host’s body suddenly run cold, the flesh become pallid. He could see it in the reflection of himself on the computer tablet’s screen. Feel these things the host called goose pimples rise in the flesh on his arms. He smiles darkly at the reflection in the reinforced glass. Yes. That’s it. The sudden physical reaction recedes; he feels it in himself. This host, he is no God.

McKay commands the computer back to the lifesigns map and follows what he now knows to be Sheppard’s movements. McKay pulls the map back to a wider view. The walls of Sheppard’s path are boldly glowing, indicating that it is the way McKay is allowing him to travel. Sheppard follows the path properly up until his third corridor junction alone. There he stops.

McKay waits… and waits. Nothing. His smile vanishes. McKay brings up the videos of the left corridor of the junction and the right simultaneously. Neither one can show him the junction itself. McKay goes back to the lifesigns map. Sheppard still hasn’t moved. Why wasn’t the human moving? He had no tolerance for this. Slaves should not defy their masters. These hosts were not their Gods.

McKay reaches beside him, draws his sidearm from its holster, and gets to his feet. He heads down the pathway he had dictated for Sheppard. He takes sure strides at first, but the closer he gets to Sheppard’s still unmoving position, the slower he walks, the quieter, and the more he stops at the corridor junctions and peers around their corners first before he moves into them and chooses the corridor he needs. Although he is a God, this host’s body is frail… human… and growing frailer by the minute.

Finally, McKay’s at the junction that directly connects to the same corridor that Sheppard’s own junction leads into. McKay checks his computer one last time, Sheppard still hasn’t moved. The insubordination was insufferable. He puts the tablet behind him, slipping it into its large pocket on the back of his tactical vest. In one bold move, McKay steps out into the corridor bringing his gun to bear in Sheppard’s direction. He can’t tell what’s there at the junction at the end; the light is so sparse down there compared to where he’s standing where the overhead light shines down and around him like a halo of dispersed aerosol gold. But something is. Sitting on the floor as though it had given up. Unflinching, McKay slowly walks towards the waiting mass. The closer he gets the more he realizes it’s crumpled. The closer he gets the more he realizes that it’s just Sheppard’s own tactical vest heaped there.

The Goa’uld freezes. McKay aims ahead of himself then back down the corridor he had come up, the same stretch of corridor Sheppard had come down, then turns around. He’s alone. McKay reaches back for his computer tablet, pulls it out, and checks its readout again. According to the lifesigns map, Sheppard is here… with him.

McKay looks around again. He doesn’t see anything. He checks the computer again. The other two dots are closing in on his position. He looks around. Nothing. The dots meet. Right next to him, according to the map! But… nothing was here save for a pathetic piece of reinforced clothing and the God himself.

Rapidly it dawns on him. He looks up at the ceiling. McKay aims up and opens fire. Immediately the three dots separate, going in different directions again. After emptying his clip etching a raw jagged hole into the ceiling, McKay checks his computer again. He tries to bring up the security video in the ceiling conduits but all he gets is a screen of white noise. He tries to bring up security video of the corridors and again gets nothing but a screen of white noise. The rage explodes out of him, echoing in the corridor and all the others it leads into…

NO!!

*                      *                      *

Goa’uld McKay’s yell echoes up into the ceiling and the biggest, most mischievous grin Lieutenant Colonel John Sheppard has ever had breaks across his face as he crawls as fast as he can through the conduit lined on all sides with multi-primary-colored and clear wiring and black and gold piping.

“Well I guess someone doesn’t like shooting out his own advantage,” Sheppard smirks.

At the junction in the duct, Sheppard crawls to the right. He’d always wondered when the foxhole training back in Basic would come into play out here.

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Episode Seven- Home Again, Part One- Chapter Six

Chapter Six

John Sheppard, Jacob Carter, and Teyla Emmagan step into the pel’tak, bridge, of the Goa’uld Mothership. It only takes a moment to tell that the room is clear. They lower their weapons and Carter dashes past the throne draped in black shiny fabric to look like it was made of pure cooled molten obsidian to the central computer. He slides his hand underneath the computer platform’s sensor pad and concentrates hard and quickly. Then he opens his eyes and begins pushing what few buttons there were on the platform’s small center console furiously. Sheppard and Teyla stick by either side of the ornate slab of hieroglyphics covered wall hiding the door from the rest of the room. Sheppard calls back over his shoulder to Carter.

“Make it fast General. I didn’t just make our way here listening to my friend dying just to put the brakes on.”

“That may be a problem,” Carter tells him.

Sheppard and Teyla look back at the former General.

“What,” Sheppard asks.

“He’s locked us out.”

“What,” Teyla repeats.

With his focus still on the pel’tak’s computer screen floating in front of its large window out onto the empty void of space just outside the ship and the readouts the screen’s giving him, Jacob answers them, “All the main access pathways have been disconnected and all the secondaries have been rerouted back onto each other. He’s got control of every part of this ship.”

“That’s bad,” John says needlessly. What the hell? They were only separated for a few minutes. What, ten at most? How could he do this much? Rodney was good, but he wasn’t this good.

“It’s worse,” Selmak suddenly adds.

“How so,” Teyla asks the Tok’ra.

“Why has he not removed life support from this room,” he replies with a question of his own, “He’s been tracking our movements. He knows we’re here. Why was the door not locked? Why is it not locked now? Why are we still alive?”

The realization comes to Sheppard, “He needs us. He needs hosts.”

“Would not a ship of this size require many to crew it? Where are they,” Teyla tries.

“From what I’m allowed to gather from the computer, the crew committed suicide rather than be taken as hosts. Clearly, they didn’t like their boss,” Jacob tells her, finally looking up from his screen to meet her eyes.

Teyla feels the panic stir inside of her. There has to be more options. It also dawns in her the realization that the one who usual came up with options for them was Rodney. Getting rid of the energy creature when they believed Jinto to be lost in the City of the Ancestors or the devising a way of using the Ancient weapons platform to defend the city against two encroaching Wraith hiveships. Devising a way to combat the Wraith computer virus that had infected the Daedalus’ computer systems or coming up with a way to save John from a portal that kept him trapped in a time dilated sanctuary with a group of Ancestors. Creating a way to track down Ronon using the tracking device the Wraith had implanted in him again when they had captured and retaken him to Sateda or fixing an abandoned Wraith machine that caused everyone of the team plus two other teams as well as Rodney himself to hallucinate. Finding a solution to saving both the Atlantis and all those who reside in her when they were forced to send the ship into space after the Asurans had sent a weaponized satellite to attack them or coming up with a means of destroying the Asurans once and for all. Being able to reverse the sudden transportations of a different Daedalus from a different universe before the team suffered the same fate as another universe’s versions of them had onboard or formulating the extremely dangerous super hyperlaunch jump that sent Atlantis just in time to the rescue of her homeworld Earth. Returning Atlantis to the Pegasus and bringing her home to her people. Even another timeline’s Rodney had spent the rest of his long life turning himself into a hologram in the city’s systems to talk to John accidentally sent forty-eight thousand years into the future and tell John how he can return to his original time and ultimately save both her and her son and subsequently Kanaan. And those were only a very few times that Rodney’s intellect had saved them over the past six years. Each and every time, each and every new mission, it was Rodney. It was always Rodney.

“But what about the symbiotes in the tanks,” she adds to her attempts.

“Perhaps he removed the crew’s symbiotes in order to attain new hosts,” Selmak counters.

Yeah, yeah, Sheppard starts nodding. He liked this line of thinking.

“Taking out the competition,” he adds, “that’s sounds like a Goa’uld.”

Carter nods.

“If so, then why keep the symbiotes alive?”

Sheppard shrugs at Teyla’s suggestion.

“Sick sense of humor,” he offers.

Carter shakes his head, “That doesn’t fit. If the Goa’uld sense competition, they annihilate it.”

Suddenly Jacob’s eyes start to glow, “Not necessarily so. If the Goa’uld sense competition, they try to dominate it. The symbiotes may simply be there as a visual source of power to warn others who dare go against their God.”

Sheppard smiles dryly. It was kind of nice to see, know, that there could be a division of opinions in the same body. He was beginning to like these Tok’ra, at least if General Carter and Selmak was any decent measure of them. But still…

“Even on death’s door, you really believe this guy would keep some people around just to lord existence over them,” Sheppard asks him.

Selmak nods.

“And I thought the Wraith were bad,” John quips.

“I have never wished to become a Wraith worshipper nor do I intend to be a host for the Goa’uld,” Teyla announces. Her voice strong and clear and distinct.

“I’m with you,” John looks over at Jacob, “Is there anything you can do General?”

Carter checks the computer again and shakes his head, “You’re Doctor McKay is good. According to this, he’s systematically locked everything down.”

Suddenly the computer beeps at him. Carter leans forward to the screen, analyzing the new readout even more closely. Sheppard doesn’t like the look on the General’s face.

“What is it?”

“He’s systematically locked everything down except a single path to the computer room Specialist Dex and Ursula are in.”

John’s stunned.

“He’s playing cat-and-mouse with us.”

Selmak looks over at him, “He did refer to them as bait.”

Well John didn’t need that, “I don’t like playing games,” John stares the Tok’ra straight on.

She doesn’t back down, “For your friend’s sake, you should,” he tells John.

Sheppard looks to Teyla for further appeal.

She nods her head, “I agree with Selmak.”

“Okay,” as long as they were all in agreement about what they were up against here, “then we at least play by my rules. Exactly how locked out are those systems?”

Carter slides his hand under the platform interface again. Suddenly the whole computer shuts down. He looks over at John and Teyla again.

“Very,” Jacob remarks.

“Clearly, he is growing impatient with us,” Selmak says.

“I like that,” John tells him, “How much of this place are you familiar with?”

“All of it.” Jacob was back in control.

“Good,” Sheppard nods, “Teyla, you watch our backs. General, you’re up front with me.”

Carter nods and Sheppard leads the rest of his mission team back to the room’s only entrance and only exit. He angles himself to face the door behind the slab, lifts the barrel of his P-90 back up, and steps towards the door. It slides apart, open. Flawlessly. Sheppard moves to its threshold and peers up then down the corridor. Nothing. He steps out with Carter right beside him. Jacob looks up and down the hallway too before moving on with Sheppard. As soon as the two men are clear of the door, Teyla steps out into the corridor behind them, immediately turning on her heels to cover any threat coming at them from behind. Sheppard starts to run up the left side of hallway with Carter beside him. Teyla takes one last surveying look down the corridor then abruptly turns and runs after them, keeping her mind and the corners of her eyes all the while back on sensing what might be coming up behind them. They come to the end of the corridor with a heartbeat of lagtime between them.

“Okay, General, which way if I wanted to blow the power generator in this place?”

“Left.”

Sheppard, Jacob, and Teyla break down the left side of the junction of hallways into a whole new corridor. They’re almost at the end of it when part of the rightside wall a few yards ahead of them explodes into the center of the corridor. The trio skids to a halt as they reel their bodies back from the danger, covering their faces in recoil. When some of the dust and smoke begins to clear, the three come back up and look on the scene. Parts of the ruined wall crowd the floor now lightened from black to gray by the settling dust and broken debris, and no longer shiny in its lacquer but entirely a matte finish now. Suddenly the left side of the wall a couple of feet closer to them blows into the corridor. Sheppard doesn’t have to give the command, the trio pull their bodies back again. This time turning away from the explosion and running back down the corridor. The right side of the wall blows inward a couple of feet closer to them. And so it goes. Systematically, like rhythmic footfalls, explosions stomping off left to right behind them, like a giant hunting them back down the corridor. Teyla is the first to break back into the corridor they had apparently only thought they had just left. Carter joins her. And finally Sheppard.

After a few yards, Sheppard slows down to a jog.

“Whoa, whoa, wait,” he calls to the rest of them.

After a few feet more, he jogs to a complete stop. The others stop as well.

“What is it,” Teyla asks him breathlessly. She knew he would not do something like this without good reason.

Sheppard looks back up the hallway to where smoke and dust are still clouding out of the left turn corridor that must be in shambles by now.

“The explosions stopped,” he tells her.

He eyes the hallway, gears in his mind spinning. He takes a single step back up the hallway… towards the blownout corridor. Another explosion sounds off from the left side of the start of the ruined corridor in answer. Sheppard retracts his step. Well damn Rodney

“We could try the…”

At the corridor’s junction, the right turn explodes in answer and the trio watch as the blast is enough to block it off for good. That end of their corridor is dead.

“We have nowhere else to go but where he wants us to,” Teyla breathes, sounding grim.

Sheppard turns around and all three look down at the free and clear end of the corridor. Suddenly, the junction at that end lights up with a spotlight of a single golden, heavenly overhead light.

Aw crap…

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Episode Seven- Home Again, Part One- Chapter Five

Chapter Five

Kenmore stares up at McKay, facing down the barrel of his gun, as Ronon hisses in pain behind her.

“Who are you,” she asks.

“Death,” Goa’uld McKay answers.

“How clever,” Kenmore frowns. After all this time, that was the line the Goa’uld used. Gees, she’d get more fear out of a lisping ‘Kill da Wabbit’.

“Take off your jacket,” Goa’uld McKay orders.

Kenmore stares down McKay for a moment. Seriously? He wanted a strip tease now just so he could tell her his ‘Queen,’ whichever symbiote in the tanks that ended up being, would find her to be a suitable host. But McKay doesn’t flinch and Kenmore knows she needs to buy the other’s some time, so if she needed to get a little chilly to give them the seconds then fine she’d get a little chilly; but she’d draw the line at her underwear. If they couldn’t get in here by the time it came to that, then she wasn’t going to cover their butts by revealing hers. She methodically unsnaps then unzips her tactical vest, trying to be slow about the process but not too slow, then unzips the jacket underneath, and pulls it off, vest and all. Like she wasn’t instructed to do but had been in this situation especially against this particular sort of opponent enough times to know that the order was coming anyway, she holds the combination of gear out beside her. She sure as hell wasn’t about to hand it to him without him threatening her to do it first, if and when that order came. Some Goa’uld remembered to give it, some didn’t care to.

“Drop it away from you,” Goa’uld McKay ordered.

Okay, it doesn’t care to. Kenmore gives her gear a slight toss and it falls in a pile a few feet away from her. McKay, without missing a beat, moves over to it, puts his foot firmly on it then angles his foot and shoves her rifle, it’s strap slipping loose of the garments, back behind him all the way to the room’s door. It skids there to a stop with a few clanks of the gunmetal hitting the solid stone of the door.

“Take his gun,” McKay continues to order.

Instinctively, Ronon grunts and struggles trying to simultaneously get to his own gun, fallen a few inches away from him when he’d taken the hit, first and prevent Kenmore’s hand from getting there at all. McKay adjusts his aim to Ronon.

“Don’t even bother,” the Goa’uld smirks. It wasn’t an unusual sight on Rodney, in fact it was a pretty laughable regular occurrence, but with his eyes glowing like that, it wasn’t very funny anymore.

Kenmore turns around and faces Ronon. Her eyes never leave him as she leans forward across his legs. Ronon starts to struggle again, but it doesn’t stop Kenmore from continuing to lean over his prostrate legs, reach out, grab onto the barrel of his gun, and toss it ahead in the direction her body is facing. The weapon skids, hitting the distant side wall, and ricocheting in the corner between the side wall and the wall Ronon was stuck against a few times before finally coming to rest a couple of inches away from the base of the side wall again. Totally out of reach… for everybody. McKay’s weapon refocuses on the side of Kenmore’s head. She can sense the weapon back on her. She slides her eyes to the sides of their sockets. She couldn’t see it, but she knows the weapon is trained on her again.

“That was not what I told you to do,” the baritone double-voice informs her, “but it suits me all the same.”

Good, she was so glad; she rolls her eyes. Kenmore sits back on her legs, looks over up at McKay, and waits for further orders. None come. Instead McKay turns back to his computer, laying the pistol next to the crystal slat on top of the carved computer panel lid beside him. Oh come on, he wasn’t going to make it that easy for her, was he?

“I’ve been waiting for you,” he says.

“Where’s the rest of your crew,” she asks. The least she can do right now is get some background.

“They’re dead. The cold vacuum of space does that to people,” Goa’uld McKay announces simply.

“You jettisoned your crew,” she couldn’t believe that. She’d never heard of a Goa’uld dismissing his entire entourage like that before, no matter how rebellious they were being. Usually a Goa’uld just cut the upstart out of his court like a cancerous tumor out of a body and kept the rest of their people around to live in fear of what their God might do to one of them next if they found his displeasure.

“They jettisoned themselves. You would be surprised the ways in which people try to escape the honor of serving their God,” he answered her with a belittling glance.

“I think suicide was their last honor,” Ronon unexpectedly pipes up, gritting through his wounds.

McKay and Kenmore look back at him.

“You should tell your friend to keep quiet, conserve his energy. It may save his life,” the Goa’uld tells her nonchalantly as he goes back to the computer.

“What for,” Ronon challenges.

McKay ignores him.

“Help your friend,” he orders Kenmore without looking back at her.

Kenmore follows the orders she’d been waiting to hear. She returns her attention to Ronon and looks over his wound as much as she can with both of his hands covered in blood and in the way. Kenmore reaches for his hands. He pulls them sharply against him, pressing them into the bullet wound, and forcing more blood out over his tightly held hands. Kenmore stares at him, his hairline is already starting to dot with beads of sweat.

“Don’t do that,” she hisses at him.

“I’m not gonna help you help him,” Ronon condemns her through gritted teeth.

Kenmore leans in, as though she’s trying to look the wound over closer.

“You’re no good to me dead. Just trust me. I’ve got plans,” she whispers to him.

“One of the last plans you had got you crushed underneath a wall.”

“It was half a wall’s worth of scaffolding, not an entire wall.”

“There’s a difference,” he challenged her.

Kenmore sits back up and looks at him.

“You and Sheppard got crushed underneath a whole collapsed building once. My point is we both survived,” she looks him dead in the eye, “Specialist Dex survive.”

Although every part of him wanted to keep fighting her, it did occur to him that to die this way, definitely not the way he had ever imagined he would, was stupid. This wasn’t taking a bunch of Wraith with him, this wasn’t even taking this, this Goa’uld with him. Reluctantly, Ronon slowly lets his hands slide apart. It was only taking himself out and that was a stupid way to die in the Pegasus Galaxy. Kenmore leans in. Three small rivulets of blood are streaming out of the shredded deep hole in his tan-fleshed gut and down the rest of his dirty oatmeal-colored shirt into his lap where it’s starting to puddle… a lot, quickly.

“Oh my God,” she whispers, it had been more to herself than him but he heard it anyway. And he knew enough from Keller’s, Atlantis’ Chief of Medicine, evaluations of her medical abilities back on Shiana’s planet that he should be worried by Kenmore’s analysis of his wound more than he already was of it just feeling its impact on his body himself. It was bad. Really bad.

Her eyes so focused intently on the wound, Kenmore absentmindedly reaches for her vest. Instantly in one smooth motion McKay swoops up his gun, aims for Kenmore’s hand, and fires. Kenmore’s fingertips are a few inches away from the vest when McKay’s shot rips into the floor within those inches. She yanks her hand back less at the shot and more at the feel of sharp shards of shattered alien obsidian flooring pelting her fingertips. She rolls her eyes. In the roll, her eyes light on her vest’s radio. She notices that it’s stuck on receiving. Sheppard’s trio is still listening in. Her eyes finish their roll. At least Kenmore and Ronon aren’t alone in this situation.

“I need the gauze pads from my vest,” she sighs.

McKay puts the gun back down, rips one of his own tactical vest’s pockets open, pulls out the four pre-packaged gauze pads inside, and tosses them at his hostages. They land next to Ronon’s booted feet. McKay goes back to work on his computer tablet as Kenmore reaches back behind her and gets the pads. She sets them down in front of her and rips open the first one. She immediately puts it over Ronon’s wound and presses down as gingerly as she can while still helping him. Ronon groans and shifts. Kenmore looks up at him.

“Move as little as possible,” she tells him gently.

Ronon just stares at her. Surprised. She looks back down at the pad. She can see its center starting to bleed through.

“Hold this,” she tells him.

Kenmore transitions her hand off of the pad as Ronon’s hand takes its place. Kenmore rips open another pad.

“Here.”

She lays the new pad over the old one as Ronon lifts his hand off of it just enough for her to slip the new piece of sterile white cotton in over the other safely. As he does, she notices that the old pad is almost completely soaked through now. She bet if he touched it again, blood would squeeze out of it as if he were wringing a thoroughly soaked cloth in his hands. Damn. The wound is just bleeding too heavily. They aren’t putting enough pressure on it.

Kenmore reaches down and undoes her belt buckle. She pulls her belt from its loops, leans forward, and threads it behind the small of Ronon’s back. For a moment he was startled by the smell of her: peppermint. Clear and crisp and… refreshing. She leans back on her heels again and hooks the belt together in front of him then looks him in the eyes.

“I’m going to tighten the buckle over the wound like a tourniquet, okay? I’m going to try and get it tight enough to stem the bleeding, but not so tight that it causes anymore damage,” her eyes flit down to the wound again then come back up to his, “This is gonna hurt,” she warns him.

Ronon nods, ironically he stares at her bizarrely like a tamed beast fascinated by the voice of its soothe-sayer. Kenmore slides the buckle all the way down the belt strap to the middle of the new pad in one smooth motion. Then she pulls it tighter. Some blood seeps into the new pad, pinking it, as Ronon tenses and shifts sharply, wincing and groaning in pain. Kenmore snaps the buckle shut, locking it off there. She takes the rest of the length of strap, threads it up underneath and between the tightened and clamped off stretch of belt and Ronon’s taut stomach. Then pulls it down through the slight loop made by the rest of strap below. Knotting the excess strap next to the buckle. She tugs on the tip making sure it’s tight. Ronon winces again and wriggles at the continuing sudden jolts of pain from the lieutenant’s handiwork.

Kenmore reaches up and cups Ronon’s cheek in her hand, rubbing his wet skin softly with her thumb. He freezes and looks into her eyes; there’s some of the gold and icy light from all around reflected in them. He’s never noticed how potently they could bore into a man.

“It’s stemmed the flow, okay,” she tells him.

Ronon nods again, at least he approved of her what his friends called ‘bedside manner’. Bedside… his eyes dart away from her to McKay, to the bottom of the computer console he’s working at, to this room’s walls, it’s door, the floor; just anywhere but her. Kenmore looks over his face. His hairline is wet, the beads are gone, and his whole face is moist with sweat. Not too much yet. But still…  She calls back to McKay over her shoulder.

“I need a rag. He’s sweating.”

McKay just laughs at her. Kenmore frustratedly glances back at him then returns her attention back to Ronon. For a moment she analyzes his features. His Cro-Magnon brow line brimming with the threat of sweat, his upper lip underneath his coarse mustache doing the same. The short curls and furls of his hair between his dreadlocks finally matted down to his forehead and scalp, soaked. Dark crescents were starting to appear beneath his eyes. Then she slides her forearm and hands over his face, wiping the sweat off of him and then wiping her limbs off on the stomach of her black t-shirt. Despite himself, he takes a sniff then quickly disguises it in a series of other sniffs and grunts that make it sound like he was trying to steady himself from the pain and discomfort of his wound rather than covering up an out of control mistake. Deep in his nostrils he notices her peppermint scent’s mixed on his skin with the salt from his sweat. Suddenly a low hum starts to come from the wall his gun is against. From the wall next to them. Kenmore and Ronon look over at it. Then she looks back at McKay. He’s grinning at the wall.

“What did you do,” she accuses.

“Keep him alive,” Goa’uld McKay orders.

“What do you need us for,” she barks. Clearly at the end of her own line.

“Bait,” he answers.

McKay grabs his gun, sticks it back in its holster, and unplugs the tablet from the center computer console. He walks over to the doors. They easily slide open at his presence. And he walks out of the room. Kenmore waits, tennineeight, and waits, sevensixfive, just to make sure his departure isn’t a trick, fourthreetwoone. Then an additional four-count, just in case. She wasn’t stupid, how many times had Stargate team personnel been caught with their pants down when they’d thought they were in the clear only for the damn snakehead to come back. One, still no McKay. She dives for Ronon’s gun. And her hand slams into a sky blue shimmering forceshield with streaks of searing white electricity arcing through it before the rest of her body can get there.

“Ow, damn it.”

She yanks her hand back, shaking and flexing it and wincing. She looks around, waiting. McKay doesn’t come back. Kenmore turns around, looks at the main computer just sitting there, and makes a play for it too. Closer than the wall this time, her hand again slams into a sizzling pale blue forceshield. She yanks it back, flexing it over and over again. She looks over at the door and where her gun is. Gingerly this time, she slowly reaches out to it. Nothing. She leans forward. Nothing. She stretches out as far as she can towards it. Still nothing. McKay has left the door free. She pulls back to Ronon.

“Lay down,” she orders him.

“What?”

“Lay down. You can’t stand up and walk, you’ll hurt yourself even further, but I can drag you around everywhere with me without too much damamge so lay down.”

“Go get your gun,” he orders her.

“No,” she snaps.

“What?”

“No,” she repeats like it was an obvious answer.

Ronon, already in agony, fights the urge to go get the gun himself and shoot her.

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Episode Seven- Home Again, Part One- Chapter Four

Chapter Four

The doors, a massive double-set that took up almost the whole wall, split open on a room that was cast in shadows that seemed to drape the walls like massive thick velvet curtains drape a stage. It was lit only by the icy-blue glow of several crystalline buttons from the three computer consoles linked together to form a semi-circle in the middle of the room. Kenmore and Ronon walk in, guns at the ready, flanking Rodney on either side. The stark light given off by the blue lights show that what details of the room that can be seen are nothing more than more of those golden segmented wall columns stationed around the doors’ frame, the corners of the room, and guarding either side of a giant upside-down pyramid shape made out of the same black stone as the doors inset into a piece of the same segmented gold design as the columns only this time it was wide enough to be considered like a floor to ceiling fireplace surround on one wall. As soon as the Lieutenant and the weapons Specialist figure out the room’s clear, which doesn’t take long, Rodney immediately heads for the middle console of the computer. The twin bulky doors close behind them and Kenmore and Ronon ease. Rodney looks over the computer’s paneling.

“Do any of you know how to read Goa’uld?”

The other two look at him.

“Ancient Egyptian? No, not really. We had other team members that did that,” Kenmore tells him.

“Like who,” Rodney asks her. Kenmore never really talked about her previous SG team in even remote specifics like this. She just continued to refer to herself as one of their members, as part of Cheyenne Mountain still. All the rest of them, except for her actual friends in Atlantis, actually knew about her team was from the team designation patch she still wore on her BDU jacket’s right shoulder: they were SG-25.

“Daniel Jackson,” she answers him.

Oh well Dannyboy…  Rodney goes back to the actually pretty foreign computer in front of him. Give him an Ancient computer even a Wraith computer and he’d have the thing spilling it’s alien motherboard’s guts to him just pick a speed, any speed. Usually the quicker, the better. But Goa’uld computers…  Well, he supposed he couldn’t complain that much. Oh he’d complain, just not that much. He’d helped out on the dissecting of the Goa’uld Death Gliders SG-1 had captured in order to reverse engineer the F-301s, F-302s, and the prototypes of each one years ago back at Area 51. It had been fulfilling work and he had even been called in a couple of times for work on the astrophysics of the Stargate itself at the SGC. But still, by that time it was well-known and well-established fact that the Goa’uld were not the ones who created the Stargate network, they’d just scavenged it from the race that had: the Ancients. Which technically put that last boast to himself under the heading of Ancient technology not Goa’uld. He looks over the computer console in front of him again, and it’s smoothed and polished gray cut-stone paneling with a handful of tall rectangular lights going up and down it’s sides and one short elongated one stretching across the console’s raised back panel, the upside down pyramid-shaped panel of stone whose edges are illuminated by still more elongated narrow rectangular lights underneath the main computer panel, and all the hyper-ornate detailing on the computer’s top paneling that served absolutely no purpose other than letting some alien parasite in someone’s skull say ‘Oh look at my stuff, isn’t it sleek and stylish and it’s so much prettier than yours’. There’s more long minutes of silence. Rodney McKay has absolutely no idea what to do with this thing. Finally Rodney gives up on trying to read the console’s top panels, he digs his fingernails underneath the gray, actually metal, plate that was the center panel, and begins to try and pry the plate off the console. Well, if he couldn’t figure it out the easy way, he should at least still be able to guess at what this thing does from its insides.

He strains for a moment then the plate pops up and he lays it on the carved surface of the panel next to the console. He reaches behind him, blindly unzips the large pocket on his tacvest located at the base of his back, and pulls out his computer tablet. Then he pulls out a jack from one of the upfront pockets of his vest and plugs one end into his computer tablet. He surveys the mess of exposed and fully lit thick, flat half-circle crystals of the computer panel, trying very hard to remember the guts of those Death Gliders from all those years ago, then plucks out the central crystal bearing a ribbon of emerald green on its showing half-circle curved edge, puts the crystal down on the removed console plate, and plugs the other end of his jack into the newly vacated slot in the heart of the nest of slatted crystals just where he hoped a place for it to plug into would be. Thank God his memory was eidetic. He grinned to himself, thank god he’s a genius, where would these people be without him? Rodney taps a few buttons on his computer tablet’s screen. The frosty blue glow its screen casts upon his face changes to stark white with accents of amber and gold. He was in. He looks up.

“One of us should radio the others just to make sure we haven’t lost communication.”

Without hesitation, Kenmore reaches up and switches on her shoulder radio much to Ronon’s apparent displeasure. Rodney couldn’t possibly think of why, it wasn’t like Ronon was normally the one to suddenly jump up and go ‘I’ll do it’ when that question was normally asked in the team, and that was before Lieutenant Kenmore showed up. The scientist goes back to his tablet with a dismissive shrug.

“Kenmore to Sheppard,” the Lieutenant spoke into her activated radio.

Sheppard’s voice came over the radio loud and clear, “Sheppard here, what is it?”

“McKay wanted us to report in to make sure the radios haven’t gone on the fritz the way the lifesigns detectors have.”

*                      *                      *

Sheppard, Carter, and Teyla are slowly, stealthily walking down another corridor as dark as the room the tank was in had been. Sheppard glances over at his comrades. Good one, McKay.

“Okay, well they work,” he said instead. No need to give the scientist an already bigger head than he’d had for years now. Especially considering he was obviously listening in. John didn’t even like to give Rodney that much credit in private conversation with other people in Atlantis for fear it would get back around to the scientist’s ears and then John would never live it down wherever he went in the city. Once when they’d met a ten thousand-year old version of the Expedition’s first leader, Doctor Elizabeth Weir, and she’d regaled them with the story of how the ‘first’ Expedition arrived in Atlantis and, in particular, Rodney’s heroics from the quickly flooding gateroom, John couldn’t help but comment after Rodney complimented himself on his manly, life-saving actions…  But ultimately failing,’ John’d said then crossed his arms over his chest complete with a condescending smartass smirk at the arrogant astrophysicist to which Rodney just glared at him. He just couldn’t help himself shooting down Rodney’s big head, it was a necessary action. Otherwise they’d all have killed Rodney about a dozen times over for each of them by now just for his condescending retorts to everyone.

*                      *                      *

Kenmore looks over at Rodney.

“Well keep the line open,” he says loud enough to be sure the radio’s caught his voice, “I want to make sure we don’t lose communication while I do this.”

Kenmore goes back to the radio and begins to walk around the back of the half-circle of computer consoles as Rodney starts typing away on his tablet in front of it and Ronon double checks the corners of the room. Well, if they had to keep the lines of communication open…

“So, General,” Kenmore begins, “how does it feel to be back?”

“Pretty good,” Jacob Carter’s genuinely chipper voice comes over her radio.

Kenmore smiles, “Well, it’s about damn time someone put Ba’als’ technology to good use. I’m just glad it was the Tok’ra. So when are you gonna tell Sam you’re alive?”

*                      *                      *

Jacob looks over at Sheppard’s radio, the Lieutenant Colonel had left the line open. Instinctively John knew not to look over at the General, but he caught sight of the man’s face from the corner of his eye anyway. The General’s expression is strange; Teyla would define it as guarded, so would Sheppard. It takes a moment of Jacob’s mouth and jaw and eyes looking like he wanted to say something, several things several times actually, before he managed to finally say something…

“It’s complicated,” he says. It was simple, but it was also strained. And he goes back to looking ahead of him again.

*                      *                      *

Kenmore stops opposite the door, in front of Ronon, and a few feet away from McKay’s side and leans on the top part of the computer console, it’s height comes up to her hip.

“Come on, Jacob. She deserves to know,” she says.

*                      *                      *

Carter looks down at the floor for a moment then regains himself. He really didn’t want to be talking about this right now, especially in front of people he didn’t know but knew his daughter. But he knew Ursula was unstoppable, so it wasn’t going to do him any good trying not to talk about this with her regardless of whoever is around.

“I know that,” Jacob says. His voice wasn’t as harsh or as sharp as John had expected. There was an edge to it, but still nowhere near the tone of voice John would have used if a subordinate, no matter how well they knew each other, asked him about something personal like that. The General simply sounded like it was a reluctant but important conversation between old friends.

*                      *                      *

Kenmore stares off into the rest of the room in front of her. Ronon watches her as Rodney keeps typing.

“You know she called off the wedding after you died,” Kenmore told her presenceless friend.

Rodney looks over at her.

“Sam was engaged,” he exclaimed. When had this happened?

Kenmore looks over her shoulder at him.

“Yeah, didn’t she tell you guys that?”

Rodney shakes his head.

“It was years ago, to Pete Shannahan.”

Rodney takes the information in then…

“Hmm.”

He goes back to his work, but it was the way he was going back to his work. His expression while he was doing it, Hell, it was even his ‘Hmm’…

“What,” Kenmore stares at him, her eyebrows furrowing together incredulously, “You were hoping it was gonna be you?”

Ronon suddenly looks over at Rodney and it was the expression on Ronon’s face too. It was all at once hopeful, angry, and interested. Rodney ignores them both, kept his head down and kept working, but he couldn’t hide the violent blushing spreading across his face up into his receding hairline.

“Please, you’ve got Doc Keller,” she told him, “Don’t get greedy.”

Ronon turns his eyes to her. Even though she didn’t know the personal history that had gone on between Keller, Ronon, and Rodney’s ‘love triangle’, Well she didn’t have to say it like that.

Kenmore goes back to her radio, “Anyways…”

*                      *                      *

“Anyways,” General Carter jumps back in, “How’s that little boy of yours? The last time I saw you two, you were about to pop with him. Just counting down the days till he got there. He’s gotta be a big boy by now.”

John smiled as he continued to scan the corridor up ahead. It was a good tactic, changing the subject. It was also kinda nice to get to hear General Carter turn the table on Kenmore and get her to have a conversation that might reveal things about her that they didn’t know yet.

*                      *                      *

Kenmore smiles and goes back to staring at the floor between her and Ronon in front of her, remembering how she looked that pregnant. Big as a barn, puffy all over her body, not just in her face and ankles. Wearing the biggest size of BDU shirt the military made and even then she’d been pushing its capacity to cover over her baby belly. Wearing a regular pair of pregnancy pants with a stretchy waistband because there simply isn’t a pair of BDU pants out there that can cope with a woman’s stomach when it’s like that. She wore combat boots that were actually a couple of sizes too large for her because they were the only ones nearest her foot size that could handle her swollen ankles. She looked like a wreck and was happy for every moment of it.

“Yeah,” she sort of laughs, “he’s a big boy now.”

“Still the apple of his godfather’s eye,” Jacob goes on.

Her grin broadens under Ronon’s watchful eyes and bristling demeanor, “Yep, he still wants to become the first Tauri Jaffa and his Godpa Teal’c was training him till we—“

Her voice stops and Ronon stares at her, Teal’c is Michael’s godfather? With a clearing of her throat, tossing away lost futures, or at the very least stalled ones, Kenmore surges on.

“Yeah, well—“

*                      *                      *

“I know,” Jacob answers her quietly.

Sheppard and Teyla flicker glances at the General. They knew how Kenmore feels about how she’d been tricked into coming to Atlantis with her son. They were not good feelings.

“I heard Teal’c tried to board the Daedalus and storm over to Atlantis to get the two of you back when he found out what happened,” Jacob laughed a little, wistfully, “Jack nearly went with him.”

Sheppard fought the urge to stare at the man on his left. And he hoped Teyla was fighting the urge to stare as well. How, wha—, why would people care about her that strongly? She’s such a brat here. It was starting to sound like two different Lieutenant Kenmores. The shiver threatened to shudder John’s shoulders. There were two different Lieutenant Kenmores—are two different Lieutenant Kenmores. Then the main thought finally penetrated into his brain and he actually did look over at General Carter. Teal’c is Michael’s godfather?!

*                      *                      *

Kenmore playfully kicks at the floor just in front of her in an ‘aw schucks’ sort of way, “That sounds about right of the two of them.”

“Heard Sam threatened to take the George Hammond over there to kick that Woolsey guy’s ass and get you two back. Offered the ship up to Jack and Teal’c and anyone else wanting to go on the trip. The SGC was in danger of being undermanned,” Jacob’s voice told her over the radio, the tone of his voice finding the humor in all of it.

Kenmore looked like she wanted to giggle but was too touched to do it. Ronon felt his jaw drop in his mouth a little and quickly clenched it back up into its usual position again. It looked like he was just staring at her. Granted his eyes betrayed the ‘What the hell?’ he was clearly feeling, but it still looked like he just staring at her.

After a moment’s pause, it came, “I’m sorry about Michael.” Jacob’s voice said softly. Quietly.

“I know,” Kenmore’s voice caught in her throat.

“I remember the last time we had lunch,” Jacob was quiet in his wistfulness, “The way he looked at you…  I’ve never seen a man more in love with his wife, other than myself I mean.” Jacob laughed a little, “And you sent the same look right back at him.”

Kenmore nodded even though Carter wasn’t there to see it. Her lips pursed tightly together, as though that would stop the floodgate of emotion from spilling its waters.

“I,” her voice caught again, “I,” she coughed, “I thank God he has his father’s hair. And he acts so much like him… at least I didn’t lose that.”

There’s silence and somehow Ronon gets the feeling that her friend on the other end is nodding his head even though Kenmore wasn’t there to see it.

“I think the same thing every time I look at Samantha or Mark or David and Lisa. That’s a gift… to never have the one you love leave you when you’ve got kids.”

“Yeah,” Kenmore nods in a slightly laughing agreement, in a desperate attempt to lighten the mood, as she reaches up and wipes away a few tears that managed to slip down onto her cheeks.

Jacob apparently takes the hint…

“Speaking of gifts, I hear you’re only half-human.”

Kenmore rolls her eyes with a scoffing sigh. It was heard over the radio.

“Hey, being half-Ancient isn’t so bad,” Jacob defended.

“Yeah, it’s so friggin’ peachy. Look where it got me, it got me stuck here with my kid,” her sarcasm just dripping.

As the Lieutenant goes back to her private-but-not-so-private conversation over her radio and Ronon continuing to stare at her like she’d just grown another head, no one sees a shadow come out of the floor and slither up the back of Rodney’s boots and through the fabric of his pants. Suddenly and unnoticed, Rodney stops working and stiffens straight up. Any flushed skin was gone. Without hesitation, he draws his pistol from its side holster at his hip, raises it in Kenmore’s direction, and fires. The blast passes in front of Kenmore and plows into Ronon’s abdomen. Ronon slams back against the wall. Slides down it, clutching the belly wound that’s already starting to bleed profusely.

“Oh my God,” Kenmore exclaims.

She races to Ronon’s side.

*                      *                      *

Sheppard, Carter, and Teyla freeze at the gunshot blast over the radio. Sheppard frantically grabs his radio.

“What was that? Kenmore, what happened?”

“McKay just shot Ronon,” Kenmore’s voice rushes out of his radio.

Sheppard’s jaw drops in shock, “What?!”

*                      *                      *

Kenmore kneels by Ronon’s side.

“McKay just shot Ronon. I know, I know,” she repeated and then adds, she didn’t have to see the expression on his face or hear it in his voice to know how Sheppard was feeling. What he was feeling. She wouldn’t have believed it too if she hadn’t been here to see it herself.

She leans forward trying to check Ronon’s wound when she feels cold metal press against the base of her skull. Kenmore freezes then slowly turns her head back to look up at McKay holding his pistol on her at well more than usual point-blank range.

“McKay, what the hell are you thinking,” she breathes at him.

McKay’s eyes suddenly flash and stay glowing. And Kenmore’s expression immediately becomes the set expression of meeting an old enemy.

“Your friend isn’t here anymore,” the distinctly Goa’uld baritone sounds from his lips.

*                      *                      *

Sheppard, still holding on to his receiving radio, looks over at the rest of his team; his mouth hanging slightly ajar, his brows pinched together in shock and confusion, and upset. Teyla stares at Sheppard’s radio, a fear and astonishment on her face and in her eyes. The muscles and skin over her cheekbones start to tremble in their abrupt tightness. Carter meets Sheppard’s eyes. Whatever they had feared coming in here, it hadn’t been this.

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Episode Seven- Home Again, Part 1- Chapter Three

Chapter Three

Kenmore kneels down, still horrified, and touches what’s left of the symbiote’s body.

“Poor thing,” she whispers in pity.

“It was a Goa’uld,” Ronon says, again clearly not understanding what the problem was. It was the enemy, it’s dead now; where does the pity come in? Where does it come from?

Kenmore turns sharply to look up at him.

“It was still a person,” she bites angrily.

She looks back at the body, sympathy once more filling every part of her body for the little creature.

“There was something wrong with it,” Selmak says.

Again, without the heads-up, the sound of the voice so suddenly beside him made John almost jump.

“What do you mean,” Rodney asks. He hadn’t seen anything wrong. It was squeaking and slithering and tried to attack Kenmore. What was so wrong? Wasn’t that what Goa’uld do, especially the symbiotes looking for a host?

Kenmore nods, “Selmak’s right. I’ve never seen a symbiote do that before. The talking, yes, but I’ve never heard of a symbiote ever actually attacking somebody.”

Rodney looks at her, he had. Samantha Carter got taken by the Tok’ra Jolinar in a rather Goa’uld like way. She’d simply bent down to give a wounded and fallen refugee CPR during an attack by the Goa’uld and the Tok’ra symbiote dove from the host’s mouth to Carter’s mouth and stabbed itself through the back of her throat and slithered into her skull. Rodney already knew he did things very differently from the way the people in Cheyenne Mountain, hell, the whole SGC do them, but he’d definitely label Jolinar’s taking Sam as a host as ‘attacking’.

“Goa’uld symbiotes don’t attack you face to face, they sneak up behind you and ambush you through the back of your neck. They know they aren’t liked or wanted,” she went on.

Rodney still looks at her, “And how is ‘ambush’ not ‘attack’? On what planet does that make sense?”

Everyone ignores him.

“Was it a Goa’uld,” Teyla asks the Tok’ra.

“There is no way of telling,” Selmak says, “We are all the same except for how we treat others.”

“Well considering it tried to attack her, I would say it was a Goa’uld,” Sheppard throws in his two cents.

Kenmore shakes her head as she stands up, “I don’t think so.”

“What do mean?”

“I felt like I knew him,” Sheppard stares at her still keeping her focus on the symbiote body lying on the floor; her voice was so calm, so mournful…, she turns her head to look over at the General, “Selmak, did you know him?”

The man shakes his head at her.

“I cannot do that. I can only sense that another symbiote is near, not whether or not it is someone I am familiar with Goa’uld or not.”

Kenmore nods and looks back down at the dead symbiote. Her sympathetic demeanor was actually pretty disturbing to say the least. It was so, so, so unlike her, it, it…  John fought the urge to shiver or to shake off the urge to shiver. Okay, this was all weird as hell and not the sort of weird as hell they were used to handling. It was more the sort of weird as hell that a group of teenagers at summer camp met up with in horror flicks. He didn’t like it.

“Do you sense any other symbiotes,” John asks their Tok’ra ‘tour guide’. Trying to keep the mission at hand still at the front of his mind, despite the circumstances—or because of them—he really didn’t want to run into anymore of those things. Big tromping Wraith drones or even regular more catlike in their stealth Wraith males were actually pretty easy to hear coming, something slithering out of the walls behind you with absolutely no sound whatsoever was something else entirely. He really didn’t want to run into anymore of those things. The hibbey-gibbies weren’t his thing. He looks up and down the corridor. Had any come up behind them yet? Damn it, the hibbey-gibbies…

“I sense many others,” the Tok’ra answers him. The entire Team Atlantis and Kenmore tenses.

Ronon looks around, up and down the corridor too. But nothing.

“Then where are they?”

“The symbiotes can still live even if the host has died. They just can’t live that long beyond the host,” Rodney tells them all, not like Selmak nor Kenmore needed him to, “They’ve got a twenty-four hour window.”

Ronon looks around them again.

“Then where are they,” he repeats. Ronon knew Rodney figured he’d just answered the question, but the scientist really hadn’t.

“I agree with Ronon. I find it disturbing that we have yet to find a body, any body.”

Kenmore looks over at Teyla, “You still want to know whether or not the Wraith have been here.”

Teyla nods, Kenmore nods back. Sheppard turns to Rodney and gestures at the lifesigns detector in the doctorate-bearing astrophysicist’s hand.

“Is that thing still on the fritz?”

“Yeah, it’s still registering lifesigns but they’re everywhere. I think it’s saying that they’re even in the walls. According to this, we’re surrounded.”

Everyone looks around, seeing only the décor and themselves still. Although they had also seen just that before the dead symbiote had slithered out of the wall a handful of seconds ago…

“Well, I think that’s wrong,” Ronon says.

“Maybe not,” Rodney counters, “I’m also reading energy spikes in select areas.”

“That would not be unusual,” the Tok’ra speaks up again, “Motherships use different systems at different times. If a sarcophagus was opening, everything would be focused on protecting that room and making sure the sarcophagus was as secure as possible.”

“Aren’t sarcophagi coffins,” Sheppard asks. Just when the mystery of the spooky ghost Goa’uld mothership hanging out dead in the middle of space wasn’t goose pimpling enough already with little snake aliens slithering out of the walls in their own rendition of Invasion of the Body Snatchers

“On Earth, but to the Goa’uld they’re more like regeneration tanks,” Kenmore answers.

Sheppard starts nodding, “Okay, so that’s a little creepy. I’ve never seen anyone rise from the dead before.”

“What are you talking about,” Rodney scoffs as ‘Oh my God, how stupid can you possibly be’ as he normally does, “You’ve seen Wraith do it.”

“Yeah, but they didn’t look like Dracula when they did it. They’re more like Frankenstein.” Big burly drones just suddenly sitting up with chests riddled with P-90 fire.

Rodney just stares at him. The look of ‘Are you seriously telling me that that’s any better?’ on his frank face. Sheppard shrugs it off and looks away. Teyla, however, shifts uneasily where she stands. She is agitated. Unusual for her, although the entire situation was unusual for all but two of them.

“Where is the nearest spike,” she asks.

“You figure that the Wraith would go for the nearest spike because that might be the best indicator of where the food would be,” Rodney asks.

Teyla nods. Her eyes still searching all around them, every crevasse of the corridor’s richly ornate walls. Showing particular care to the crevasses where the walls gold detailed paneling ended and the shining black lacquer of the smooth floors began.

“I also fear that they might have found one of the regeneration tanks,” she adds.

“Why,” Rodney wonders, “The Wraith already have considerable regenerative capabilities. Besides I don’t think they could use a sarcophagus even if they wanted too. Like Kenmore said, it was designed only for the Goa’uld’s and subsequently the human host’s use.”

Teyla looks at him, “And if the Wraith have found out that they now have a way to feed on a human to death and then regenerate that person back to life at no expense to themselves and feed on them again?”

The look of horror spreads across Rodney’s face like a deep grimace of pain and regret… for another person. His shoulders remained squared underneath the weight of his tactical vest, but the lines of his mouth sagged so much downward that it gave the illusion of his whole body sagging underneath the burden of sorrow like a depressed bulldog. A sorrow he’d just found out others that were perhaps like him were suffering. His eyes taking on this acutely alerted to shocking pain and misery look. As usual, it was more obvious than the tangible disturbance exhibited by Ronon and Sheppard. Their bodies became even tauter, but the subtleties were there between the two. Ronon’s normally stern and blatantly pissy caveman face softened. There was a haunted memory there of being covered in superficial cuts and hooked up to an IV while standing beside the hospital bed of Doctor Elizabeth Weir, hooked up to machines with her brain severely damaged and her life only not fleeing her by the support of the machines around her. He looked down on her then just as softly at her condition, this strong woman who had given him a home and a life after so long without both… and he said thank you to her… and good-bye. In the face of so much pain and undue suffering, he couldn’t help but feel it all. His prominent brow pinching. And for Sheppard, every muscle in his face tightened to the point of the muscles in his body. Pulled so tight by the sudden retreat of his own emotions threatening to suddenly overwhelm him. But their existence was still there in his eyes. The way they stared at the floor just a few feet ahead of him, as though they could burrow through the solid stone with their dedicated intensity. The tight furrow of his brows. Drawn so boldly together they looked as though they had been etched into his face that way. His upper lip, although contributing to holding his mouth open slightly, was drawn so tightly it looked like a thin parallel line over his much looser bottom one. Every fiber of him told anyone who was looking that no matter what the threat was, no matter how grave, no matter how… he would not let it happen to them no matter the cost.

“They would have just discovered a way to extend the limits of their food supply which would mean…,” Rodney trails off, his lip quiver slightly as his eyes glaze over the horrific scenario his mind’s eye was showing him.

“A whole new hell for the people in the Pegasus Galaxy,” John picks up grimly.

Rodney scrambles to look back down at the detector in his hand and read where the nearest energy reading is.

“It’s up ahead and to the right,” he points.

The astrophysicist leads the way and the others taking up their positions guarding him as they move. Still leery, but motivated more by urgency now then any sense of personal danger. Teyla’s thoughts, as they always do when something like this comes up, go to the people of her galaxy. If, like she had suggested, the Wraith had gotten a hold of a Goa’uld sarcophagus, it would be an unspeakable horror upon the humanity of this galaxy. At least one good thing from the feeding process and the Wraith’s opinions of humans was that once they fed on a person, that was it. That person was dead. They did not have to suffer anymore. But with a sarcophagus… all that would change. The Wraith with such a device in their possession using it to continually regenerate their fed-upon dead back to life only to be fed upon again…  What had become a legendary horror in this galaxy would now become a legendary terror. Torture.

Rodney follows the detector to another black, cut-stone panel of wall guarded on both sides by gold, symbol-laden paneling. He stops a few feet away from it, making sure that it’s where the spike is coming from.

“This is it,” he finally announces.

He looks up from his lifesigns detector. As before, there’s a single scorched mark on the gold panel to the right telling him where the door mechanism had been obliterated.

“Is every door in this place blown out,” he exclaims.

The others glance over.

“I mean the glider bay I understand, but every single door. It’ll take forever to hotwire through them all,” he goes on.

Kenmore looks at the tri-pieced door itself. She walks over to it.

“It’s ajar. I can see something glowing inside. Here…”

She lowers her gun, slips her fingers in between the two black stone panels of door and the half-inch gap therein, and begins to pull. Ronon and Sheppard step forward and help her pull the door open from the opposite side. The doors slowly pry apart before Jacob, Rodney, and Teyla. The light blue glow spreads at their feet and across their bodies and Sheppard, Ronon, and Kenmore’s fingers. Teyla, Rodney, and Carter step forward in astonishment and appall.

“Oh my God,” Rodney gasps.

“What,” Ronon asks, still helping to pry the door the rest of the way open and blocked from view by most of his side of the door’s bulk. But the others are so riveted, they just keep staring and don’t answer him back. He’s not even sure that Rodney heard him, any of them heard him, anymore. The Satedan glances down between his arms to see Sheppard’s eyes glancing up at him. The Colonel barely discernibly nods. The towering Satedan returns the gesture.

Ronon and Sheppard plant their half of the door as Kenmore plants her half. They come around to see what they’ve uncovered. Kenmore’s eyes widen and her mouth gapes softly at the scene. The room is so dark that they can barely tell what features it has, but in the very center of the room is a giant platform table, ornate and gold with trim of an Ancient Egyptian egg and feather motif carved into the tabletop’s wide circular rim. It was actually quite pretty, just like everything else in this place, but what was sitting on top of it was anything but. To John it looked just like a giant fish tank, one of those huge fifty-gallon suckers, like the sort of super-aquarium people really into their fish have as sort of pseudo-shrines to them. He’d always thought those people were demented, but the decoration of this tank actually looked like it. It was glass, as you’d suspect a fish tank to be, but it wasn’t trimmed or capped or decorated in any way in gold, they way he’d figure a Goa’uld fish tank would be if the Goa’uld had fish tanks. It was trimmed in gray, the same gray the stone of the doors is colored. Long strips of whatever it was, it looked like it was poured rather than hewn from any larger lode—so that ruled out it actually being the same stone as the doors… or did it actually rule out the doors being stone? Anyways—the strips of whatever seemed to be poured over the glass sides of the rectangular tank dividing the long sides into four tall but narrow sections of glass and the shorter sides into two such sections. The overall frame of the tank’s square corners were usual by Earth standards, blunt and sharp and completely nothing more than structure. With a fat cable running around the edge of the table top and many more smaller ones, about a half-inch thick as opposed to the two-inch thickness of their source cable, running from the tank and the bigger cable into the shadowy left wall. And the whole thing was capped off by… nothing. It was open and the tank was full of water… and symbiotes. The group steps closer to the tank but keep their distance, their last encounter still fresh in their minds. But Kenmore after a moment’s pause takes more steps closer.

“Kenmore,” Sheppard hisses at her through gritted teeth. She’s doing it again, he wanted to roll his eyes, run forward, and yank her back.

She doesn’t pay attention to him as she continues her slow approach to the tank. The closer she gets the more symbiotes crowd to the side of the tank she’s approaching. The whole thing fascinates her. Finally, only a few steps away, the symbiotes are fighting to get to her so hard that they start to splash in the water. Creating so many bubbles they’re fogging up the water. She can see that some are getting crushed against the glass or pushed out of the water completely, but they don’t seem to care; they’re so desperate to get to her. Kenmore lunges forward and grabs onto the lip of the tank in one sudden movement. Her mission comrades flinch behind her; Sheppard letting another sharp hiss escape his teeth.

God, they shouldn’t do that to themselves, she thinks, gazing at the outskirts of the panic her presence was creating. Without knowing it, one of her fingertips dangles over the edge, close to the waterline. She feels a sudden suction on the tip. She gasps. Yanking her hands back and jumping away from the tank. Ronon draws his weapon. But Kenmore holds up her hand at him.

“No, it didn’t hurt me.”

She shows them the fingertip then brings it back to her face to examine it herself. She turns and walks back up to the tank, curious.

“I think it kissed me,” she says.

“What,” Rodney exclaims, disbelieving.

Kenmore looks at her hand again then down into the tank then back at her hand again then plunges her arm into the tank with the crowd of symbiotes. Sheppard surges forward. Jesus Christ…

“Hey, hey, hey.” The last time she did that—well, every time she’s done that—bad things happened, albeit really fortuitous things that usually revealed something that they really, really, really needed to know about, but still…  Bad things happened.

“They aren’t attacking me,” she dismisses his worries as he steps up beside her.

She looks down into the tank, he catches the soft expression on her face out of the corner of his eyes before he looks down into the tank too. The symbiotes are clinging to her arm, but more importantly they’re crowding in behind her arm. In between her arm and the glass of the tank in front of her.

“They’re afraid,” Kenmore tells them.

The rest of the group cautiously walks up to the tank. Teyla comes just a hair further than the others though still not as far as Kenmore. Out of nowhere, it’s like the symbiotes suddenly sense her presence. Or more like they finally see her. About half of the crowd swim out from behind Kenmore’s arm and swim towards Teyla. Again, crushing the closest against the glass at the corner of tank Teyla’s approaching and shoving the highest above the waterline. Their intent is clear. The new smaller crowd is desperate to get to her as well. Like Kenmore, Teyla’s compassion overwhelms her and she comes just as close to the tank as Kenmore is, but she holds onto the lip of the tank with her fingertips rather than shove her arm down into its depths. Despite the claims of two of her companions on this mission, they still had not fully identified whether or not the other symbiote that had tried to attack Lieutenant Kenmore had been a Goa’uld or a Tok’ra.

“My God there must be hundreds of them,” Rodney breathes. He was floored.

Selmak shakes his head, “No, dozens. There’s no more than a hundred in this tank. Could the Wraith have done this?”

This time it’s Teyla’s turn to shake her head. Her delicate amber locks moving swiftly from side to side, “I have never heard of them being this… courteous before.”

“If you can call terrifying symbiotes courteous,” Rodney adds.

Teyla accepts that. It had been why she hesitated before using the word. But it was the best she could find to describe this treatment, if indeed the Wraith had done this.

“What if they couldn’t feed on the Goa’uld,” Sheppard supplies.

“What do you mean,” Ronon asks, “Their hosts are human.”

“That’s just it. What if having these symbiotes in their heads made the hosts less tasty?”

“So they took the symbiotes out and ate the hosts,” Rodney asks Sheppard’s already thought of conclusion. “Yeah, sure, ‘cause the Wraith are always so nice that way. Not to mention neat and tidy.” And he lets the sarcasm of the thought show in the expression he aims at his team leader.

Sheppard offers a simpering ‘Oh hah hah’ expression back.

Ronon shakes his head, he didn’t agree with his team leader’s idea either.

“No, if the Wraith can’t feed on you, they use you. Remember,” he angles the barrel of his gun at the back of his neck where years ago the Wraith had placed a tracking device in him and his teammates had taken it out then another Wraith put one back in and his teammates had to take that one out again.

Rodney nods with a gesturing of both his hands towards Ronon and a slight bow of his head that seemed more like he was presenting Ronon in a tuh-dah moment than anything else.

“Is every energy spike a tank such as this,” Teyla asks. Her eyes surveying the continuing churning water. She feels a pang inside of her, in her heart that makes her want to echo Lieutenant Kenmore’s actions and place her arms in the tank as well in order to give these poor desperate creatures the apparent safety and security they so frantically desire. The longer she stands here, the more she sees the desperation of her people in these symbiotes, the more the sympathy grows.

Rodney checks his detector.

“The readings vary slightly, but I think they are except for one. Its readings are massive,” he looks up at the expectant faces watching him, “It might be the computer powering the tanks.”

“We should go check it out,” Sheppard tells them.

Teyla nods emphatically. Kenmore tries to pull her arm back out of the tank when she feels some of the symbiotes suction themselves through the fabric of her BDU shirt to the skin of her arm. She pulls her arm only a few inches out of the water and sees several of the snake-like creatures dangling from it, from her skin. Twitching, not wanting to let go of their safety net. Not wanting their haven to leave them. Kenmore carefully slips her arm back into the tank beneath the waterline.

“Okay, okay guys,” she tries to soothe them, “You have to let go. I can’t help you if you won’t let me go. I promise we’ll help all of you, I promise, but you have to let me go.”

After a moment in which everyone stares at Kenmore and Rodney in particular stares at her as though she’s crazy, they see the symbiotes detach themselves from her. Kenmore pulls her arm out of the tank, shakes as much of the water off as she can, wrings her shirt sleeves and cuffs some to get the rest of the water out, and takes up her gun dangling in front of her again. Okay… so Lieutenant Ursula Kenmore was apparently the Goa’uld/Tok’ra—whatever it was, doesn’t matter—symbiote whisperer. John eyes her movements, eyes her. She was so unconscious of how people might or were looking at her when she did something like that. Even more now than when she had assassinated Shiana, he saw how little she cared about what other people think when she believed something so strongly nothing was going to stop her from doing it. Faith? Or was it confidence? He couldn’t tell which. And he wasn’t sure, in her, there was a difference.

“Okay. Sheppard, Teyla, General, you three should go find the control room. Ronon, McKay, and I will go after that computer and see if we can help these guys,” she snaps off the order.

Ronon looks at Sheppard, clearly unhappy with Kenmore’s taking control of the team, let alone the way she’d divided the teams up. It was obvious, like with all enemies, or just strangers in general, Ronon didn’t want to help these things. And he definitely didn’t see why Lieutenant Kenmore kept making sure he was always with her when she split up the team into groups. And why the hell was Sheppard always letting her do it? But before he can ask that question…

“I like that plan,” Sheppard says. He keeps his face pointed directly at Kenmore. Clearly ignoring his friend and teammate’s stare… and possibly the question he was seeing there.

Ronon looks away from Sheppard, fighting the urge to roll his eyes—he’s never had to do that before; he’s never wanted to roll his eyes at John before—and down at the tank, adjusting the heft of his four pound gun in his hand. John felt the muscles in his own shoulders and neck prickle and tense. Great, he hoped Ronon could have at least been on good behavior with a guest around, especially if that guest was Colonel Samantha Carter’s dad and knowing how Ronon has a high respect for the woman. Apparently John had been wrong in that assumption. Damn. At least he hoped the man would do their friendship, tried as it has been for a while here, the courtesy of obeying his orders when John gave them…  John hoped… again. He fought the urge to rolls his own eyes and sigh in a very Rodney-esque manner, Aw damn, this is gonna be tough.

“Sounds good to me,” General Carter agrees. John wanted to jump again, he didn’t, but thank God the lack of transition this time had startled him out of his musings on how bad the Ronon/Kenmore factor was going to make this mission, and how bad the Ronon and he friendship was getting.

With them all—well, most—agreed with the present course of action, the mission team starts to head for the door. After only a few steps, Sheppard puts a hand out on Ronon’s arm, halts them both in their steps, and leans in to his friend slightly.

“Don’t shoot her,” Sheppard orders him.

Ronon doesn’t physically acknowledge him, but John can see the muscles in the man’s face tighten. He was grinding his teeth and that was enough of a confirmation that Ronon had heard John that Sheppard needed. Then they too join the group leaving the room.

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Episode Seven- Home Again, Part 1- Chapter Two

Chapter Two

The invisible jumper slips beneath the giant chrome ‘snowflake’ that wrapped around the middle of the golden pyramid that formed the main body of the Ha’tak-class Goa’uld mothership and headed straight towards a gapping opening at the bottom of the wide darkened black steel trench that broke the gold pyramid-shape into seven sections. Normally the black steel looked as though it were embroidered with pinpricks of white lights, but not this time. The jumper glided, still undetected, into the darkness of the hangar bay and entered Team Atlantis into an environment they were totally unfamiliar with.

The interior of a Goa’uld mothership was unlike anything they had ever passed into before. It was no sanctuary, no Ancient facility of any kind. No Genii compound. No hiveship. Although there was something to be said about the hangar bays on the bad guys’ ships: they were always dark, and shadows became a whole new realm of imperceptibility that boggled the mind, played with it, and threw it into depths only it could come up with. There were only hints of light spartanly displayed from the ceilings so high up the shadows became a species of inanimatecy all their own.

It was dark and what light there was helped cast shadows across them in the jumper’s practically ghostly-bright lit interior through the slowly travelling vessel’s windscreen. And the fact that they were passing by empty stretch of metal, grated and railed gangway after empty stretch of metal, grated and railed gangway didn’t help dissuade the distinct feeling of ‘ghost town’ that kept crawling over their skins. Even emptiness in a hiveship, in anything they’ve encountered that was at one point in time controlled by the enemy, was a bad thing. It only led to one question: why wasn’t anyone here?

The shadows glide over them. Triggering images of the sound of ominous music in the back of Kenmore’s mind. Like long odd notes being drawn down violins, mimicking the slither of snakes; they’d start out high-pitched in the sudden appearance of the darkness on the jumper’s front like the sudden navigating lunge of the stealthily stalking head of the snake then the sudden note would writhingly descend down it’s scale slowly like the rest of the snake’s body following it’s head’s lead, just flowing and sashaying behind it… the shadows.

The muscles at the base of Kenmore’s neck prickle. Tighten. Despite herself, she sits up a little straighter in her seat. Just slightly, but it was enough to throw her own mind off. She had intended to remain still, the whole thing was suspicious, shady enough as it is without her mind giving into it. She shouldn’t have done it. The Goa’uld liked manipulation, turned it into an art form and mode of operation that worked galatically well for them for over five thousand years until the Tau’ri figured out how to use their Stargate and Apophis made the dumb mistake of coming to Earth and taking a soldier from the SGC and killing a few others while he was at it. Kenmore’s lips tighten and the corners turn up just a hair, guess the Goa’uld learned the SGC’s military motto the hard way: We never leave a man behind.

Another shadow slithers across her face bringing her mind back. She spots the movement just inside her line of vision at the corner of her eye. With an exaggeratedly gentle movement, Jacob points to the not-too-distantly far end wall, resplendent in its two forward walls and third background wall between them of gold and bordered with panels of polished granite, bearing the colors of lilac and gold, lined with finely cut gray stone. Its bottom level is clear and large and open… but heavily covered in the deep shadows. Kenmore stiffly nods a couple of times and course corrects the slow moving puddle jumper’s path to the specified ‘parking spot’.

*                      *                      *

They, the Atlantis team and Kenmore armed with their usual guns and Carter armed with a zat gun, file out of the cloaked jumper alert, slow, aimed, and ready. They look around the bay. Kenmore looks up where the gliders normally dangle from the ceiling and hang beside and about eight feet above the gangways, waiting for their pilots and the call for their use.

“There’s no one here.” In the silence, Ronon’s low voice sounded like a surge of thunder rolling across the room and bouncing off its distant walls. It was disconcerting to him to sound so loud when he had definitely not meant to; Ronon always prided himself on the maintenance of his stealth, this didn’t prove that.

“That isn’t unusual if an assembly has been called.” Even Jacob’s far lighter voice echoed in the combination of silence and expanse, which didn’t make Ronon feel as self-conscious about his mess up as he had been. If someone so used to these places’, like this old man was, voice echoed, then Ronon’s didn’t seem to come across as such a glaring underestimation of this new enemy environment.

“Or the alert has been given,” Kenmore says quietly enough that her voice doesn’t seem to echo as much as the men’s had while she’s still staring up at the ceiling, “There aren’t any gliders.”

Everyone looks up at the dozens of empty ceiling clamps. Some actually catching the stark hazy shafts of light that streamed down from the ceiling. Others lost to the oceans of shadows, but judging by the spacing of their illuminated brethren, were there. And all of them hauntingly empty.

Jacob looks back down ahead of them again.

“We need to get to the control room,” Selmak says. Even though the Tok’ra elder always sounded exceedingly serious, there’s such a cacophony of foreboding in his voice that makes everyone on John’s team grip their P-90s, or Beretta in Rodney’s case, just a little bit tighter.

The group moves forward again to a smooth panel of gray stone wall, still baring the sweeping tool marks of the blade that had cut and honed it, crosscut by three semi-circular lines of gold and recessed back in between two gold panels resplendent in dozens of columns of raised hieroglyphics. It was amazing how in dense shadow the golden panels still managed to twinkle brightly enough to draw people to their burnished light. To draw the followers to their God, Kenmore wanted to snort. Instead she settled for glancing almost insanely from side to side. Team Atlantis might be good against the Wraith, but the Goa’uld are not Wraith. As cartoonish as they may come across as enemies in their hosts, that was the hosts. Goa’uld in their true, host-free form, that was where the spooky as hell factor came into play with them.

Jacob Carter steps up to the left panel, looking over the glyphs while the others assume a guarding semi-circle behind his back. Lieutenant Kenmore wasn’t the only one searching the shadows, so were Ronon Dex and Teyla Emmagan. Yes, the Goa’uld were not Wraith and, yes, this is not a hivehsip, but if the Wraith were here, Goa’uld or not, the shadows were their friends. And the Wraith get along with inanimate friends real well.

“So who does the ship belong to,” Kenmore asks, a few feet away from Ronon’s right side.

“I don’t know,” Jacob answers, “The door control has been blasted.”

“Even zatted, you should still be able to read the symbol.”

“That’s what I mean…”

Judging by the way he trailed off, Kenmore looks back and Jacob steps away from the paneling to reveal a charred hole in the midst of all the columns of symbols indicating where the door mechanism should have been.

“The button’s been destroyed,” he tells her.

Everyone turns around to stare at the charred hole. Rodney steps forward and examines it.

“Was it Wraith weaponry,” Teyla asks, there was the slightest hint of fear and urgency in her voice. She had never before heard of the Wraith doing anything like this, but perhaps up against a new foe, the Wraith could have felt the need to be… creative in their endeavors to dominate this ship full of humans, alien as they may be.

Rodney shakes his head, “I can’t tell.” Even though those weapons were meant to stun, even Kenmore had proven that enough juice built up in one of the small pistols could be enough to generate a massive kill blast when she assassinated Shiana. It was possible that the Wraith utilized the same technique here. There wasn’t much left of the door mechanism. Nothing he could work with at least.

“I think it’s safe to say we’re running out of time,” Sheppard pipes up after watching a moment of Rodney’s fidgeting indecisiveness.

Selmak nods, “Agreed. There are more doors just above us on the gangways. I may be able to break into the interior of the ship from one of them.”

Sheppard nods and the group moves off from the door.

*                      *                      *

After finally managing to jerry-rig the wiring behind the door mechanism—again it had been blasted to a scorch mark—by Rodney, they finally managed to get enough juice running to the doors from Rodney’s computer tablet to be able to pry them apart with Ronon, Sheppard, Kenmore, and Jacob’s help with Teyla watching their butts, the empty gangways ghostly lit disturbed her, and Rodney making sure the juice kept running. The single golden semi-circle line etched into the cut stone of the door from its top left corner to its bottom right corner split open with the second golden semi-circular line underlining a small portion of the top of the door splitting from the two lower sections and disappearing into the top of the door’s golden frame as the lower sections disappeared into their mutual sides of said frame at the same time. Ronon watched it open as did Teyla; she willing to chance a glance back at her teammates, Lieutenant Kenmore, and General Carter in case she needed to fire through the opening door at a previously unknown attacker. It was so curious, she had never before seen a door open in such an ornate way. It was so… elegant. Ronon, however, stared through the widening gap at something he had never before encountered in his home galaxy. The nearest he could think of was Atlantis, but even then, the legendary, practically mythological, Lost City of the Ancestors seemed too distant and was a rather pale comparison.

The door’s triple sections finally receded totally revealing a ship’s interior that was more palace than ship. The floor was a solid deep black, as black as the void of space beyond this ship’s hull, and it’s was so lacquered that every fraction of the blackness shined like obsidian in sunlight. It was so polished Ronon could see not their shadows, but the reflections of two of his friends and the general and Kenmore, minimal as they were, on the ground instead. That didn’t make him feel any more comfortable here; any enemy could actually see them coming ahead of time. That was bad. The wall directly opposite them was tall, angling towards them a handful of degrees, and was broken into segments of seven-foot wide panels of solid gold, like the ones beside the door they’d just opened, and each segment was bordered on both of its sides with columns embedded in the wall. Each column was made of the same black stone as the floor but they were not lacquered like the floor was. Just dark and devoid of detail like the void. And set on top of the unyielding, unbetraying black were methodically cut four-inch wide bands of more solid gold. Each band had further raised geometric shapes cut into them making them look like miniature steps of what his Earth friends and many of the more scientific people of Atlantis called ‘ziggurats’, Ronon just called them temples.

It was not dark on the other side of the door. There were recessed overhead lights that spotlighted the area of black wall on either side of the stretch of decorated paneled wall. So every facet of gold shone and glittered at him. Atlantis was the most ornate place he had every encountered, ever set foot in, and even then the city’s beauty was still functional. Nothing without means. Her stained glass windows actually helped keep people out of view except for the clear parts at their center which made it defensible, pretty but defensible. This… this was just blatant glutinous opulence. Over-the-top extravagance for the sake of over-the-top extravagance.

…And that’s just the walls.

Gently, Ronon leaned in ever so slightly and lifted his eyes upward. The gold and black columns went up to the tall ceilings where they turned into buttresses and, even then, they angled a handful of degrees upward to end in the same columns up above on the wall Ronon was now peeking out of. The one good thing Ronon could see about these things, which showed him that the people who built and used these ships were apparently as glutinous in their greed for power as they were in their greed of luxury, was that each column came out from their walls far enough to fit a person hiding beside it. Even Rodney’s and Kenmore’s not exactly as fit as the rest of the team’s frame would have more than enough coverage by one of these things… But still, Whoever these Goa’uld were, they’re ridiculous.

Instantly taking up their weapons, their eyes never leaving the sight of the corridor beyond them, Carter and Kenmore look across from them. Each staring up the particular stretch of corridor opposite them. Then they take a single quarter of a step forward, the tips of their shoes sliding into the corridor, and angle their heads to view the stretch of corridors that would be behind them when they moved out into it. Either way is clear.

Swiftly Jacob and Kenmore slip out of the doorway, into the corridor, and plaster their sides against the wall they’d just cracked open. Kenmore defending the left of the door, Carter guarding the right, both guarding each other’s backs. It was a fluid coordinated movement of military prowess that Ronon actually admired the precision of. Normally he didn’t see the Lieutenant work so well with others. So exactly what her training was supposed to convey on every mission she went on, but had yet to show itself to him on any mission she’d been on with him so far. It was getting to the point where Ronon was starting to consider skipping both Sheppard and Woolsey and go straight to the SGC to ask if this little brat had any actual team training whatsoever… and if not, then why the hell not… and what exactly did the SGC think it was doing sending an ineffective soldier to such a critical front? Let alone ordering her put on the top team. Who did these people think they were bringing her here? But this…

After a full ten seconds of silence all around them and nothing shifting in their line of vision, Jacob snaps a turn on his heels and sprints across the plenty-of-room-for-three-people-wide hallway. Taking up defensive position with his zat—Ronon still wasn’t sure he’d ever get used to saying that word, it just sounded ridiculous and funny, but not in a good way, that a lot of other words the people from Earth came up with—behind the ample cover of the column directly across from the one Kenmore installed herself behind. There was another pause…

Without looking back, the two old-hat SGC soldiers curtly nod their heads a single time. Sheppard immediately slips out into the corridor followed by Rodney then Ronon and lastly Teyla.

The three pieces of the hangar bay door slide back shut, sealing them in and looking as though none of them had come through there in the first place. Ronon approved of the evidently fortress-option this flying palace provided.

*                      *                      *

Kenmore, Ronon, and Sheppard move stealthily down the left side of the corridor as Teyla, Rodney, and Carter walk parallel on the right side of the corridor. Sheppard and Carter both take care to walk backwards, making sure the group’s rear is covered. From what, they didn’t know; it wasn’t like anything was here, which hadn’t taken them long to find out. About thirty yards into the corridor outside the hangar bay, they hadn’t discovered any bodies. Not even signs that there had been bodies. It had all rendered them more than a little spooked. Even Wraith left husks behind of their victims. But no, nothing. Just more blown to bits door mechanisms on every door they came across, which were many. It seemed that about every ten feet had a hidden alcove that harbored a door behind a group of three columns. Which was good, even better cover than just the columns provided. Actually everybody was pretty much loving the place for being able to storm it while remaining perpetually hidden the entire time they’d been here already. More than once every single member of team Atlantis felt a pang of regret that Wraith hiveships weren’t as invader friendly as Goa’uld motherships seemed to be, and following those pangs were moments of extreme relief that as civil war prone as Wraith were towards each other, they were never as vindictive towards each other as warranting their ships to reflect that in-fighting. Obviously the same could not be said of the Goa’uld. But… the bodies…

Where were the bodies? Where was anybody, dead or not?

So far each and every one of the gold-covered walled and lacquered black floored and ceilinged corridors were empty, this was their third one. Spic and span, free and clear empty. After the clearing through the second empty corridor though, they’d just abandoned their method of hiding behind the columns or in the alcoves and just stalked down the hallways out in the open. In truth, it had freed them up to notice more things.

“There are so many symbols everywhere,” Teyla breathes. She had never before encountered anything like this. She remembered the caves of her people that Kenmore had used to discover an Asgard outpost. The walls had been covered in carved murals and painted symbols, but nothing as organized… or as elegant as this.

“It’s Ancient Egyptian—well, we thought it was Ancient Egyptian. It’s actually Goa’uld,” Kenmore tells her, “Their written language was composed of collections of symbols. I wouldn’t be surprised if the walls were covered with tales of this ship’s glorious god.”

“’God’,” Teyla asks.

“Yeah, the Goa’uld like to think they’re gods. They use their technology to fool less advanced worlds into believing they’re gods and enslaving those worlds into worshipping them. One Goa’uld, named Ra, took up residence on Earth at one point in time and established the culture we came to know as Ancient Egyptian.”

“But Earth is not enslaved,” Teyla pointed out.

“You’re right. Ra left to enslave other worlds and when he did, his slaves on Earth overthrew the contingent of Jaffa he’d left behind and they buried the Stargate so he couldn’t come back that way. Centuries later, we uncovered it and went to one of the other worlds he enslaved. And Ra came back to it while we were there.”

Kenmore lifts her hand, calling for a stop as the corridor begins to turn. She motions the team forward even more slowly and guardedly than before. Just like they had done all the other times they came to a bend in the hallways in this place.

“What happened,” Teyla whispers. She always enjoyed a good story especially ones about enslaved peoples gaining their freedom and keeping it.

“We led a revolt there, well the original first SG team did, and nuked Ra and his mothership,” Kenmore whispered back then a smile tugged and lifted the right corner of her mouth, “Right in his face.”

Teyla nods with a smile on her face. Like she said, she always did enjoy a good story about enslaved peoples gaining their freedom.

The team cautiously rounds the corner and discovers yet another empty corridor. Surprise, surprise; well, someone would have said that had not the feeling of creepiness intensified at the sight of yet another thoroughly barren hallway. They repeat their stealth and continue down the corridor. A few steps ahead of Kenmore, only about four feet into the hallway anyway, a small wormlike creature crawls from underneath the lip of the left wall and out into the open corridor. Kenmore stops the team and untenses.

“It’s a symbiote,” Kenmore says. And it’s clear that was the last thing she had been expecting to see here. A Jaffa carrying a symbiote in his stomach pouch, yes; the big Goa’uld baddy themselves with the symbiote already embedded in their brains, maybe. But just the symbiote by itself slithering around… no.

“That is a Goa’uld,” Teyla asks beside her. Clearly underwhelmed and perhaps more than a little bit confused. How could something so small, so… innocuous as a little longer than two-feet long pink worm, despite the four fangs, small and rounded and rather ineffective looking as they were, at its head and the short spiny fin on its back and both of its sides, be perceived as such a great threat as the Wraith? Even the creature’s two black eyes, that looked more like small beads to Teyla, failed to impress upon her any idea of threat.

Kenmore nods, still confused herself at the sight. Although not for exactly the same reasons. It was just… symbiotes don’t do this.

The symbiote urges itself towards the Lieutenant, small timid movements that seemed to be taking a lot of the creature’s energy with it, squeaking at her as though it were pleading to her in agony. She steps toward it. Suddenly it goes into tortured convulsions, screaming at Kenmore. Shrill and piercing in more ways than one. She rushes towards it. Horrified.

“Stop!”

Abruptly the symbiote stops squealing and convulsing. Kenmore stops. Quickly the symbiote jumps up in the air at her face like a coiled snake releasing its strike. Knowing their accuracy when survival is the desperate motivation, Kenmore has no choice but to fire at the creature. She gently pulls off a single shot from her P-90. Blowing away the symbiote’s head in a ragged spray of blood and matter. The rest of the worm body falls to the floor in front of her.

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Episode Seven- Home Again, Part 1- Chapter One

(To everyone, I’m sorry this didn’t get out on Friday like usual.  Work is ramping up on being crazy, ’tis the season.)

Chapter One

At the triggered memory, Ronon draws his weapon without hesitation and aims it right between Jacob Carter’s eyes. His thumb immediately flicking it’s powercell on. It’s setting the shining red light of ‘kill.’ Kenmore’s head immediately snaps back to Ronon. Her face one of horror. Woolsey glances at Sheppard, the ‘I told you so’ frown all too clearly spread across his lips, and Sheppard shrugs in return. All right, so Woolsey had a point, maybe they really did need to work on their welcome wagon technique. Kenmore turns around and flings out her arms, not hesitating a moment to put herself in between the gun and Carter.

“Hey, hey, hey.”

“Get away from him,” Ronon growls at her. It wasn’t like him to say anything even remotely protective of her or to her, but it’s just that he doesn’t like any enemies of Atlantis… and he prefers clear shots in close quarters when he can get them. Why waste the ammo.

“He’s a friend,” Kenmore defends.

“He’s a Goa’uld,” Ronon attacks.

“I am not a Goa’uld,” Selmak and Kenmore snap at him at the same time, although Kenmore said ‘He is’ instead of ‘I am’…

“Then what are you,” the Satedan demands.

“I am Tok’ra,” the alien behind Kenmore tells him firmly.

“Yeah, I remember hearing about your people back at the SGC,” Rodney says nonchalantly, as if he could care less about what was going on in front of him—all these Tok’ra/Goa’uld people sounded alike anyways —then he finally bothers to look up from his always only really so engrossingly important to him work and takes in an eyeful of the Tok’ra dignitary that had come to visit them. “Oh,” he says suddenly aware.

Teyla, tense and alert but restrained as always until required to be otherwise, glances at him; the tone of his voice indicated he had some unknown knowledge, what did he know? Woolsey takes this opportunity to jump in before one of the more reckless members of his top team could pull the trigger.

“Yes, the Tok’ra have been our allies for years against the Goa’uld in the Milky Way Galaxy.”

Ronon looks to Sheppard, Sheppard nods, and Ronon reluctantly lowers his gun. Kenmore is still horrified at the greeting for one of her dearest friends.

“Yeah,” she snaps, “and this is Major General Jacob Carter, Colonel Samantha Carter’s father…,” she trails off expectantly. As in take the friggin’ hint and show some respect…

Rodney and Teyla untense. Rodney glad that he didn’t have to be the one to reveal that particular bit of information; he wasn’t sure how Ronon would have reacted, the genius scientist’s mind did trail to the image of Ronon turning and shooting Rodney as the messenger of news the Satedan didn’t particularly want to hear. God, he’s been so pissy since Amelia left. And Teyla was relieved at finally having verification, in her mind, that this new arrival was indeed friendly to them. She found it hard to believe—indeed she could not believe that Samantha Carter would have a father who would pose any threat to any of his daughter’s interests be they past or present. Jacob Carter, however, gladly leans forward, his smile so bright and rather paternal to all of them, and reaches out to shake Rodney’s hand and then Teyla’s. The Athosian leader returns his smile with just as genuine and as bright a one of warm greeting of her own. In truth… she sensed no ill will from him. Ronon remains stony. And wisely their visitor makes no offer of greeting to him.

“…and his Tok’ra symbiote, Selmak, the eldest of her people,” Kenmore finishes.

Carter’s eyes flash again, Ronon shifts leery and uncomfortably at the sight again and leery and uncomfortable at not being able to do anything about it, and all Selmak does is bow her—Jacob’s—head in a suitable and formal greeting in silence.

“Her,” Rodney quirks his head, “It’s female?”

“We Tok’ra have neither gender, but I do identify with the feminine most often,” Selmak answered.

“Tok’ra,” Teyla asks, saying the word peculiarly. She had heard it spoken before when she had been taken to Earth along with the rest of her team in order to combat a Wraith threat in the DNA of humans on that planet, but otherwise, she had never had cause to say it or even try to say it herself. There was no need to in Atlantis. And her fellow Earth members of the Expedition very rarely said it.

“They’re the same race as the Goa’uld,” Rodney answered, “except, well, the Tok’ra are good guys and the Goa’uld are bad guys.”

“Kind of, they’re a sister race, but yeah,” Kenmore confirms, even though that really wasn’t the way she would have described it and she knew Jacob definitely wouldn’t have described it that way either… Gees, Selmak must be riled like hell in there, “The Goa’uld’s relationship with their host is parasitic whereas the Tok’ra’s relationship with their host is truly symbiotic.”

“How so,” Teyla asks. This was truly curious and fascinating. She had never before encountered a race such as this. Two beings inhabiting the same body to the mutual satisfaction of both?

“Our hosts are willing. They are all sorts of inhabitants from many worlds in the Milky Way Galaxy. Some are people suffering from diseases that their civilizations cannot cure. In Jacob and I’s case, my previous host, a woman named Saroosh, was dying from old age. Even with having a symbiote inside of them, the human body can only go for so long,” the Tok’ra took a moment’s pause and Teyla could see the alien entity inside of him as well as Jacob Carter feel the need to take a moment to feel the pain and loss of a dear one, the Athosian knew that need well and maintained a respectful silence; quickly though, Selmak recovered and continued her explanation of her people to Teyla, “I could no longer heal her body and Jacob was in the late, for his people irreversible, stages of cancer. So he agreed to become my new host, I healed him, and we have been together for years now.”

Teyla nods. For a moment her mind lingers on the ramifications of such a relationship for her people and all the other people of the Pegasus Galaxy. The unleashing of the Hoffan plague into the galaxy had cost all so much; if the Tok’ra could heal the plague… Perhaps Stargate Command and the IOA, with Mister Woolsey’s help, could find it in their capabilities to allow for Teyla to open negotiations with these Tok’ra on behalf of her people and those of the Pegasus Galaxy. It would be a great benefit to both concerned parties. A great trading opportunity… many people in this galaxy would gladly fight all those who would enslave humanity whether that enslavement occurred here in their own galaxy or in another…  Or perhaps Teyla could endeavor to open negotiations herself during General Carter and Selmak’s stay here in Atlantis…

“Even died together,” Kenmore says solemnly to the floor then looks over at her friend. He returns the sentiment. There’s a moment of an unspoken exchange between their eyes.

Teyla sees it and her eyebrows furrow. She did not understand. And, judging by the privacy of the exchange and the knowledge of something so deep, so shared, perhaps she was not meant to. It was not unheard of for the dead to come back, Ronon had done it, Carson, Rodney, but still…

“And what do the Goa’uld do,” Ronon interrupts hostilely. He still didn’t like this. Every part of his mind and body screamed that this was another trap, another betrayal, another of Atlantis’ bad ideas that they would all end up ultimately paying the price for later on—how later, that would be up to how bad the idea was.

“They enslave people. They take hosts. They don’t heal them, they imprison them. There’s nothing symbiotic about it,” Kenmore’s vehement.

She looks at all of them. “Gees, don’t any of you people talk to each other?” She finally exclaims. She shouldn’t have had to explain all this crap to them. Even she, although not intending to stay here on that first day had at least read the damn crash course file she’d been given on the Wraith. And not a single one of these guys in six years could pick up so much as a handy-dandy pamphlet on the difference between a Tok’ra and a friggin’ Goa’uld? What the hell?!

Ronon ignores Kenmore’s outburst.

“What are you doing here,” he demands. Although with his antagonistic attitude, it comes out as more of the heart of an interrogation than a question.

Without having to bob his head again, Selmak took over the explanation, “We’ve received some disturbing reports that a Goa’uld mothership is heading towards the Pegasus Galaxy.”

Kenmore suddenly grabs Carter’s arm. For the first time, the team sees blatant panic on her face as she looks her friend dead in the eyes.

“Where is it?”

“In the space between our two galaxies,” Selmak tells her.

Kenmore doesn’t hesitate to start running for the corridor back behind Ronon. To the ‘locker’ rooms where their gear was normally kept.

“Lieutenant,” Woolsey shouts after her.

Kenmore stops in her tracks and looks back at all of them.

“Atlantis doesn’t have the capacity to stave off an attack from a mothership. I’ve seen the city’s weapons systems, she can’t do it,” she immediately tells them.

John stares at her. It wasn’t like her to feel like she had to explain herself, let alone her actions, to them. To any of them… especially Woolsey. Kenmore’s panic is so acute that it set Teyla’s entire body tensing anew, Rodney’s eyes bugging out of his head—of course that could actually be due to more of what the Tok’ra just told them than Kenmore’s reaction—and Ronon—well, Ronon hadn’t actually reacted in any way—but still. Not for the first time today, John feels like asking himself what the hell were they all facing here.

“He has a ship,” John offers instead.

Kenmore stares at Carter intently, “Where?”

*                      *                      *

Kenmore checks a stack of boxes, just some spare munitions and more major artillery, in the back of Puddle Jumper One as Rodney double-checks some of the jumper’s systems between his computer tablet and a pulled out overhead panel in the jumper’s rear compartment as well. Then she walks over to the stretch of left side bench, side-stepping Teyla checking the security of the netting of the right side overhead compartment, and checks the packs of spare personal gear lying there as well. Kenmore zips one pack back up and throws it back on the cushioned bench then heads the rest of the way to the front of the jumper. Rodney angles his body and peeks at Kenmore’s back through the tangle of wires dangling between the overhead panel’s interior, its cover, and his computer tablet, and Teyla gives her some space also. As soon as the Lieutenant passes by, they throw a cautionary glance to each other before going back to their work, which was mainly to stay out of the Lieutenant’s way.

The jumper’s front compartment was in an entirely different configuration. Calling shotgun in the co-pilot’s seat sat Jacob Carter with Ronon sitting behind him, in Ronon’s usual seat, and Lieutenant Colonel John Sheppard sits in the seat behind the pilot’s seat, not his usual one and one he was definitely uncomfortable sitting in—A jumper shouldn’t look like this, not to its pilot… not to me—. The men turn their chairs around to watch Kenmore coming up to the pilot’s seat. She starts pressing some buttons on the main panel before she even begins to think of sitting down.

“Have a ship my ass,” she grumbles, practically slapping the buttons.

Sheppard winces at the sound of every harsh clacking hit. Or maybe he was just perceiving it as harsh, no one else was flinching the way he was. Of course, no one was probably feeling the way he was… she’s hitting my baby. Even in his mind, John’s thought came out as whinny as anything Rodney could produce, probably worse because it’s whining coming from John…  But… she’s hitting my baby. It had been a somewhat unanimous decision—Sheppard had voted ‘No’ but everyone else, including Ronon and Teyla had raised their hands, which was a betrayal, to a degree, that John was still having trouble forgetting—that the half-ancient that seemed to bring out the best in all of the little puddle jumper vessels should helm at least the piloting portions of this mission. General Carter, it was all hands up voting, could handle the flying of the mothership, but if the jumper needed fancy flying unlike anything that they’ve ever put it through so far or needed the small ship to reveal any tricks it might have up its engine hubs or any other place on it, then Kenmore’s DNA needed to bring that out in the little vessel as quickly and as much as she possibly could get it. But still, it’s my baby, John winces again at another slap, she’s hitting my baby.

“It’ll be arriving here with the Daedalus tomorrow,” Jacob tries to defend himself. And it sounded not like the first time he had to contend with an irate young woman who was very near and dear to him being thoroughly pissed off at him. John side-glances at him, in fact it looked like old hat to the man.

SMACK! Her hand slapped upside the back of his balding head and Kenmore finally sat down in the pilot’s seat.

John hides his almost giggling smirk at the sight of the former General’s head popping forward a few degrees and the man’s own smile at the apparently likewise not exactly unfamiliar gesture coming from a ticked young woman who was very near and dear to him.

“Tomorrow is not good enough. You know how much ground a mothership can cover when she’s on a mission,” Kenmore went on.

“How much,” Ronon asked, his eyes focused on the back of the Tok’ra’s head.

Although he was trying very hard to hide it, the fact that the General took the insubordinate hit so well, so humorously actually, was something he really did find curious. He’d hoped no officer in Atlantis, he swiftly side-glances at Sheppard, especially Sheppard, would take that crap from a subordinate.

Ronon remembered one time, just the once, during his officers training back on Sateda. He had been sitting on the edge of the left side of his bunk bed. Even now Ronon could remember the feel of the itch of the scratchy beige-colored blanket that lay over the softer, but still not exactly lush, crisply white bed linens underneath every time the side of his wrists brush across the itchy fabric as he sat there unlacing his boots. All around him in the massive barracks that seemed almost as big as the warehouses around the city—well, the barracks were just as long and as wide as any of the warehouses, but they definitely weren’t as tall; the barracks were about two stories tall and the ceiling’s sides were rounded off making the roof look like half a cylinder—other soldiers/officers-in-training were hanging around. Some were like Ronon, newly returned from field exercises and only had a limited to get their sweaty bodies cooled down and into fresh clean clothes in order to head off to their officer classes next. Others were back from their round of said classes and were getting into their own exercise clothes. And still others had neither classes nor exercises and were just hanging around talking and joking with others like them. Ronon had just managed to unlace and yank one dirt and grass dipped boot off his foot when Kell walked into the barracks amid the cheers of all present including Ronon, who had hooted and clapped his hands over his head with the biggest grin of pride on his face—That is my commanding officer, my taskmaster, he’d been thinking then—and Kell had taken it all with a jovial laugh and waving off of the cheering and cracking a few jokes of his own with some of the men and women present. Then one officer-to-be, young and relatively new to life in the barracks let alone the life of the process to becoming an officer—he’d only been part of the unit, had only joined about four months ago—, but still some things were ingrained into your skull from the very split of a heartbeat you stepped foot into training, he cracked off a joke to Kell, which wasn’t a problem, then slapped Kell on the back of the superior man’s shoulder… which was a problem. No subordinate ever, EVER, physical strikes a superior in any way. Playing. No. Not playing. Definitely No. All the happiness in the room immediately died. The kid had been absolutely clueless to it. Still smiling. Still keeping up the last huffs of his laughter when Kell grab the guy’s wrist, bent the kid over and around, and then yank, snapping the kid’s wrist like a twig. The once happy officer-to-be screamed in pain, howling and groveling for mercy on his knees, but Kell refused to let go of him. Kell made the youth beg for forgiveness and then apologize for his behavior before releasing him to stagger off—no one would dare stain their own personal honors by helping someone like him—to the infirmary. Once the wrist had been treated and healed, Kell followed through with the traditional punishment for such a violation of the rules: the kid was taken out into the unit square, stripped of his shirt, and lashed till the offended superior felt the offense had been suitably appeased. For Kell that meant until the kid’s back was practically raw with bloody striations and was nearly dead from the pain alone before injury…  Kell… the traitor, Ronon eyed the back of the Tok’ra’s head again; perhaps a superior officer that could take a hit like that, perhaps it said something about the man, the general, that he can accept a ribbing from a subordinate and still maintain their loyalty.

Then Ronon’s eyes slip to Kenmore, then again perhaps you didn’t want to maintain the loyalty of someone like that…

“It can shorten a year’s travel to a few hours with one hyperjump,” she answered him without looking back at him.

Sheppard sits up as Teyla walks up from the back of the jumper.

“How much,” she gasps. To her mind, that was the equivalent of Atlantis’ notorious ‘super’ faster than light travel jump the city made in order to save its mother world of Earth from the surprise and quite possibly devastating attack of a super-sized Wraith hiveship more than a year ago.

An alert goes off. Kenmore ignores Teyla’s shock and keeps pressing buttons. This time, to Sheppard’s relief, much gentler. Like normal actually. Firmly, perhaps a little too firmly, but… normal.

“We’re coming up on the mothership,” Kenmore announces.

Sheppard and Ronon lean forward as Teyla steps up between them and Rodney walks into the front compartment with just as much curiosity as his teammates have. Neither of them have ever seen a Goa’uld mothership before. Rodney had seen pictures, Sheppard, he, and Teyla had read about them in past SGC reports, but none of them had ever actually seen one in person before. Kenmore points at a point in the black of space.

“There it is.”

The Atlantis team lean further forward, squinting. They stare at a semi-golden speck outside the jumper’s viewport. That’s it? When will these people ever learn about blowing these things out of proportion especially when it came to threat assessments, Ronon shrugs and sits back in his seat. They always made the little things a lot more hostile than they actually were and made the great big hostile things in their face, like their Michael experiment… or Todd, into these sweet little innocent things that they couldn’t possibly imagine hurting anybody else let alone them.

“It doesn’t look as big as a hiveship,” he scoffs.

“It doesn’t have to be,” Jacob tells him with a look, “Not all of the nastiest surprises come in the biggest packages.”

Ronon looks away, off to his right at a piece of jumper paneling. Okay, so the old glowing-eyes, snake guy had a point.

Carter pushes some buttons on the panel in front of him. Kenmore glances over at him.

“How are ya’ doing over there?”

“It is… different,” Selmak speaks up, “This ship is very impressive.”

“Thanks,” Sheppard takes the compliment on behalf of his treasured craft… or his ‘second home’ as he sometimes liked to call it in private when no one else was around. No need to go around letting everybody know how sentimental he’s become about these little ships especially his favorite one of them. Kenmore doesn’t acknowledge the compliment in any way.

Selmak nods her own acceptance of Sheppard’s gratitude as he presses a few more buttons.

Then Sheppard’s eyes trail over to Kenmore. It still floored him that Kenmore had somehow managed to get the jumper to let a non-Ancient DNA possessing person use the jumper’s controls to the extent that General Carter is. There was a little twinge in John’s chest again, in his heart. Just like there had been when the General first pressed a button on the console in front of him and the jumper readily answered his call. It was as though the jumper itself was betraying John too, making a comment on his flying capabilities… or who it preferred to pilot it.

“Sending her in,” Jacob announces.

And that was another thing John was going to have to get used to here pretty quick. It was nice on first meeting that General Carter/Selmak bowed his head to indicate when there was a transition in control of the voice and body and mind between symbiote and host. But after that short initiation, apparently neither one particularly felt like they had to do that anymore. They just transitioned without the slightest heads-up, or in their case it was more like heads-down-then-back-up-again, that they were doing it.

“Wait,” Kenmore suddenly speaks up.

Carter’s hand freezes just above the controls. Everyone looks over at Kenmore. She was staring out the viewport just like they all had been, but there was something different in her eyes… something different in her entire demeanor. Like she was waiting for something.

“What,” Sheppard asks, putting a hand on the back of her chair and inching up closer to it while eyeing her.

“There’s something wrong here.” Her eyes dart slightly from side to side analyzing the black void.

Ronon sits up, “What is it?”

“Where are the death gliders?”

“What,” Rodney asks.

“We’re well within sensor range of the mothership. That thing should have launched dozens of gliders by now. So… where are the gliders?”

The group looks out the viewport. There’s nothing out there, but space, them, and the other ship.

“I don’t like it,” Kenmore says.

“Are we not still far away,” Teyla offers, “perhaps their sensors are not as far reaching as you suspect?”

“I don’t suspect, I know. They could detect an Earth approach from the other side of Saturn.”

“What,” Teyla asks. She didn’t understand the Lieutenant’s comparison.

“They’ve got a long range,” Sheppard amended for his teammate.

Teyla nods at him.

Rodney leans in further still, kind of infringing on Teyla’s personal space. She looks over at him, hoping her polite but warning expression would retract him, but he is too busy trying to analyze every part of space in front of them looking for those gliders Lieutenant Kenmore had mentioned.

“Maybe they’ve used them already,” he says.

“Against what,” Sheppard asks. What could possibly be out this far besides them?

“The Wraith,” Rodney answers, “They’ve come out this far before.”

John was about to call him out on the fact that that one time had been because they had stupidly allowed the Wraith to get a hold of the coordinates to Earth, Not in fact because the Wraith just came out here of their own accord. And the second time was because someone had sent the Wraith, i.e., the Superhive, a massively strong transmission containing the same information. There again, Not because the Wraith just naturally come out this far.

“That would be bad,” Kenmore says.

“Why,” Sheppard asks her, staring at the back of her head in front of him again.

“Could you imagine a Goa’uld in the head of a Wraith?”

He couldn’t. And neither could Rodney…

“Can they even do that,” Rodney asks.

“They can try. It might prove to be a disaster, but the Goa’uld would try anything for the power over another species. A new harvesting ground of hosts,” Selmak informs them matter-of-factly.

“That doesn’t sound so bad,” Ronon says, “The Wraith have been harvesting people for years. Sounds like the Goa’uld would be giving them a taste of their own medicine. I’m fine with that.”

“Or the Wraith could have eaten them,” Rodney offers, “That could explain why the ship is dead in the water. How many want to bet that if the Wraith got on board that ship, that not a single Jaffa or the head hancho themselves didn’t send a warning back to the other Goa’uld using one of those long distance communication beacons hooked up to its Stargate?”

“’Its stargate’,” Teyla repeats astounded.

Kenmore looks back at her, “Yeah, a Goa’uld mothership comes equipped with her very own Stargate scavenged from a planet that no longer needs theirs.”

“Sort of like what we did to build the Gate bridge.” Rodney adds, still looking for any signs of those elusive gliders in the solid black of the between galaxies void.

“The Gate what?” Kenmore looks at him like he’s suddenly gone insane or developed a truly abrupt case of bad B.O.

Rodney waves her off.

“We had to destroy the Midway station because the Wraith used it to get to Earth,” Ronon reminded Rodney while simultaneously informing Kenmore.

Kenmore gawks at him, “What? You mean you were the dumbasses responsible for that?”

“If the Wraith have made it onto that ship, then we must go there and destroy it,” Teyla states.

“I agree sister,” Kenmore makes a second sortof perturbed glance at Ronon and Rodney—So that’s how those damn things got into Cheyenne Mountain—before nodding in agreement with Teyla’s call for action, then turns her attention to the jumper’s piloting console, “but I’m going to take her in under cloak.”

Jacob stares at her.

“This thing has cloak,” he says.

Kenmore nods as she leans forward and starts making the preparations. He looks back down at his own panel of controls in front of him.

“Even more impressive,” Selmak says.

*                      *                      *

The jumper starts to glide towards the Goa’uld mothership in the distance and vanishes within a few seconds as the jumper activates its cloak.

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Episode Seven- Home Again, Part 1- Prologue

Prologue

It was never a good thing to start the day off in Richard Woolsey’s office. Getting called into Atlantis’ permanent expedition leader’s office was like getting called to the principal’s office. Richard Woolsey is finishing gathering up some loose papers on the slick and shiny glass top of his battleship gray desk and shuffling them into neat orderly stacks in his hands as Lieutenant Colonel John Sheppard looks on from his comfortable, horseshoe-shaped, semi-suede, thunder cloud purple seat opposite Woolsey’s desk.

“It is very important that Atlantis be presentable,” Woolsey was telling him.

“Yeah, well we’ll try to remember to chew with our mouths closed and not scratch ourselves during dinner.”

Woolsey pauses, shooting Sheppard a very unamused look—Whaaat, it’s not like we actually do those things. Wait, does Woolsey actually think we do those things? When have we ever done those things?—then continues tiding up his remaining papers.

Sheppard swallows hard in the silence. Okay, tread lightly John.

“Look, I don’t see why we have to jump through hoops for this guy,” Sheppard continued, “Atlantis has gotten visitors from the SGC before, like yourself, and it’s always gone well.”

Woolsey takes one last moment to tidy up everything else on his desk. The duo of law books standing up and balanced between clear glass orb bookends. The eighty degree-angle of his shining chrome industrial-looking architect’s lamp stationed in the upper left corner of the desk. His thick, zip-up black notebook that went everywhere with him, stayed zipped up and laying at a gentle angle just underneath what would be the shine of the lamp’s light, if the lamp had been on. Woolsey’s Atlantis’ fancy-issued frosted laptop, that’s what made it the fancy variety rather than the regular standard-issued ones that were the normal ‘metallic’ gray, at the desk’s upper right corner on a forty-five degree-angle so that it was at a comfortable ‘professional’ looking angle for the person sitting in the big comfy, white cushioned business chair stationed behind the desk. Sheppard watched him pay hyper attention to every little detail, lining up his pencils from largest to imperceptibly smallest next to each other with an eyesight measured distance in between them. Gees, the man was even making sure his pencils were all sparkly fit for examination. Who the hell was coming—

“One of the first times I visited Atlantis, the city was invaded by Replicators who interrogated me, General O’Neill, Doctor Weir, as well as your entire team by sticking their hands through our foreheads. I do not believe it would be an understatement to say that that experience did not go well.”

“That was one time,” John began.

“Two years ago, when Atlantis was under Colonel Carter’s command, Teal’c visited the city in order to help Ronon pass the IOA’s review and instead his visit quickly descended into an armed conflict in the cafeteria and ended with an all-out brawl in one of the training rooms which, as I recall, you instigated and were even taking bets during.”

John frowned. How’d he find out about that?

“Yeah, well when you put it like that,” John tried to defend.

“When I put it like that, Colonel, it is not unfair to say that Atlantis really does need to put her best foot forward.”

Sheppard reluctantly nods, not knowing what other incidents could be sited for every defensive he would try to make, as Woolsey stands up and walks out from around his desk. His bald, average height, crisp and clean uniformed reflection cast across the glass of his framed legal degrees on the far right side wall. Sheppard stands up, fights the urge to stretch as he always did when rising from the guest chairs in this room, they really were that comfy, much more than their professional appearance let on, and follows Woolsey out of his office, across the short railed bridge to, and through Atlantis’ constantly darkened Command Center.

“I still don’t see why we have to jump through all these hoops,” John remembered Woolsey’s own IOA review, and they all passed that one with relatively flying colors, if you didn’t take into account the whole hallucination-inducing alien first contact thing going on behind the scenes. They turned out fine. Woolsey even got named Atlantis’ first and only IOA blessed and listed permanent Expedition Leader.

“Need I remind you that let alone has Atlantis’ guests not received necessarily a warm welcome, but that other visiting officers have not either,” Woolsey went on, armed with even more citations to use against John’s efforts, “Colonel Caldwell and the Daedalus received a rather frosty welcome to Atlantis, especially by Doctor Weir and yourself, as did Colonel Ellis and the Apollo.”

Sheppard rolls his eyes, leave it to Woolsey to remember that. The two men walk down the stairway that leads into the gateroom below. On the front of every step of the stairway is a glowing line of a poem of warm greeting to all travelers coming through the gate written in Ancient. There were many more incidents the Expedition Leader could bring up ranging from Woolsey’s first visit to the Lost City of the Ancients, which entailed its own mélange of Wraith antics not to mention an absolutely spectacular front row seat to how bad they were screwing up the Retrovirus Project, and then there was what when on when Woolsey reviewed Carter, like two Wraith hiveships basically on the city’s front doorstep not to mention Todd kept in the basement. Yeah, so okay, they suck at first impressions.

“Okay,” Sheppard was finally willing to agree, “so we haven’t had a real good showing yet, but Atlantis isn’t that bad.”

“Colonel, I’m not implying that Atlantis is bad. I’m just saying her track record does not reflect that and it is time that it did.”

They stop a few steps in front of the bottom of the stairs. Woolsey adjusts his uniform, pulling down on its bottom hem to get an even more tailored, crisp, and pressed look to his overall appearance, John frowned, clearly Woolsey meant to be the first incarnation of that reflection right off the bat, as the Atlantis Stargate comes to life ahead of them and casts it’s silvery-blue undulating glow upon Woolsey and Sheppard. And its pastel peacock-colored iris is activated.

“Incoming wormhole,” the Technician’s voice announces over the citywide speakers, “I.D.C confirmed.”

The iris deactivates and the person in question passes through the gate into Atlantis’ Gateroom. Woolsey, still lit by the gate’s glow, immediately steps forward with hand outstretched for a shake.

“Welcome to Atlantis.”

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Ronon Dex stands in the gateroom looking up at Woolsey’s office with his arms crossed over his chest. He can barely see into Woolsey’s office. The tall windows that make up basically the entire front of the room and its right wall aren’t blocked, but everyone inside is sitting which made it hard-seeing from two levels below no matter how much open space there was between the six-foot, four-inch tall Satedan and the place he had his sights set on. Ronon can see Sheppard’s head and, occasionally the side of his face when he turned to look next to him, but only an inch, maybe less, of the top and right side of the head of whoever their new important guest was. Sheppard seemed to be talking and gesturing at the moment though, again exposing his profile to Ronon’s view as he seemed to be addressing his remarks more directly to their unknown guest.

Ronon had never liked Woolsey’s way of doing things, but he had come to a truce with it over the course of the man’s first year as the city’s commander—that was until he’d brought Kenmore here behind all of their backs. Now… it was a very different matter—And he liked even less that Woolsey called for Sheppard to be in on a meeting that the rest of the team had not been invited to. It was just like last time, just like the day Kenmore showed up; Sheppard gets the call and only Sheppard. The rest of the team had come along only because Sheppard’d invited them along his way to Woolsey’s office. Well… Ronon was here…

As he continues to stare down the higher up office and its occupants, he wonders what other secrets that have been kept behind their backs are being currently revealed. Is this person another team member? A sixth? Is Kenmore really half-Ancient? Or was she like Ronon had always thought, still thought despite the evidence to the contrary, that this new Lieutenant Kenmore was a Wraith Queen—an enemy leader—captured behind their backs and exposed to some new version of Doctor Carson Beckett’s retrovirus that now managed to work on Wraith females? And had this other team—perhaps Lorne’s team since Kenmore seemed to be so chummy with the Major on a “past acquaintance” sort of a basis—also taken a young Wraith male hostage and exposed him to this new retrovirus and now had him walking around Atlantis posing as this Lieutenant’s son? Ronon huffed a disgruntled chuff to himself, buffeting his chest up and down and his body from side to side while still maintaining his footing in a nonchalant movement of condescension. Teyla Emmagan, leader of the refugeed Athosian people and one of Ronon’s teammates since he first came to the Lost City of the Ancestors, walks up behind him, looking at her friend then up at Woolsey’s office then back at Ronon.

“What is it,” she asks him as she comes up beside him. The teal silk with its print of forest curling vines and flower buds and blooms and black grommetted leather Athosian sleeveless vest-corset coming to a close just below the base of her throat with a twin pair of black metal flower blooms standing out in marked contrast to his simple dark brown long-sleeve Satedan shirt of crinkled silk with complimentary dark brown leather sewn over the shirt’s forearms and thin strips of the leather creating an inch border from the shirt’s wrap neckline and it’s bottom hem. Another contrast, she wears for pants what all other members of the Atlantis Expedition wear, although she is not from Earth as they are, and Ronon wears his Satedan black worn heavy canvas pants with belt and chaps made of some black reptilian hide that some of the members of Atlantis had told her bore a striking resemblance to a creature on Earth called a crocodile except for the color, his holster of black Satedan leather clinging tightly to his right thigh and hanging heavy from his waist with its burden of his large pistol.

“New arrival,” he grumbles.

And she knows that grumble. What its sound means… her eyes travel up and down his body in her own analytical way. He doesn’t look at her.

“Are they like Lieutenant Kenmore,” Teyla asks, trying very hard to keep the sigh out of her voice. But…

She peers up at Woolsey’s office too. Curious.

“Don’t know.”

His answer was short, concise, and to his point. Teyla glances at him and decides not to push him on the matter. It seemed things were unstable enough as it is. Her rich espresso eyes return upward.

The pair continue to stare up at Woolsey’s office as Doctor Rodney McKay walks up behind them eating a fluffy vanilla cake doughnut capped with a glaze of rich chocolate and looking over a document on the screen of his computer tablet balancing on his other free forearm. He looks up at them and, at seeing their attentions so intently rapt, looks up at Woolsey’s office too then back at his teammates. He slowly approaches them and takes up position standing on Ronon’s free side. And joins his friends in their ongoing vigilance of Woolsey’s office.

“Is it a man or a woman,” Teyla asks.

“Man,” Rodney answers matter-of-factly before Ronon could offer his guess.

Ronon and Teyla look over at him. McKay goes back to looking at his computer screen and takes another bite of doughnut, turning it into half a doughnut.

“You know who it is,” she asks shocked.

Ronon adjusts his stance to better interrogate his friend head-on. Perhaps this was a meeting that just the alien members of the team weren’t allowed to know about.

Rodney shrugs, “Sort of, not many women go bald like that.” He pointed out.

Oh, so that was it. Teyla and Ronon look back up into Woolsey’s office and it is true that the head of their guest is balding not unlike Richard Woolsey himself, although their guest’s hair seems to have grayed quite a few inches at its sides and ends around the back of his head and what color did remain was dark gray, maybe even black once, but now peppered with the infringing lighter graying hair.

“Like what?” Came the voice behind them.

The little group turns around to see Lieutenant Ursula Kenmore approaching them. They finish turning around in order to face her.

“Mister Woolsey has a guest and he is apparently balding,” Teyla informs her, politely.

“Good,” Kenmore retorts as she walks up to them with her hands in her pant’s pockets, “now the coward’s got company. So… who is it?”

Ronon and Teyla look over at McKay again, Kenmore follows suit.

“So who is he,” she asks him.

“Is he from the SGC,” Teyla asks him.

“Or the IOA,” Ronon asks him.

“Neither.” Sheppard’s voice comes up with the answer behind the trio of his team members.

They turn around and look at Sheppard just coming down the gateroom’s greeting stairway, following Woolsey and Atlantis’ new guest: former General, Jacob Carter. Kenmore’s face immediately beams and she runs between Ronon and McKay and straight into Carter’s open and waiting arms and equally beaming face.

“Hey kid-o,” he welcomes her happily.

John looks at him, even with eyes closed in their embrace it’s blatantly plain to see how much the General is happy to see Kenmore, to touch her, to hold her in his arms… there’s an almost paternal, grandfatherly quality to him with regards to Kenmore that John… envies. No one he’s ever known before has ever welcomed him back into their lives with the sort of vibe the General was giving off with Kenmore in his arms, Hell, at the very sight of her. Even when she hadn’t noticed them coming down the stairs, John had noticed Carter’s immediate smile when his eyes had caught sight of her, wearing her black BDU pants and her three-quarter sleeve black shirt with its somewhat plunging vee-neckline and long, naturally curly and wavy, dark brown hair flowing over her shoulders. For some strange reason, John had never thought of generals as fathers or grandfathers before, whether they were still in their uniforms or had been out of them for years or wore entirely different and new ones, like General Carter was now. A Tok’ra uniform of a brown leather shortsleeve jacket with strap and buckle closures, black and brown Milky Way alien reptile leather ‘jacket’ underneath the first with matching brown leather pants, and a brown leather belt with a second ‘belt’ made of the brown alien reptile leather sewn on top of it. Sheppard looked down at the General’s brown leather wrist cuffs with brown alien reptile tripe panels and layered brown leather boot covers and the lacing up their backs. John just never thought of them that way.

“General,” she practically squealed with one of the brown textured tripe leather shoulder panels of his outer jacket pressed against her cheek, the fabric may initially look tough but years of wear have reduced it to the feel of soft cotton against her cheek. Then she came out of their hug, but remained in his embrace, “what are you doing here?”

Immediately, Carter’s eyes close and his head dips down. His chin coming to rest for only a heartbeat on his chest. Then his face comes back up and his once closed eyes open again and flash with a glowing light that never leaves them…

“We have business here,” Selmak tells her.

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